THE SECOND SHADOW#2, chap 39 pg 43 new!! - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Lovely update andy
but last line left me confuse

Manyta felt like she was falling again for uday and his charms, she was safe in his arms
OR SHE FELT SO!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Nice update... The poison was a harmless one n given wid nt a bad intention... For me it was ok, everything is fair in love 😉 (here i mean only harmless pranks n tricks)
Update next part soon... When god has given brains n acting skills why nt put dem to some use 😉 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Hey Andy😊. Awesome update! Manyata kissed Uday😳 ... that was so unexpected , but cute! Surprising part was - she saw that it was still early ... so , she hugged Uday and slept some more😆! Uday poisoned Manyata😲! Well , he chose pesticide , which is not a lethal poison ... so , he knew exactly what he was doing. It's Uday! And in this SS - he's not bathed in milk. He is a very dark character , who will do ANYTHING to get what he wants. Currently , he wants Manyata , and his method is going to be bordering on the evil side ... we have to accept him the way he is. (Even Manyata will have to accept him with all his wickedness). And his poisoning paid off , didn't it ? He DID get to spend his entire day with her😳. (now - I'm NOT saying that what he did was RIGHT ... but that's how he's made, that's how his mind works!) Loved the update, waiting for the second part ... Thanks for the scrap😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
awesome small update andy.loved it loads.

uday want manyata to stay wid him.
for dat omg uday pooisoned manyata.
ie not d way to make her stay.
hmmm den itz mr.shark wid evil side too.
he will get wat he want by any means
den he nurses her whole day,dat was cute.

enjoyed d chappy so much.continue soon.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#95

Chapter 32.2

Manyta was still weak in the evening. Her health had not improved yet. She was having high fever too. Uday was very tensed seeing her in this condition

U: manyta, come let us go and visit a doctor.

M: no, uday, its alright, I mean I had this sort of weakness for the last one week, but its only today thst its become worse. Just don't worry

U: let me get you some hot water

M: maybe a cup of coffee would be nice

U: yes boss (he winks at her)

Uday went to the kitchen. He put the water to boil and started searching for the coffee powder, going through her shelf he found a bottle, and opened the lid to smell it "um, interesting" he emptied the contents into the sink and filled it with something similar. He prepared the coffee and gave it to manyta.

U: here you are, boss!!

M: um, it tastes good, it's better than the coffee jai makes for me

U: so does jai come here daily?

M: yes, she comes here daily, she comes in the morning before going for college, she insists on making coffee for me in the morning. She is not such a good cook too, buts she insists me to eat all what she prepares too, I eat it without complain, she gets angry if I critisises her.

U: um, interesting, he smirked

M:so I should say your first attempt in the kitchen is not bad. The coffee is just to my liking.

U: thanks boss

M: I like when you call me boss.

U: ok, so from now I will call you boss. Or should I call you princess?

Manyta chocked when she heard " princess". Uday used to call her princess. Did she really want him to call her that again?

M: (in a strained tone) call me anything but princess

U: why? I think its very cute to call you princess

M: don't call me that please, it's a personal matter. I don't want to talk about it

U: ok. Uday said showing an action of locking his lips with a lock and throwing the key away

Manyta laughed seeing his antics

M: say something!!!

Uday signaled his mouth was shut

M: enough !!! oh god

Uday just smiled.

M: oh, god!!! I will hit you with something

Uday looked at her pleading as if he was scared at the thought

M: fine I am going for bath now, you better talk when I return back

uday just nodded in a teasing manner.

*************

Uday was reading the newspaper when manyta's mobile beeped. It was a message. He opened it and saw it was from adhiraj

"hey sweety, I love you, missing you loads, see you in tomorrow"

He felt his blood boil. He quickly deleted the message. He could not resist checking her inbox too. There was about 50- 60 messages from adhiraj alone. " adhi, you are really getting on my nerves, save yourself before mr shark finishes you" uday said angrily.

He quickly kept the mobile down, and waited for manyta to come back.

************

The rest of the evening was normal, uday and manyta watched TV and in the night slept together. Manyta thought in her mind, she was just doing it like a nurse, helping him recover, it was nothing else, it cant be nothing else but then she knew she was lying.

Uday too was having difficulty in sleeping, he was cheating her, and should he tell her the truth? he wondered. Maybe tomorrow. No, it was not correct, after she has opened her mind to do.

He had other plans tomorrow, somethings needed him immediate attention

***********

Jai came as usual in the morning and was preparing her coffee. Manyta was in her room, planning what she would do with uday today, maybe she could go out with him today. She smiled at the thought. She loved this uday, he reminded her of the uday she had loved, before she knew the truth behind him.

She decided to grab some toast from the kitchen . As she entered the kitchen she was shocked beyond her senses. Uday and jai was in a very compromising position. Jai was pinned on to the kitchen wall and uday was in front of her, her hands twisted behind her back

M: jai!! What is this?

Jai looked flushed. Uday however looked angry. Manyta could not stay for long, she left the place feeling disgusted, if she had waited for a moment she would have heard the sound of a knife falling on the ground.

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Manyta was disturbed, she did not know why, was i upset seeing the scene before me? But why? I mean, I am engaged to another guy, uday too need a life, no its just because he was romancing my sister, I am just being over protective. Or was it like that? Was it because I don't like to see anyone in his hands other than me? WHAT!!! OH !!! I AM SERIOUSLY GONE MAD. Look, I am going to get married to someone. But why does that thought pain me???? Am I in love with uday?

NO, IT CANT HAPPEN, BUT WHY CANT IT HAPPEN? ALL THIS IS TOO CONFUSING

Her thoughts were broken by jai,

J: jiji , I want to tell you something, you know, I tried… I ….

Uday interrupted her, u: manyta, let me explain, what happened in the kitchen, I went there to get a glass of water, when something went into her eyes, seeing her struggle I just helped her to blow it out, it was when you came, you as usual assumed the worst, isn't it jai?

He added in a menacing voice, his eyes boring into jai with plain anger

J: ya…. Yes… jiji.. it was like that

Manyta was too much involved in her own world that she failed to notice that both of them was hididng something from her.

J: I better get going jiji, see you tomorrow

**********************

"thanks so much"

"you are not yet safe till now, I saved you for her, just remember that"

"I know, I promise"

*********************

PROMO

" you know I am not going,Take your medicines now"

" ok, for you I will, but don't leave me alone"

"I promise"

5 minutes later she returned to see a totally unconscious uday

" this should knock you out for some hours" thought manyta

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"Uday your game is up", said manyta pointing a gun toward him

Her face was composed and determined

Uday did not know what to do

**********************

"am sorry, but my behavior was totally bad the last time I met you,"

" its ok" she smiled

" you know it was my friends who told me to behave so, I am so sorry"

"I know you are not like that, so just don't worry, let us enjoy this lunch now

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That's all guys, my updates will be less frequent again as my classes are beginning on Monday. 😭

But I wont disappoint my readers, I promise to update the moment I get 35 likes😃

(I know I wont get that much😈, that is why I am demanding😈 *evil me* this gives me time to update when i want 😈he😈 he😈 he)

Otherwise I will update when I get time.😈

So guys, did you have any doubts forming in your mind😉? If yes, do tell me😳

Otherwise just enjoy the story as it is😆

Don't forget to comment too

huma12. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
perfect chapter andyyy
is jai is after manyata's life
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: huma12.

perfect chapter andyyy thnaks so much huma😳
is jai is after manyata's life its the question i wnted my readers to ask, um, maybe😃

thanks for the comment huma😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jarin04

i felt like hugging Uday when he poisoned Manyata. cum on Uday will be Uday. he'll get what he wants. though his way of getting things r twisted nd nt so noble. how can he be a saint after all he's my papa's creation na*wink*. Small bt cute update. do update tom.

ah pari😲 am suprised you thought uday poisoned manyta?? anyway is good to see your comment. i loved it😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jarin04

omg for the first tym i'm the first one to cmt* shocked* bt happy . 🥳

congrats pari👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome any lover both the part Los but what exactly happened in the kitchen between uday and j? Wow promo is really interesting so manyata finds out about uday's truth manybe she caught him going through her phone before when he was deleting adhiraj messages and who were the other people that were speaking to each other please update soon and thanks for the pm

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