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Posted: 12 years ago

*!~ KISS AND TELL ~!*

The lights of the room was dimmed as the dance floor was filled only with two other couple , leaving the hall mostly isolated as most of the guest had gone to take their dinner , she struggled with his grip on her waist , his nails piercing her soft tender skin , and the more she struggled the more he got his grip stronger on her , as she was dragged into the dance floor , he took her hands and placed it on his shoulder as he got his grip with both his hands on her waist she tried to move away but it was almost impossible as she was trapped by his strong grip , as his eyes pieced into her , he brought his face closer to her and asked her with a smirk on his face

What the matter ? why are you so scare of being close to me?

I am not scare it is just that I am not very fond of you

But you are my favorite companion my love I love you

Well than let me clear it I do not love you ok

Then why are you so conscious if you do not love me than my nearness should not matter to you right

She looked into his eyes , even a part of her knew that somewhere he was right she needed to show him that as for now he meant nothing to her as a smile plastered to her face and she said

Fine I am dancing with you but remember this is the last time I am dancing with you

As a new song started to play , as the music filled the air , manyata froze as this was the very same song of her prom but little did it effect her as she looked into his eyes that had so much of love in it , she felt herself drowning in those eyes she felt herself falling for him all over again as he himself was unaware of himself as his soul was set free and was already busy drinking her beauty they failed to notice that all the guest had left the hall as it was only them , as they matched each steps perfectly ,


You used to call me everyday
But words mean nothing without someone to say
Now I sit beside myself in the pouring rain
...and i just want to see your face~

When you're far away-
I miss you
but I know you're hear with me
When you're far away-
I need you

he twirled her around and each time she found herself closer to him , with the last twirl he found her lips brushing against her as he looked into her lips , time had paused for him …. He leaned to her , tilting his head as he pressed his lips against her , she closed her eyes he opened her mouth as his tongue went exploring each corner of her mouth , there tongue danced with each other in an unknown magical tune as their hands dangle at the sides


I lie awake it's 10 past 3
This empty feeling and baby I cant sleep
The only thing I left behind
is a smile you can't see...
I need you...

When you're far away
I miss you
But time won't heal your pain
when you're far away-i need you


The dance was long time stopped, he was enjoying the sweet taste of her lips and drinking to her fragrance , time had rolled back to those years of their true love , he was the happiest person in the world but the very next moment his dream was broken as he felt himself being pushed away by her , he looked into her eyes which were brimming with tears by now , as he tried to recollect the few incident that happened as a smile of satisfaction placed his face and he said to her

So this is how much you hate me ? you gave yourself to me at the very first touch huh?

She tried to steal gazes as he held her arms pushing her body closer to his and says

Accept it you have fallen for me all over again

Tears trickled down her cheek as she screamed waking the deads from the graves

No never I will never love you again uday never

For the first time in this many years he saw the anger in her eyes , and he hated the tears on her eyes he loosen his grip as his hands travelled to wipe off that tears from her eyes but it was too late as she moved away out of the hall he followed her out trying to reach her and call her name but he was too late she was broken and disguisted at herself how could she do the same mistake all over again as blinded with tears she failed to notice a truck approaching towards her and when finally she saw it was too late , the car had already hit her slender body as it was covered with blood ,he rushed by her side and took her body in his arms as he rushed to his car and seated her and started to race his car while his hands were stoking her hair as he whispered again and again with his eyes brimming with tears



And I won't go back
and i cant go back
you're all i ever needed
i want you back but you can't come back
you know i didn't mean it
i'd take you back and still i pray
for one more chance and one more day with you...with you

When you're far away
i need you
when you're far away
i miss you but i know you're hear with me
when you're far away
i need you...

You will be fine please open your eyes I am there with you please do not leave me I love you please

They reached the hospital as they took her inside the hospital, doctors being alert of her condition took her immediately into the ICU as his heart tore apart while leaving her hands he crumbled himself down on the floor as he looked down into his shirt covered with blood stain , as he looked down crying like a small child and taking the pendant into his hands and said

It is all for me I always have hurt you …. Your life is better without me you do not need me I am more of a pain to you I will leave you as you wanted just consider me as a bad memory of yours I will always love you but maybe the best thing for you to is be with ayaz I do not deserve you I really do not

And he exactly what he should do , he called ayaz and informed about her .condition as ayaz rushed and reached his way within a few hours , uday did not meet him , he simply walked away from the hospital leaving manyata forever


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Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww, poor uday... he feels he is responsible for her accident. I hope they are able to get back together in the last chapter and Manyata forgives her best friend and soul mate Uday.

Very nicely written and thank you for the PM. Please PM me when you have finished writing the last chapter. Good luck.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update Anni Di !

Loved it ... 😳

Hope you give a happy ending !

Waiting to see the end !

Continue soon ...
Thanks for the PM !
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cnibir

awww, poor uday... he feels he is responsible for her accident. I hope they are able to get back together in the last chapter and Manyata forgives her best friend and soul mate Uday.


Very nicely written and thank you for the PM. Please PM me when you have finished writing the last chapter. Good luck.


yes it is really sad but this was the only conclusion he could come to
she will forgive him thing will be good
sure i will pm you

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: catty2000

Nice update Anni Di !
hey


Loved it ... 😳
thank you

Hope you give a happy ending !
lips sealed about it

Waiting to see the end !
maybe on 15 august

Continue soon ...
Thanks for the PM !
awn that was my duty

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Anni! The kiss was lovely ... so romantic! Poor Uday feels responsible for Manyata's accident and has walked away from her life forever😭. Hope that when Manyata regains consciousness , she asks for Uday. Please continue soon😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hello baby sister

hw r u

sorry baby late again DONT U THINK ITS BECOMING MY HABIT

perfect update as usuall



manveer kiss was dreamyy


Ooo i m feeling sad for uday he is thiking him as a reason of manyata's accedent

love u baby muuuaaahhh


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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww poor uday, i feel sad for him... Abhi toh everything was goin on fine n nw dis accident... It just ruined everything...
Ayaaz hopefully will b a very positive character, who will help manveer in being together again...
I hope manyata will b fine soon
Hey anni pls update next chappy soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous update anni!! 👏
Loved it loads!!
Everything was going so smoothly and it had to get ruined because of this fateful accident.
I hope ayaz understands their manveer's love for each other.
It was beautifully written.
Do continue soon.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
o noo,ye accdne bhi abhi hona tha,bechara udayy!!!!!! abhi abhi to dono pass arahe the,ye kaya ho gaya,ab to uday bhi koi try nehi legaa😭😭😭 i hopee miracle ho jaaye!!!!!!😊😊

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