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Posted: 12 years ago
thanqu 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

awesome promo update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

omg tis is really awesome...totally luv it...it wonderful...

just luv the promo...
thx fr the pm n please pm me fr the next part...
please continue soon n eagerly waiting fr the next part...

thanqu so much ya i will update next part soon !!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chocohollic

loved the promo awesome
continue asap plzz

thanqu kk i will continue ... !! 😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: serat

wowww

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pia.raha

woww wooo,loving itt kritzz!!!!!!!! doo cntinuee soon!!!!!!😊😊 and the lastt part was gr88,uday is lost in her beauty!!!!!!😊😊

thanqu so much ya he lost her beauty but who ? 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guyz I m back wid chapter 2 firstly thanx a lot guyz for like my promo luv u guyz n I m really glad that u love this story I m not gud writter but u really appreciate me thanq u so much '. So here the update n plz guyz forgive me for my grammitical mistake n plz do comment n like also couz ur comment really prisious to me ' sdo read n enjoy !!!

Unexpected love

Chapter 2

Mammujaan : zinia tum nhi janti ye alfaz sune ke liye hum betab the thanqu so much !!

Zinia gave him a wide smile ' !!!

Smrha luk at her confusingly !!!

Zinia: mammujaan kya hum apne kamre mai ja sakte hai !!!

Mammujaan: afcouse beta !!!

She didn't luk at smrha ' n she go her room widout luking at her !!!

Smrha now really irritate ' she thought (wat the hell ye ladki kya chati hai abhi 2min phele ise shadi nhi karni thi or ab mammujaan ko ha khe rhi hai kya chati hai ye ? I don't care I need to talk her ) she open her room door suddenly she luk at her !!!

zinia sit on a chair n luk at herself on a mirrior wid wide smile on her face !!!

smrha (shaut on her): HOW DAIR U ZINIA ? HOW DAIR U ? WHY ARE U AGREED ?

zinia clamly asked wat r u talking about?

Smrha (wid irritating tone) :ZINIA U KNOW WAT I M TALKING ABOUT UR MARRAGE WITH THAT GUY SERIOUSly U R A IDIOT U KNOW WAT R U DOING TO URSELF ?

zinia clamly answer I know wat I m doing to my self luk yr !!! I have no choice !!!u know mammu jaan very well !!!

smrha:ZINIA IT'S A SUCIDE DAM IT !!!

zinia clamly say I have a plan smrha!!!

Suddenlly she luk at zinia wid confusing luk !!!

Suddenly her anger is vanished

Smrha: wat plan ? wat r u talking about ?

Zinia smrick at her n say I m going !!!

Smrha confusingly : where?

Zinia: mumbai !!!

Smrha: r u kidding me ?

Zinia: no !!! (wid serious tone)

Smrha: zinia n wat about nikkha ? wat about mammujaan ?

Zinia: I don't know !!

Smrha: so wat r u know !!! n mumbai is a big city where r u live ? ms zinia ahemad

Zinia: don't worry about it I mange !!!

Smrha: wat mange ?

Zinia: just forgeted tujhe humare ek kaam karna padega !!!

Smrha confusingly: wat kaam ?

Zinia: tujhe vo kesa lagta hai ?

Smrha: kon kesa lagta hai ?

Zinia: nikkha ke bare mai kya janti hai !!

Smrha: kya betuke sawal kar rhi hai zinia saaf saaf bol !!!

Zinia tujhe '' ahmmm tujhe

Smrha: mujhe kya ?

Zinia luk at smrha she stammered !!

Zinia: tu tu jh e

Smrha: kya ?

'''''''''''''''''''xxx'''''''''.xxx''''

In other side

Uday is in uday nivas ' !!! he have some wine he drink it suddenly some cute voice come !!

He turn aruond n smrick appear on his face !!!

HEY UDAY HOWZ U ' !!!

Uday luk at a sexy girl she wear white middi she lukz hawt smrick appear on his face he go toward her I m fine babbiee he really closed to her he put his hand on her chicks !!! did I know u miss ?

Mitali kapoor don't u rember me we meet each other in london !!!

Uday(wid smrick)

How can I forget u ' !!! he pull her weast on him ' !!he try to kiss her she closed her eyez !!!

Suddenly one voice came !!!

DADA !!!

Uday turn around n luk at his younger sister unnati !!!

Unnati: dada I m getting bored so can u give me some company ?

Mittali luk at unnati wid confusing luk

Mittali : babbiee whoz she ?

Uday try to tell her suddenly unnati say

Unnati: babbiee ki choti bhen !!!

Mittali: oh hey .. I m mittali !!!

Unnati: hey I m unnati !!

Mittali: hey unnati nice name !!!

Unnati: mitali can u gave me my dada back !!!

Mittali: afcouse !!!

Mittali luk at uday n say

Mittali: take ur time uday !!!

She kissed him on his chiks !!! he smricked at her!!!

She leave that place !!

Unnati luk at uday!!

Unnati: its to much now !!!

Uday: ab humari kya galti jo har ladki hume pana chati hai !!!

Unnati forget about it hum tho just apko ithna bthana chate the jagat ka call aya tha !!!

Uday: jagat ka call aya tha or hume bthaya bhi nhi ?

Unnati : aap j ho ?

Uday confusingly : nhi!!

Unnati : tho mai apko kyu btati !!!

Uday: hum j nhi hai but vo humara best frnd zaroor hai !!! kya kha usne ?

Unnati: vo khe rha tha ki chutiya khtam hone wali hai so vo india aa rha hai

Uday: kab?

Unnati 25th ko hi vo collage join karega or apse milega or ha jagat ne kha hai 3rd year tak phochne ki khushi mai vo party throw karega !!!dj pihu j jagat akash aap mai or sneha n collage ke bhoth sare log invited hai !!!

Uday: kya bath hai ab vo party throw karega not bad !!!

Unnati: hmm !!! dada mai bhoth excited hu ye chutiya khtam n than hum sab firse milege !!! I miss them all !!!

Uday: hum tho sirf jagat ko miss kar rhe hai !!!

Unnati: or baki sab !!!

Uday: vo include ho jate hai !!!

Unnati: not fair dada !!!

''''''''''''''''''..xxx''''''''..xxx''''''

In evening

Mammujaan: u know wat zinia !!

Zinia: wat ?

Mammujaan: tumhare liye surprise hai !!

Zinia: humare liye surprise kya ?

Mammujaan: bas vo ata hi hoga !!!

Zinia: mammujaan surprise chal ke ane wala hai ?

Mammujaan: kuch esa hi samjhlo !!

Zinia: aap khena kya ' !!

Suddenly some body knok the door !!!

Mammujaan: jao zinia drwaza kholo tumhara hi suprize hai !!

Zinia excitedly go toward the door n open the door

She luk at him wid shock !!!

Zinia: wat the '. !!! AAMIR TUM !!! par tum ?

Suddenly mammujaan came n luk at zinia wid big smile !!!

Mammujaan: kesa lga humara suprize !!!

Zinia: luk at him wid fake smile she glar at aamir n she said

suprizing !!!

Mammujaan: I knew it tumhe acha lage ga !!!

She thought( hey Allah ye madumakhi kha se aa gayi ab humare plan kya hoga? hey Allah plz help me bas kisi trha mera plan succesful krado plz)

Suddenly some one broke her thoughts wid his irritating voice !!!

ZINIA MAI TUMSE KUCH KHENA CHATA HU !!!

Zinia: mere head pe red signal hai !!!

Aamir: nhi tho

Zinia: so carry on !!!

Aamir: mai tumse khea chati tha ki mai tumse !!

Suddenly her phn ring' !!!

Zinia: aamir mai tumse badh mai bath karti hu

Aamir: par mai tumse kuch he try to tell her !!!

But she leave that place !!

Aamir: kese kahu ki mai tumse bachpan se hi pyaar karta hu !!!

Next day !!!

Mammujaan come to her rum !!!

Mammujaan: zinia!!

Zinia: ji mammujaan!!

Mammujaan: maine fesla liya hai tera or amir ka nikkha kal hi kar du !!

Zinia: kya ?

Mammujaan: beta hume dar lag rha hai !!! plz ye nikha kal kar le !!!

Zinia: par!!! She try to say some thing !!!

Mammujaan: zinia: mere liye !!!

Now she have no choice thik hai par ithni jaldi ithni sari taiyaariya kese hogi ? samjhiye mammujan aap tho senti ho kar fesle le rhe hai !!!

Mammujaan: uski fikkar tu mat kar mai hu na sab ho jayega or sabse achi bath aamir bhi taiyaar !!

Zinia thought ( vo taiyaar kyu nhi hoga uske liye tho loutry khul gayi hai hay allha plz help me ab tho aaj hi sara plan rescue karna padega she luk at her mother's locket n kiss her ammi plz help kar do plz )


'''''''''''''''''.xxx''''''''''''.xxx'''''

Next day

Mammujaan: I can't belive it !!!

Zinia: wat ?

Mammujaan: hume yakin nhi ho rha ki aaj tumhara nikkha hai ?

Zinia give him a wide smile !!!

Zinia thought ( mujhe bhi yakin nhi ho rha ki mai aap sab ko ithni jaldi chod kar jane wali hu ye sari galti na us madu makhi ki hai par ha jane se phele is madhu makhi ko esa gift dungi ki ye bhul nhi payega nikkha kya chiz hoti hai haa nhi tho )

Suddenly aamir come !!!

Aamir: zinia sach mai mujhe yakin nhi ho rha ki aaj humara nikkha hai !!!

Zinia thought ( ha gajini ki aulad phele bhul jata tho mujhe in sab ko chod ke na jana padta ) she luk at him n she gave him a fake smile ' !!!

Aamir: par abhi bhi mai tumse kuch khena chata hu !!!

Zinia thought (jo mai bilkul nhi sunna chati madhumakhi kahi ke)

Zinia control her anger!!!


Zinia: bolo ?

Aamir: vo mai !!!

Suddenly one voice came !!!

Zinia!!

Zinia luk at up n she luk at smrha !!!

Smrha: zinia yha kya bethi ha chal chal andar chal tujhe taiyaar karna hai !!!

Zinia: ha ha chal !!!

'''''''''''''''''.xxx'''''''''''xxx''

In other side

Uday felt his phn buzzing !!!

He luk at his phn !! wid discusting way !! he pic the call !!

Hey sweety !!

Babbiee where r u ?

Sweety In my home !!!

Uday how can u forget it

Uday: wat sweet heart !!!

Ki aaj mai india aa rhi hu or mujhe nhi ptha tum mujhe pic karoge mai airport pe hu !!!

Uday: sweet heart I m so sorry I m coming

wat ever !!!(she rolled her eyez )

he cut the call !!!

n luk at another girl !!!

uday : sorry babbiee next time !!!

its kk uday!!!

Uday : bye !!

He kissed her forhead !!!

Suddenly his phn buzzing he piced the call !!

Uday ha choti !!!

Unnati: dada where r u ?

Uday: tumhari bhabi saa aa gayi use lene airport ja rha hu !!!

Unnati: oh shit !! kyu aai !!

Uday: unnati !!!

Unnati: kk hum kuch nhi khe rhe bye !!!

Uday bye!!

'''''''''''''''''.xxx'''''''''..xxx''''.

He reached airport he parked his car ' !!!

uday go inside the airport n find some one !! suddenly he dialed a n.o !!

uday:Where r u ?

In my home !!!

Wat ? how can u reached ?

In taxi dumbo !!! I m princess uday I didn't wait for someone !!!

Uday try to control his anger !!!

Uday: its kk sweety !!!

He cut the call !!!

Wat the f**k she is truly bitch he mummred ' he turn around

BAAMM !!!

Uday:Wat the'. ?

Uday luk at her !!!

Sorry sorry I m sorry for my mistake I m really sorry I m talking wid someone on phn n than my balance out of control n than my coffee ' I m so sorry !!!

Uday didn't listen her !!!

He just luk at her anglic face she wears salwar kurta n she luking stunning

Uday: its kk !!! (wid smrick)

I m really sorry !!

Its kk I know it is not ur mistake !!!

How can u know this ?

Recently u tell me miss ? he try to ask her name !!

Suddenly some voice came

ZINIA!!!

She luked around !!!

Sneha !!!

Uday luked at sneha: sneha ?

Sneha luked at uday : uday?

Uday: sneha wat r u doing here ?

Sneha: I just pic my sis zinia ahemad my cousion !!!

Uday: ur cousion?

Sneha: yup u guyz know each other ?

Zinia: no actually my coffee loved him !!

Uday : wat !!!

Sneha laugh really

Zinia: luk at my coffee on his shirt !!!

Uday luk at his shirt !!! n smile appear on his face !!!

Sneha: zinia he is uday ' my collage frnd n uday she is sneha try to complete her sentence he cut her

Uday: zinia right !!!

Zinia gave him a cute smile !!!

So that's it guyz I hope u like it plz do comment n like also !!!

Precape: zinia entered st.louions a collage of her dream !!!

kritz

Edited by priyash.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yes first to comment
the chappy was awesome
so much of mystery
plz update asap
thanks for the pm
Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update i really liked it
plz plz plz update next prt soon
waitong very desperately
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!
Loved it loadsz!
Do continue asap!
And thanks for the pm!

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