I AM IN LOVE (MANVEER) chapter 1 (pg.no.12)

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Rashika

@zainab.udayveer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi
nice CS zainab...loved it👏👏..update soon😊

Thanks gargi. Yeah dear😊

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pari vania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

amazing loved it...!!!😊😊😊😊
awsomee maza agaya cha gaya boss
kiya baat han tune kaha na long comment
dekh ab long comment derahi ho smile okk😃😃😃
i liked it so so so much i loved it awsome
last manveer scene was awsome manveer first meet
oh i m wagerly waiting for first chapter plz update fast na
i m really waiting for next update
jay n karan was awsome dono larahaya tha
unnati miss vijay haaawww
manyata hairstyle awsome
manyata dress amazing ur choice to good dear
full update written amazning
but itna sespence q yar itna ziyada sespence why
plz update update update update n update
plzz ab kab dogi itna late update nai diya karo jaldi
jaldi jaldi jaldi update diya karo i loved it
awsome again
now bubye dear

Edited by pari_vania - 12 years ago

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Prerna

@Lovelydrops

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

nice prologue...cont soon...nd thnx for pm...

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_Grey_

@_Grey_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

oh my! the prologue ws amazing👍🏼
loves it to d core
manyata kdressing sense awesome hain😊
cont soon and do pm me

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

oye awesome prologue
loved it loads..
kya baat hai
aate hi takraar...
nice...
and a bit sad also...
but nafrat pyaar ki pehli sidi hoti hai..
I hope vijay sab sort out karde manveer ke bich..
so sorry fr late comment deary
ws a bit stuck...
anyways update soon..
do pm me

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Rashika

@zainab.udayveer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

I M IN LOVE
CHAPTER ONE

both lost eachother eyes but manyata break eyecontact n shout him...😡😡

manyata:ankhe han ya button??

uday:what??

manyata:wat what??

uday:what are you saying?

manyata:dekh kar nai chal sakte mera phone bhi tod diya tumne

uday:opss sorry mera dhyan kahi or tha but ap bhi tu andho ki tarah arahi thi na kiya apke pass ankhe nai han (he said wid smirk)

manyata:dekho mr apni zaban(tongue) sambhal kar baat karo smaje mujhe tum jaiso ke muh(mouth) lagne ka koi shook nai han... smaja tum

uday:tumhe pata han tum kisse baat kari ho mai yaha ka

(manyata cuts him words)

manyata:ohh hellooo...mr. tum jo bhi ho i m not intrested smaja now please mera rasta choro

uday:itni jaldi bhi kiya han apne sote(sleep) shehar(lion) ko jagaya han ab bukhtu

manyata:dekho mr mai aisi wasi larki nai ho

uday:tu kasi larki ho tum batao mujhe

manyata:q ap mere lagte kiya ho

uday wid smirk: ager nai lagte tu lag jayaga apke kuch...(wid wink)

manyata:dekho apni had mai raho mujhe tum jaise playboys se baat karne mai koi intrest nai han

manyata try to moved out but sudden uday hold her arm n pull towards him he through her tightly another blank place n n this place is washroom she little bit scared but don't show she scared but uday understand her n moved close to her n hold her weast tightly she shocked

manyata:ya kiya kara han khasmanukhane halkat

uday:wow so miss attitude tum tu galiya bhi bakti ho lagti nai ho lagti tu bare ghar ki achi hottest girl ho

manyata:tumse matlab apne kaam se kaam rakho

uday:acha theek han apne kaam se kaam rakhta ho mai kk

he hold her weast more tittly n try to kiss her lips but she forcefully push him n she succes able to free herself...!! n she try to running n she go away quickly but she open the door n turn n say

manyata:i will see u mr. flirter..i will see u next time

uday:n i m waiting miss attitude

manyata go she searching jay but she unable to searching her she tired now becoz wo itna lambe raste se ayi han

sudden someone come on her back n hold her shoulder manyata turn n really happy

XXX__________xxx

manyata turn n see n she hug him tightly

manyata:bhai i love u kaha tha ap itni dair se i m so much tired

vijay:bacha mai kabse agaya ho ap kaha thi itni dair se mujhe bataya

manyata:wo...!!! kuch nai bhai ap wo sab choro ya batao jay kaha han??

vijay:wo bas yaha ati hi hogi maine use yahi bulaya han..wait manu ap jao waha batho hum kuch khane ko late han apke liya

manyata jati han table ki taraf bathne sudden wo uday ko dekhti han n uday bhi use dekh jata han so wo turn hoke jane lagti han tabhi uska pair(leg) mur jata han mooch ajati han pao(leg foot) mai she is crying becoz to much pain she control herself but she unable to control becoz to much pain in her leg uday see n go toward her he try to help her but she stop him in broken voice

manyata:me...re...mere...se...doo...dooor...rah..raho (she still crying becoz she is very hurted)

precap:manyata ko pata chale ga uday hi unnati ka big bro han manyata fully shocked n uday manyata ki help karega n all...😆😆😆

xxx-------zainy---------xxx

Edited by zainab.udayveer - 12 years ago