EARLY LOVE ROMANCE-IMP. NOTE ON PAGE 13 (DO READ) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome prolouge... pls add me in ur pm list...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

awesome prolouge... pls add me in ur pm list...


Thanx a lot please just like the pm list post and send me (htgcute) and zainab.udayveer a frnd request and we will send u the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it just awesome...
thx fr the pm...
it just lovely...
please continue son n eagerly waiting fr the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heyy dears ( harshi n wat ur name ? ) ... i juz lov prologue soo much .. although ManVeer r kids but dey lov eachother soo much aww.. hate diz Raj actually he dunno udayveer se panga lena kya hota hai :-P now dey r younger m juz excited wat will hsppen nxt ? hats off to u guys for great start n tenx for pm :-D

Osina :-D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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EARLY LOVE ROMANCE
CHAPTER ONE PART ONE..!

In one big palace in a beautiful room a beautiful princess is sleeping on her bed n sunrays come in the room through the window n one smart charm prince come n sit near her side n see her face.

He starts carresing her hairs n check n then kiss her forhead n checks. Feeling this immense touch she starts opening her eyes slowly and say...

manyata:uday sone do na hume [Uday plz.. Let me sleep]

uday:princess itni bhi kiya jaldi han apko ab hum agaya han tu
sorahi ho waise hume dant ti thi ke hum kab ayega [wat is so hurry princess wen I am here u r sleeping and wen I go out of station u scold me that wen will I come]

suddenly manyata gets confused n stands up n starts speaking in loud voice

manyata:uday tum kab aya mujhe laga ke mera sapna han ek dafa batana tu chaya mai tumhe lene ati aise ae ki kiya zarorat thi q nai bataya mujhe mai tumhara kabse wait kari thi [Uday wen did u come I thought that I am seeing a dream u should at least have told me I would have come to pick u up wat was the need why didn't u told me]

(manyata continuesly talking n uday see her In her night dress she is look very sexy uday is not able to control himself n he stands up n hold her waist tittly n looks at her lips)



manyata open her eyes fully n try to stop him but he is still suking her lips n bites her lower n upper lips den after 10 minutes manyata needs oxygen and after knowing that uday breaks the kiss n manyata starts breathing heavily...

manyata:ya kiya kare ho ap mai itni sharam nai han ke kissi bhi larki ke kamre mai is tarah nai ate han [wat r u doing don't u have shame u should not enter any girl's room like this]

uday:acha jee or mai kisi or ke kamre mai nai balke mai apni jaan ke kamre mai meri hone wali biwi ke kamre mai aya ho [really but I am not in any other girl's room I am in my sweetheart and would be wife's room]

manyata:acha jee hum apse naraz han or hume apse koi baat nai karni han [oh really but I am angry with you and I don't want to talk to u]


she said this n started moving towards the room's door. She tries to open it but uday was more quick and he holds her hand n pull her towards him n hold her waist very tittly both of their bodies met n look like one body manyata's body starts shivering
manyata said in a breaking voice

manyata:uday ya ap kiya kare han choriya hume please koi ajayega [uday wat r u doing please leave me someone will come]

uday:tu ane do princess [let anyone come princess]

manyata:uday koi dekhlega [uday someone will see us like this]
uday:tu dekhlene do [so let them see]

uday starts minimizing the distance between his and her lips but manyata stops him

m:uday please dont do this abhi tu li thi itni dair tak ab dekho mere lips kaise hogaya han [uday please don't do this right now only u took a kiss that too a very long one and see how my lips are looking]

uday:kiya karo princess is backlees sleevless n short knees tak ki night dress mai ap itni khubsurat lagri ho ke humse sabar hi nai horaha hai aise kisi or ke samne mat jaiyega q ke aapko aise dekhne ka haq sirf mera han sirf mera [wat can I do princess in this backless sleeveless and knee length night dress u r luking very beautiful that I can't control myself don't go like this in front of anyone cause to see u like this is only my right only mine]

(uday hold her waist more tittly)

manyata:hmm sirf apka han but hum abhi bhi apse naraz han apne 5 mistakes ki han [hmm... It's only ur's but I am still angry with u...you have done 5 mistakes...]

uday:or wo kiya han 5 mistakes madam please can u tell me my 5 mistakes?? [and wat r those 5 mistakes madam please can u tell me my 5 mistakes??]

manyata:no.1 u didn't called me after one week

uday:2??

manyata:2nd u shout on me always n why u say go away on phone u know na that I love u aloads n wen u went to spain I was left all alone

uday:and 3

manyata:3rd in a party in london you were drinking and an ugly bimbo girl was dancing with u like she is a fevicol stuck to u

uday:or ya apko kisne bataya [and who told u this??]

manyata:apke bhai ne [your brother]

uday:ok now 4??


manyata:4 is jab ap london gaya tha ek tu ap 2 months se alag alag contrise mai kaam ke liya jaraha ho or jab ap londo gaya tha tu apki itni sari fans thi or ek fan n apki lips kiss li or apne use autograph bhi diya khud hug kiya [4th is wen u went to london and from 2 months u r travelling in many countries for business and wen u went to london u had so many fans and one female fan kissed u on ur lips and u by urself gave her autograph and u also hugged her]

uday:han wo tu [yes that was...](manyata cuts him in b/w)

manyata:shut up mr. yuvraj udayveer singh

uday:ok miss manyata kumari say my last fault(he broke the hug n folded his hands)

manyata:5 buhot bari han aap mujhe apne sath q nai leke gaye maine apko kitna miss kiya isliya mujhe apse baat nai karni ab ap jaiya[5 one is very big mistake y didn't u took me with u.you know I missed u alot that's why I don't want to talk to u and now u go from here]


uday try to hold her but uday was not able to do this becoz manyata holds his hand n open the door n shuts the door

uday wid smirk go in hall

all youngers are sitting in the hall n talking

vijay n unnati are sitting together

jay n jaggat are sittings together

all are busy with talking uday comes n says

uday:hellooo...guys.

jay:udayda when u came n why didn't u informed me n ya kiya sabse phale jiji se mille humari yaad nai ati apko [and wat is this u met jiji first don't u miss me]

she goes n hugs him tittly


uday also hug her n say
uday:my cutie pie ur jiji is my world she is in my every breath so i meet her always first my n her breath are joint na

unnati:aaawww bhai what a line sirjee


vijay:wow unnati u snatched my mouth's line

all start laughing

jaggat:bhai i love u when u come here

uday:i come after 2 days guys ab ya mat kahna ka mai abhi q mill raha ho kuch kaam tha mujhe n jaggat i hate u n u dont talk to me [I came after 2 days guys and now don't ask y I am meeting now..I was having some work n jagat I hate u don't talk to me]

jaggat:bhai but why what i have done??what happen bhai??

uday:u know very well

jaggat:bhai i dont know what are you saying what are you confusing me plz tell me clearly

uday:why yar i share my secrets with u so why do u tell them to manyata??u know she is now really angry with me n she is not talking 2 me n she is counting my mistakes

(jay starts laughing loudly)
Jay:hahaha loudly jo yuvraj kisi ke age na jhuka sirf apni dharam patni ke age jhuka[the yuvraj that never bended in front of anyone is bending in front of his wife]

uday (embrassed):aisa kuch nai han[it's nothing like that]

vijay starts teasing him:han tu phir kaisa han uday? [then how is it uday]

jaggat:sorry bhai

uday:hmm it's ok bro but u all have to help me to make up with my princess

all together say yes

part 1 has come to an end

PS:::part 2 will soon be continued

give ur feedback n likes fast guys me n zainy waiting guys please give ur feedback n comments fast plzz

hugs all
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🥳zainy🤗harshi🥳

PRECAP:uday plainning date for manyata n try to talk her n both move for date becoz uday plan surprise for his princess n both romance but some one the non of then raj come between both n both romance

Edited by htgcute - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
hello guys tommorow i update chapter one part two n please give ur feed backs n tell me raj character pictures n his nature please tell me den i have den plz give the idea so pm me n scrap me okay bubye
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MAHI1198

loved the concept loads guyz...
update soon



thak you dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: ...anju...

loved d concept.

nice prologue and cs.

one request.can u plz give d updates in english.

update soon.

waiting for next update.



thank you
really thank you
yeah we will dont very we will write hindi wid english translate
soon
yeah we update it dear
thak you
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: -Zina-

Ohh, really Nice!!

is it a joint SS?




thank you
yeah this is joint ff not ss
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nityatandon

Hey... it was very nice do pm me...



thank you yeah sure we do it😆whenever we update ok

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