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An one shot story

JUST FOR ENTERTAINMENT I AM SORRY IF IT HURTS ANYONE SENTIMEANTS MY SERIOUS APPOLOGY

AAHATEIN

in search of true love I am left with scattered dreams and a broken heart , today the date is December 6 ,2013 it had been five complete years since that incidence but I do not know why this silly heart of mine always struck on this date the entire time and my heart cry out million tears but one also I do not let trickle down my check , I have a family to support my kids who are already scattered will be broken down ,and I want to keep my promise to her , I will keep my promise ,I will take care of them as both a mother and father ,many of you must have already formed a puzzle what is this all about and why am I making a mole out of nothing at all it is only once you know my story then will you feel what I have been going through ,just loose someone you love then wil you feel the pain os separation well she used to say that I have a bad habbit of beating around the bush but no more today I will get strait to the story which ruined my life a simple thing could destroy someone life never thought of it ,ever

BEFORE 5 YEARS

May 5 2006

Mumbai the city of dreams ,even the roads are golden there ,the city is beautiful and numerous sea beach to add to its beauty ,too much to explain and admire yet too less to say there in a small corner of city lived a boy with huge dreams named after the sun this young boy of twenty was from a small traditional rajput family of a small village in Rajasthan , he was a journalist of one of the most reputed newpaper , he earned well and lived a perfect life ,he had all the quality ,loved by all lucky go happy boy with girsl drooling over him but he being faithful to his father and dead mother and ofcouse to the culture of his village never dared to even look at a girl ,it all started on this date when he went back to his village as his family has planned to get him married to jainandini there old family friend and his bestie since childhood they had but she was much more younger to him , about 4 years ,they never in there wildest thought they would get marry each other and as for uday he fumed in anger when he got the news he was getting married to a jai who was still a school girl ,but there was nothing that he could do if he dared to reject the marriage then the village phanchayat would burn them alive that was the rule but he had to do something the day he along with his family was going to finallise the marriage his eyes lay on a girl playing by the pool side , she looked anglelic such beauty as though the god has put the nature into her ,her innocent laughter rang into his ears but his car drove past her , his heart did break but his faith served him pretty well as he entered the house he saw the same girl again ,after exchanging a conversation he knew that she was the cousin elder sister of jai and was orphan and was bought up by there family and her name was manyata and as he got a chance to talk to jai alone he got the news that manyata had always been illtreated by her mother but to jai she was like her own sister and when she came to know that uday ahd feeling for her at once she wanted them together so when uday came back he did reject jai but announced his decision to marry manyata but thing are not that easy jai parents were fumed at manyata and they could never let her have this good fortune as for uday parents they were well aware that they would get nothing no dowry form this orphan so they decided not to let this marriage happen and above all manyata after he left suffered a lot of taunting ,her life turned into living hell and each moment she hated him even more , jai tried to convince her but little girl of 18 she was too stubborn and too nave to understand anything but others happiness but uday was not going to give up on her at no cost he had fallen for a girl and no matter what he would get her ,she tried to avoid him but frequent run ins and day of pursuits were hard to resist slowly the whole village came to know about the both of them ,this added to her sorrows her uncle and aunty set her immediate marriage with a man who was 30 years elder to her and was already with two kids of her own age ,this side uday was in no better situation his father that if they two ever marry he will cease to talk to him ,but uday being firm leaves his family for her , on hearing this finally manyata heart melts for him , and with jai convincing her she ,realizes his deep indence love for her on the day of marriage when he comes to take her she escapes with him ,that very night they leave for Mumbai and on reaching Mumbai they tie knot as well as marry legally , manyata was over whelmed by the city ,having relocated for the first time from rural surrounding to the city life ,but uday holds her hands and be by her side the entire time he was her husband but never forced himself on her and she took her time to adjust in her new life ,finally after an year she started to like uday and finally fell in love for him with uday she started to accept the city too ,she adapts to the new life style although at first she finds it a bit ahrd to cooperate and specially her never tried husband who hardly gave her a minute to herself after returning from office so the love already gave its fruit manyata was pregnant and gave birth to two twin boys kabir and karan the pearl of there parents eyes , they leave a year happily married life but on the unlucky day of 6 decmeber 2008 ,manveer had planned a dinner date to settle there fight yes the happy couple , manyata had just found out uday having an affair with his collegue at first uday denied it but then realizing the mistake he asked for forgiveness after all he loved her and he decided to convince her so the kids were handed to there nannies uday was waiting at the beach side with perfect dinner table , and romantic music and a tent for there long night stay since kids entered there life he heardly got to make love to her and today he would leave no stones unturned to show his love to her he waited as at 10.40 he got her call he picked it up

UDAY:hey jaan where are you?

MANYATA:baby I am near vela parle

UDAY:jaan come fast na

MANYATA:why today that minakshi of your won't entertain you

UDAY:baby I said I am sorry na

MANYATA:its ok baby I was just pulling your leg after all you are a human too and mistakes do happen but do not repeat it or I will really leave you and this time forever

UDAY:haaw you will leave me and I will let you go never I will pin you to myself then lets see who will take you by the way mrs veer singh you are wrong

MANYATA:really why

UDAY:coz tonight you will realize that I am a tiger at bed

MANYATA:you and your dirty talks

UDAY:only because of me our two junior are in this world

MANYATA:hoo please you did nothing at all ok except for bumping into me every possible night it was me who kept them inside my stomach ok na

UDAY: ok you win

MANYATA:take care of yourself and take care of the kids

Saying this he disconnected the call and just after five minutes he got a call saying there was a bomblast in a taxi near vile parle and worse it was manyata she died in the taxi

done with the os

do hit the like button and leave your honest comments behind

it is inspired from the mumbia bomblast of 6 december 2008 where two taxi was balsted one as mention in the os and another 22.25

for futher deatils please visit

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/2008_Mumbai_attacks


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful OS Anni..👏.u are always good in One shots baby...so i always read them..but this was heart touching...i never thought it will have such an ending but ur true...Thats life...You have happiness at one moment and in the very next sadness...

This is life...There are many people who have gone through this n we only can pray not to have such incidents any more

Great try..Keep it up⭐️👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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anne os was very cute n lovely

but very sad ending

anne y did u killed manyata.

u r a package of ideas .

keep it up.write more.

👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OH MY GOSH... SAD ENDING BUT A SUPERB WORK LUVED IT...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os 👍🏼

though ending was really sad 😔

but its lovely
Edited by panchaali - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet_gargi



Beautiful OS Anni..👏.u are always good in One shots baby...so i always read them..but this was heart touching...i never thought it will have such an ending but ur true...Thats life...You have happiness at one moment and in the very next sadness...

This is life...There are many people who have gone through this n we only can pray not to have such incidents any more

Great try..Keep it up⭐️👏👏


thank you so much jiji
yea that was a dark time which is gone
lets just pray any where in this world people do not have to go through this ever again
hugzz anni

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...anju...

anne os was very cute n lovely
thank you so much

but very sad ending
awn i am sorry

anne y did u killed manyata.
coz she is my saut lol

u r a package of ideas .
heeeheh after all i use idea sim na

keep it up.write more.

👍🏼


thank you
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Originally posted by: htgcute

OH MY GOSH... SAD ENDING BUT A SUPERB WORK LUVED IT...


thank you so much dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: panchaali

nice os 👍🏼


though ending was really sad 😔

but its lovely


thank you so much
sorry for the sad ending
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you so much

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