REALITY CHECK CHAPTER 6 PAGE 32 - Page 5

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hey i know i have kept you all waiting since yesterday i am sorry for that and there is another reason i want to say sorry is for i have given a short update as i am not keeping to well and my specs have be scattered into pieces so it hard to type with my new one and which is causing immense pain in my head
so here i present the first chapter of reality check
ps;phillips his international clint
mr sharat the agricultural minister of west bengal

CHAPTER ONE

Towards the evening the storm was at its height. From the terrific downpour of rain , the crash of thunder , and the repeated flashes of lightning , you might think that a battle of gods and demons was raging in the skies. Black clouds waved like Flags of Doom . The trees swayed from side to side with sighs and groans , the road flooded with rain water as the sky ripped its heart and continued poured on the city , the sea was lashed into fury and in a ragged aged old room of a chawl murari laid on the bed as manyata sat beside him locking his hands into her , jai sat on the floor , she had just returned from her school and the scene in front of her made her dumbstruck as she sat down and silent lone tears rolled her eyes off , murari was sleeping the most peaceful sleep from which he would never be awoken but only jai could understand as manyata unable to see and understand the situation with a smile on her face she said

MANYATA:kaka do not worry we have almost collected the amount just a bit more is needed than you will be totally fine , just wait a little more kaka

She said assuring and giving hope to a body that was dead now as she caressed his hands and frowned asking

MANYATA: kaka today you are quiter than usual what is it kaka and why are you so cold .. kaka why are you not responding to me kaka

Her voice was broken as she heard the door open it was akash he looked around and found jai sitting on the floor he almost questioned her but stopped seeing his baba he had just come back with the amount required for operation just to find that now the person did not need the money as his life was gone tears swelled in his eyes , after so many years the tears were visible in his eyes as manyata fixed her glance downwards and asked impatiently

MANYATA:jai is it you see kaka is not talking you ask him what happened ?

But her question was answered by akash as he sat beside the bed pulled the sheet above murari head covering his face and said in a cold voice

AKASH:baba will never talk again manyata

He always hated the rain , to him it approached dull and a boring day he was struck in his office going through the deal he had cracked the other day , but how badly he wanted to go home , take a sip of his black coffee and mour at his mother day , yes that was the way the yuvraaj of jaigarh , the cassonava uday decided to do on a rainy day unluckily his stars did not support him and he had to take good care of this deal it would profit his company in million dollars , this project was of a expressway from purulia [mednipur] to sealdah[ Kolkata ] , no other company ever dared to held any project as due to the heated political condition this deal was also cancelled earlier a week before his mother dead , to uday mother this was her dream project well that is what giriraaj clarified but due to bridgraaj the deal could not be cracked well that was what his dad narrated to him , being all gloomy he checked the paper but suddenly a claw hit his heart hard according to that the expressway was being build over agricultural land which clearly meant that farmers of that region were landless inspite of all he still did not turn into stone he still had a little humanity left in himself as he rang up his dad and said

UDAY;dad there is an error in the documents

GIRIRAAJ:what is it beta?

UDAY: dad according to this documents the expressway will be made in middle of an agricultural land which means the farmers will turn homeless we need to rectify it

GIRIRAAJ:you did not tell about this error to Phillips or mr sharat

UDAY:no dad shall I call them

GIRIRAAJ:no good you keep the file there and come back home we will discuss about it there okay

UDAY:yes dad

He disconnected the phone and flung his coat into his body and raced to parking area and got into his silver land rover but just as he turned to unlock the door he felt a strong steel rode hit his head hard and he fell down on the floor semi conscious as thick stream of blood began to flow down and fill the space in middle of the tiles , he had no strength to open his eyes just heard a evil alugh accompanied by a speech

VOICE:hit him till he gives his last breath I cannot risk my project I thought he was sensible but alas he is just like kaveri and if I can kill my wife so can I do the same with my son

He felt several hits on his body he could not identify but it was strong hard metallic things as he twisted on the floor begging for his life but his father turned deaf and at last he closed his eyes and when then he was put into the car after a drive he was thrown out of the car near a dungeon ,. The rain powered hard on his body and the place was isolated as he laid taking his last breath .

When the moon came up , jaggat took his first drink of the sour alcohol from his chagal , today jai gave him another reason to drink , in this harsh storm he stood infront of her school for whole three hours just to see her racing back to her home , how weak he felt that he could not even utter her name , the sight of her made him loose his mind , his love was still not confessed as almost missing his step he fell on something , he got up dusting himself and looked down to see it was a person in torn clothes and badly hurt [uday] he was shocked his face lost its color as he said

JAGGAT:oh no I need to take him to the hospital or he will die

Jaggat took him by his arms and walked to the hospital he put uday down on strencher and asked the nurse to take him to ot but he got a scornful reply

NURSE:go and pay the money first

JAGGAT:how much do I need to pay ?

NURSE: 30000 in that counter

JAAGAT:but maam I do not have that much money please get him admitted I will pay you I promise

NURSE:you think uday niwas hospital any charity program our head mr uday veer sir had made a rule none will get operated without the admission fee

JAGGAT:ok wait I will go and get the money

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