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Posted: 10 years ago
Seriously Dii The Update wad trully beautiful wonderful... now looking Forwatd for ur next update will uday forgive her. .. Plzzz Update It Dii Truly Waiting For The Updatee.. Wanna Know What Manyata's Next Step and Uday's Next Step.. but plzzz Manyata aur Uday ko ManVeer bana do.. plzzz aur jaldi update dona. aur I know itni jaldi next update is early but kya karain Dii reaalyy Love It.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sonuuu the update was absolutely amazing. It was mind blowing.
This chapter was my favourite as Uday was proved innocent.
You did a remarkable job on writing this update.
Thumbs up. Everything from the strt till the end was just perfect and beautifully written.
I have no words to tell you how nice the update was.
Manyat's and pia's scene was sooo sweet. It got me soo emotional. I felt like I was witnessing everything and it literally brought tears to my eyes.
Its good tht VB called Uday and Rajveer.
So its raj who raped pia. Yaaayy I knew it.
Its really hard to write and explain a rape scene but you totally nailed it.
Well done sonu. All the emotions were put nicely
Awwe poor manyata. I feel terrible. Shes going thru soo much.
The guy she loved since three years backstabbed her.
Poor thing.
Awwee pia is soo concerned about manyata. How cute.
Even Uday is concerned about manyata deep down.
He probably likes her (just a stupid guess)
The rajveer-uday-pia scene was very cute and nice also.
Now coming to the last scene.
It was amazing. Although it was heart wrenching but you did a great job.
It was one of the best scene. Loved it.
Cant wait for the next update esp after reading the precap.
Lets see if Uday forgives her or not and she overcomes this situation.
Overall,awesome update
Thanks for the pm. Love you and btw I feel honoyred to be mentioned in your update. Thanks. It means alot
Edited by roshni101 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow nice update...
finally manyata knew truth...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jagz11

Thanx for updating ur posts. Nobody else in here seems to be that keen. I hope that Manyata forgives Uday my bechara Prince of hotness. 😊😛

ur welcome... u mean uday forgives manyata after she found out the truth 😆 thank u for the lovely comment



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

OMG, u have no idea how relieved I am 😉 hehe i guess we all r... obviously Uday was innocent and I don't really care who was guilty😆 hehe yep as only uday matters for us , but the fact that u made RAJ , the rapist; was a brilliant plan!👏 hehe i didnt even know who the rapist was going to be but then i thought lets make raj the villain😆 When Manyata saw Pia for the first instant, I also had tears welling in my eyes awww i didnt know that scene would be emotional maybe i could have added more to it .. everything was so perfectly described that I felt like a fly on the wall, and was witnessing everything live! thats how i feel when u update everything playing in front of me like a movie Fabulous update and well worth the wait hehe this time i wont make u guys wait so long . And I must compliment u on writing the rape scene ... I know it's difficult putting THAT into words but u did an awesome job 👍🏼 thank u navi it was actually diffcult writing the rape thing and that was keeping me up from updating and i had to keep on rewriting until i didnt find it satisfying but now im happy it came out pretty well Really can't wait for the next part hehe dont worry updating in a bit ... Manyata's apology is another thing I am waiting for since FOREVER 😉 hehe same here. I hope Uday makes her grovel for his forgiveness😈 lets see😉

If I was him, I'd make her work for it ... I'm very evil u know 😆. hehe i could see that but i wish if they showed something more like this in the show
Lastly ... MY NAME (indirectly) made it into your update - I feel so honoured 🤣. haha of course i had to add it so u know how impatient i am for ur update * I shall update tomorrow night. As u know I ask for 52 likes each time I update, this time the 52 took ages to come well u updated that chap now lets see when u will post the next one up 😆 ... so it's not my fault that my LOYAL readers can't get a new chapter from me 😳 ... but I do apologise for it..hehe its k no worries
Loved the chpter Sonali, thanxx 4 the PM 🤗 .
thank u so much for the lovely comment really loved reading it

🤗 and ur welcome for the pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
truly beautiful.. tremendous story.. what a story.. out of the world.. feeling very bad jis se pyaar kiya usi ne dhoka diya.. [:([ 😭... thank u yep its sad manyata had to love a guy who betrayed her

but Diii I have a plan if u like it keh manyata ko thora heart broken dekho aur is. se uday ka concern manyata ki taraf af aur uday manyata ko ase bht zyada wala hurt hota.. lakin kuch nae kehta phr vijay ki btao se manyata apne senses main ajati aur apni friend pia ki btao ko yaad karti toh uday ko sry kehti aur us raj ko jail main dalwati aur manyata uday se bht kam kam btain karti usey avoid karti toh yeh dekh kar uday ko bht gussa ajata aur woh usey sunataa... thanks for the idea


welll mera yeh plan ya idea acha nae hai. lakin aap ne acha precap diya toh acha hai as usual hamsha ki tarhan aur aap se toh bht hi itne ache updates dete ho.. itna clear itna perfect as keh hum apne samne dekhrahe hain ase hote hue. seriously remarkable story. jitna tareef karoon kam karoon utna kam hai. aur hum mujhse aut bardash nae horha jaldi update dedo I would say kal hi dedoo.. waiting desparatelyy.. aur plzzz Diii kal hi dedoo naaa... PLEASE 😊 😃 awww thank u that means a lot i will be updating in a bit[/QUOTE]
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey di, how you?

hey im gd what about u?

I am extremely sorry for the very late reply

its k no worries

I missed out so much

hehe u did but i appreciate that u commented after reading the missed parts

Your story is amazingand very beautifully written

thank u glad u like the story

Part 8

I actually got scared when I read about Manyata and her boyfriend Raj, I thought that Unnati was really there but thankfully it was just Manyata's dream.

hehe well i did plan that but i canceled it the last minute and made it as manayta dream

Loved Jai and Manyata's scene and how thoughtful Jai is.

thank u glad u loved their scene

Omg, Uday found out about Raj, loved the part where he tells her that she is only he's

hehe i had to add that bit somewhere so thought let me add it in this part

Part 9

Loved Rajveer and Uday's scene, it was very cute, they are just like brothers

thank u glad u liked that scene

I'm so happy Uday found out about Pia

yep he had to after manyata mentioned about her

Love the small flashback that Manyata had and Uday and her scene

glad u liked it

Part 10

Lol, Love how Vijay bhai is falling for Dr Shilpa

hehe something i added out of the blue

It's too cute

😳

Glad Uday followed Manyata and saw what condition Pia is in.

yep im happy he did that so he got to know what actually happened to her

Part 11

Finally Manveer are engaged

yep they finally r without any obstacle

Totally understand why Rajveer was so cold towards Manyata

yep after all pia and manyata was also his friends so she should have told rajveer at least

Afterall, she blamed his best friend for something he never did

yep rajveer knows uday would never do something like this no matter how much he flirts

I'm so happy Pia regained conscious

even i am 😃


Part 12

Love how Vijay let Pia tell Manyata the truth

yep thought that we be the best is pia tell herself what happened on that day

I'm over the moon, finally Manyata knows the entire truth

hehe yep she finally does

I can't believe that Raj is such a disgusting person

yep he is lets see what happens to him now

Finally Uday will not be accused for something he did not do

i agree he wont have to hear manyata saying all those things to him anymore

thank u for the lovely comment really appreciate how u commented for all the parts

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: alisha_ashiyal

Seriously Dii The Update wad trully beautiful wonderful... now looking Forwatd for ur next update will uday forgive her. .. Plzzz Update It Dii Truly Waiting For The Updatee.. Wanna Know What Manyata's Next Step and Uday's Next Step.. but plzzz Manyata aur Uday ko ManVeer bana do.. plzzz aur jaldi update dona. aur I know itni jaldi next update is early but kya karain Dii reaalyy Love It.. 😊

thanks for the comment... hehe u will have to see that in the next part i update if uday forgives manyata... for them to be manveer it will take a little time.

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Posted: 10 years ago
You're updating 🥳 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: roshni101

Sonuuu the update was absolutely amazing. It was mind blowing.
thank u roshuuu im glad u liked it
This chapter was my favourite as Uday was proved innocent.
hehe yep he finally is
You did a remarkable job on writing this update.
thank u that means a lot
Thumbs up. Everything from the strt till the end was just perfect and beautifully written.
I have no words to tell you how nice the update was.
omg stop making me blush roshuuu😳 my cheeks have seriously gone red due to ur comment 😆
Manyat's and pia's scene was sooo sweet. It got me soo emotional. I felt like I was witnessing everything and it literally brought tears to my eyes.
awww im gald that u liked this scene... im happy u found it emotional... chalo i will wipe ur tears
Its good tht VB called Uday and Rajveer.
yep i wanted them to be there when pia narrates what happened that night
So its raj who raped pia. Yaaayy I knew it.
haha yep u guess it right the first time
Its really hard to write and explain a rape scene but you totally nailed it.
thank u that really means a lot and yes i did have a tough time writing this part
Well done sonu. All the emotions were put nicely
thank u once again roshuuu
Awwe poor manyata. I feel terrible. Shes going thru soo much.
she defo is
The guy she loved since three years backstabbed her.
5 years roshu... well she will have uday soon 😉
Poor thing.
Awwee pia is soo concerned about manyata. How cute.
just like how we r concerned for each other 😃
Even Uday is concerned about manyata deep down.
not sure about that 😆
He probably likes her (just a stupid guess)
haha we will know soon
The rajveer-uday-pia scene was very cute and nice also.
thanks happy u liked that scene
Now coming to the last scene.
It was amazing. Although it was heart wrenching but you did a great job.
manyata was hurt so thought of showing it this way
It was one of the best scene. Loved it.
aww thanks
Cant wait for the next update esp after reading the precap.
hehe im updating in a bit roshu
Lets see if Uday forgives her or not and she overcomes this situation.
lets see 😉
Overall,awesome update
Thanks for the pm. Love you and btw I feel honoyred to be mentioned in your update. Thanks. It means alot
thanks for the lovely comment... haha im glad u do i had to write ur name in the update

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