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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi Vibha , Great update Dear! Uday's thoughts and his self-talks were beautifully portrayed👏. Him telling that he'll WAIT for her to recover , was utterly romantic ... I really loved that! Manyata has selective-amnesia 🤢. This is going to be a tough battle for Uday to make a place in her heart again ... if he can't make her remember him in the first place! Wasn't the update short🤔? But immensely interesting, nonetheless😊.

Do continue soon,
... thanks for the PM.



Thanks for the lovely comment navina🤗 yep it will be tough, but the tough get going when the going gets tough aint it?😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanah12

Both updates were awesome!

Loved it!
Finally manyata woke up.
Aww uday didn't want to get married again because he truly loves her.
Manyata doesn't remember her, poor uday.😭
Well written!
Do continue asap!
Thanks for the pm.



Thank you Sanah😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...anju...

lovely update.

uday self talk was emotional.

happy dat manyata wake up.

she is suffering from partial amnesia.

felt sad for uday.

now uday is going to woo manyata once again.may god bless him.

enjoyed it .

continue soon.



Thank you so much Anju🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago


Thanks Huma😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

amazing update hope Udayveer can win her back



Thank you dear😃 yep he will..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

wow awesome update vibha...
where were u sooo many days deary????
I miss your regular updates...
but this update was nice...
so manyata is back...
oh weelll has she really lost her memory.??or just acting???
so Uday firse apni biwi ko pataega nice...
update soon...
waiting...



Thanks Mahima🤗
i was here only, aur kahan jaa sakti hoon..lol, aaj kal main bohot lazy ho gayi hoon thats why late updates..please don't mind😳 nope she is not acting..its the truth..
i'll update in few min😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: htgcute

Superb update jiji...

Do continue soon
Sorry for late comment
And thanx for the pm...



Thanks Harshi😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Karkit

Wow nice update manyta wake up bt sad fr uday btw love it thanx 4 pm



Thank you Shruthi😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey all..i know last few chapters have been very bad...but i tried my best to add a Manveer scene in this chapter..please read on and tell me how did you find it?😳


One more week had passed since Manyata regained consciousness and a doctor had examined her. After running her through some routine tests he read out the verdict that almost everybody knew about or guessed. Manyata had retrograde amnesia where certain brain cells go dormant. The patient's memory could return anytime or it might never. But one thing he was clear about was the patient shouldn't be put through any sort of mental strain lest it might make her condition worse than it is already.

She vehemently refused to recognize Uday and that was like a huge blow to him. Nobody had the heart to tell her about her relationship with him and it still wasn't clear to her why he refused to leave her alone.

Manyata's legs had gone stiff from lying in bed for so long, so a lady physiotherapist was called. Her treatment began and Udayveer was constantly through her side, much to her chagrin. As much as she wanted, she couldn't tell him straightaway to get lost, something was stopping her; but his presence was annoying her nevertheless.

J was away at her new home and Manyata had no one to share her worries and misgivings with. She began to confide in her doctor and the doctor, Tara was ever so glad to lend her a patient ear.

Udayveer was out with some work and Manyata confided in her about getting irritated with the man who followed her day and night.

Tara knew about them so she told Manyata "toh kya hua agar woh har pal tumhare saath rehta hai? Usse achche se baat karo, usse dosti karo..woh sirf tumse dosti karna chahta hai aur kuch nahi" her words affected Manyata's sponge like brain and she decided to do what the doctor said.

On the other hand Udayveer had kept himself from falling apart with herculean effort. It took all of him not to go berserk when Manyata even refused to acknowledge his face, let alone their love.

One Sunday morning, precisely 9th month anniversary of their wedding, Manyata was sleeping blissfully and Udayveer thought of a way to give her a surprise. He made her favorite breakfast, omelette; the thing that had played an integral part in bringing them together previously.

His angel lay there sleeping, oblivious to the world around her. He opened the curtains a bit to let some sunshine in and she crinkled her eyes, still closed.

He pulled the curtains back and she became alright. He repeated the same thing again and she repeated her action. A wave of love rose in his heart and a lump came to his throat. He carried himself forward to kiss away the qualms in those eyes that were evident even in sleep.

As he bent forward to kiss her, she opened her eyes in single motion and sat up.

Whoa! He was about to kiss her? How dare he? She pulled the comforter all the way upto her neck and said in a sharp tongue, "kuch din se main soch rahi thi ki tum achche aadmi ho, mujhse dosti karna chate ho, par tum toh bilkul baaki aadmiyon jaise nikle..aaj se balki abhi se mere kamre se nikal jao..just go away"

"par Manyata main toh tumhare liye breakfast laya tha, yeh dekho, tumhara favorite," he pointed out.

"achcha toh tum abse noukron ka kaam karne lage, mujhe koi breakfast nahi khani..jao yahan se" she pushed the plate away in disgust. It clanged to the floor breaking the glass and maybe Uday's bruised heart even.

He had taken her ruthless behavior since long and not said a word, but this was crossing the line. She was accusing him of taking advantage of her. Oh yeah? He would show her what it meant. She was still fuming like an explosive device and suddenly Uday's anger boiled up.

He charged on her suddenly, pushing her to a sleeping position; he was on top of her and she was beneath him.

"tumne jaisa socha main bilkul vaisa hi hoon, ek number ka kamina'par tumhe toh is kameene ko zindagi bhar jhelna hoga" his whisper in her ears was like a cold dagger.

Her mind was totally blank and he was crowding her so close that she couldn't raise her hands to push him back. His warm body was strangely comfortable to her.

He left a hot breath below her right ear lobe and she was compelled to close her eyes. She gathered herself somehow and said "yeh kya kar rahe ho tum? Chodo"

"chup, ekdum chup" he closed her mouth with his right hand.

When he removed it, she knew what was coming next. Even with her eyes closed she could sense him bringing his hard mouth to hers, she prepared herself to welcome him but..

...but nothing.

He was already away from her, standing near the dresser. Before she could say anything or curse herself for giving in he said "dekhliya na, tum par mera asar? Main chahta toh main kuch bhi kar sakta tha, par main aisa nahi karoonga..kyon ki main aaj bhi tumse pyar karta hoon"

He walked away leaving her to ponder over what had happened or was about to happen. She was finding herself disappointed but not for what happened; rather for what could have been. She wondered how his lips would taste..

But one sentence was going back and forth in her head; 'tumhe is kameene ko zindagi bhar jhelna hoga' what did he mean by that? Does it mean he planned to live his entire life with her? Imagine him and her, living together..Like a married couple, Her brain echoed from some corner. The picture that rose was so nice.

Open your eyes and smell the coffee Manyata, you don't even know him! Just because you have damn good chemistry with doesn't mean you two could be couple'she was irritated with herself and stood up.

Precap- Manveer get locked up in a lift.




Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
HEY vibha jiji
how are you?
coming to the update
it was awesomee lovedd itt
sooo goood loveddd itt
omgg soo good
firstly awnn manyata have amnesia
ohh noo please god she gets cured fast
i can not even imagine uday condition
feeling so bad for him
she is correct in her part too
one would never like a stranger attention
nature played a bad trick on them
and here the anniversary part was awesome
specially the last scene loved it truly
if he wanted he could force himself on her
no one would accuse after all he was her husband
but he respected their lovee
and gave her timee
loveddd ittt
hugg
love youu


Edited by annabh - 12 years ago

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