TRULY...MADLY..DEEPLY - Updated Chap 5 - Pg 27 - Page 16

Originally posted by: ricna

WhoOpn whoop... yay sha. finally u updated.

And what is this about dekha discontinuing or ending??? no man... please u can not be serious...

But will chat 2 u on dekha thread... not here.

For now my veer awaits me... so RES😆

Originally posted by: princess_farh

wow! Awsm! It was fab! Do update more asap!

Originally posted by: htgcute

Hi Shahi.. Hi harshi

Hope I can call u that.. yes you can most definitely 😆

Wow the episode was really awesome and emotional...😭

thank you.. emotions are integral part of any story

Veer trying to find maya till now was really cute and lovely he truly love her...

And maya also loves him truly... yes they are truly,madly, deeply in love with each other

Aww.. poor unnati I pity her got stuck because of giriraj just hate giriraj😡

me too...

This giriraj is surely a super cruel and wicked villain in their love story... lol.. yes this is the story of mine that actually has a villian.. so i made him very nasty😆

And the name fatty made me remember of someone special thanx for making me remember him again...😳 aww so cute... this fatty must be very special to you... ur blush says it all😉

Don't know wat will happen next but yeah surely looking forward for the next update...

stay tuned... lol never know what will happen next😆

Luved the update to the core...👏thanks harshi... love the comment

And yeah thanx for the pm.. you welcome🤗

Originally posted by: dumas

emotional update both missing each other so much and she had a baby and the same thing their dad did to his sister her is going to do to him push him in to marry to make money for him self not care what will happen to his children so sad hope the pendant is with dadi and he sees it and know she was their so close to him awesome update thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Shahista01

Originally posted by: anushruthi

res

edited

I have got one word for your update

THANK YOU ANU... MUUAAHH

Amazing

Love the way You write

AWW THANK YOU YAARA... LOVE READING UR COMMENTS

Loved all the quotes

This one

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I DON'T KNOW WHICH IS WORSE,LOVING SOMEONE KNOWING ITS GOING TO CAUSE YOU PAIN OR BEING IN PAIN ''.. BECAUSE YOU CANT LOVE SOMEONE YES THIS WHY PERSONAL FAVOURITE ALSO... LEAVES YOU THINKING???

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is definitely Something to ponder over DEFINITELY

Truly brilliant GLAD YOU ENJOYED

This Part

M: I DIDN'T MEAN TO FALL IN LOVE BUT I DID'..

V: AND YOU DIDN'T MEAN TO HURT ME BUT YOU DID'.

M: GOODBYE WITHOUT REASONS IS THE MOST PAINFUL ONE

V: AND LOVE WITHOUT REASONS???...IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL ONE''..

M: FORGIVE ME VEER'..

V: JUST COME BACK HOME MAYA'.

M: THIS GOODBYE DOESN'T MEAN THAT I HAVE STOPPED LOVING YOU OR EVER CARING'

V: WHAT DOES IT MEAN ?'.

M: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS JUST A PAINFUL WAY TO SAY I LOVE YOU'..AND I TRULY WANT YOU TO BE HAPPY '.. EVEN THOUGH ITS NOT WITH ME

V: WHY CANT YOU UNDERSTAND THAT I WILL NEVER BE HAPPY WITHOUT YOU???? TO THE WORLD YOU MAY BE JUST ONE PERSON BUT TO ME YOU ARE MY WORLD''''.

M:VEER..Please forget me..

V:'Its impossible for me to forget you and i will never allow you to forget me...Main tumhe bhool jaaon yeh ho nahin sakta, aur tum mujhe bhool jao ye main hone nahi doonga

( I personally loved that line from dhadkan, and its suits veer perfectly hai naa?) IT DOES SUIT VEER PERFECTLY ... LOL ANGRY YOUNG HOT AND DETERMINED😆

She opened her eyes instantly looking around realizing it was a dream'. A dream that consumes her everyday. It felt so real talking to him except she couldn't see him'.She didn't realise just how difficult it would be to stay away from him, it ate her very soul knowing what he must be going through. His last line lingering in her mind...Main tumhe bhool jaaon yeh ho nahin sakta, aur tum mujhe bhool jao ye main hone nahi doonga

is awesome THANK YOU

Totally loved the dream sequence ...!!! ME TOO😆

Fatty is a cutie pie HAA VOH THO HAIN

How old is he ?? HE IS FOUR

hmm so Maya goes by the name of Mona ... YES

in the Orphanage ... good thinking on her part 😉

I hope nothing happens to Dadi ... I AM SURE SHE WILL BE JUST FINE😉

I have a hunch Veer will somehow see the chain😉 HMMM LETS SEE

Due cont ASAP WILL TRY TO😉

Loved the amazing chapter GLAD YOU DID YAARA

THANKS FOR THE PM YOU WELCOME... WAISE WHICH PM? 😆

Love You LUV YA TOO

Hugs RYT BACK AT YA🤗

Originally posted by: ...anju...

😃😃HEY...SHAHI😃😃 HEY ANJU

UPDATE WAS SUPERB N AWESOME SHAH AS USUAL.ACTUALLY ALL MY COMPLIMENTS IN MY WORD BANK IS OVER SHA. HOW CAN SOMEONE WRITE SO BEAUITIFULLY.👏 AWW THANKS FOR THE LOVELY COMPLIMENT, GLAD YOU ENJOYED

EVEN I ALSO LUV THOSE LINES ❤️ SAID BY SUNIL SHETTY FROM DHADKAN. IT IS SOMETHING THAT STANDS OUT IN THAT MOVIE

MAYA IS WORKING IN CHARITABLE INSTITUTION.N AN YEAR PASSED SINCE SHE LELT VEER. 😭TIME HAD GONE SO FAST.N SHE IS IN CONTACT WID HER BABA. YES TIME HAS PASSED.. NOT DIRECTLY IN CONTACT WITH HIM, JUST SEES HIM SECRETLY DRESSED IN A NIQAB.

POOR UDAY. FELT SO BAD FOR HIM. HE IS VERY MUCH HURT.Y IS HE GOING TO MARRY ANOTHER GIRL. CANT HE RESIST HIS FATHER😡. THEY ARE IN A VERY DIRTY LITTLE GAME CALLED POLITICS, ITS NOT SO MUCH RESISTING HIS FATHER, HE CAN DO THAT AND IF OR WHEN HE FINDS HIS MAYA AND LEARNS THE TRUTH HE WILL CAUSE CHAOS... 😉

WHO IS FATTY DAT SMALL BOY.ADORABLE .SO MAYA CHANGED HER NAME TO MONA.N A NEW ENTRY RAHUL😳. N HE LIKES MANYATA.SOUNDS INTERESTING.HE WILL ADD MORE SPICE TO D STORY.AM I RIGHT SHA. YES YOU ARE RIGHT ANJU...LOL ALL NEW ENTRIES FATTY ALSO...

GIRIRAJ SPOILED HIS DAUGHTERS LIFE ALSO.Y IS HE PLAYING WID LIFE OF HIS OWN CHILDREN.😡POOR UDAY N UNNATI. GIRIRAJ DOES NOT KNOW HOW RAJ TREATS UNNATHI BUT HE FORCED HER TO MARRY FOR HIS BUSINESS AND POLITICAL GAIN

DAADI MET WID AN ACCIDENT😲.RAHUL HELPED HER TO REACH HOSPITAL. I THINK DAADIS ACCIDENT IS GOING TO PLAY CUPID IN MANVEER MEETING.DANXS TO DAADI N DAT PENDANT. GUESS DAT TIME FOR MANVEER. THE PENDANT IS WITH UNNATHI... EACH WILL PLAY THEIR OWN ROLE BUT ULTIMATELY IT WILL FATE THAT WILL DECIDE THEIR MEETING

AND LOVED THOSE QUOTES U ADDED THANK YOU
TO DESCRIBE EMOTIONS OF EACH CHARACTOR.😃LOVED IT LOADS.LOVED MANVEER CONVO IN DREAM SEQ. THANKS I ENJOYED WRITING THAT

ENJOYED D CHAPPY SO MUCH.⭐️NOW LUKNG FORWARD HOW STORY PROGRESSES N EAGERLY WAITING FOR MANVEER MEETING.

CONTINUE SOON SHAH.THANKS FOR PM N DIS LOVELY CHAPTER.

ANJU🤗 THANK YOU ANJU FOR THIS LOVELY COMMENT SO GLAD YOU ENJOYED AND YOU WELCOME FOR PM 😉

Originally posted by: Manveerangel

👏 👏 awesome 👏 👏
Hi dee HEY SWEETY, ITS BEEN A LONG TIME
1st ov alll sorry for late commenting 😭 DONT BE SORRY, BETTER LATE THAN NEVER
Bus this was all bcoz ov my exams thank god now they r over GLAD THEY ARE OVER
Wow am Truly...Deeply...madly in love THANKS GREAT TO KNOW😉
With ur ff
Pllzzz dee make jagat pay for his did HE WILL PAY.. ANY SUGGESTIONS😆
Plzzz update soon
And thx for pm YOU WELCOME

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Omg ... Veer is getting engaged and will marry shortly😲😭!!!!!!! HAAN ...😆 PATA NAHI Sorry shock mein , formalities bhool gay😆!

🤣 NO PROBLEM

Hi Shahi 😊. HEY NAVI Fabulous chapter👏. Every scene was wonderfully done , enjoyed it tremendously😃. Very interesting and really well-written👍🏼. AWW THANKS NAVI...😉 Now ... where do I start , WHAT DO I HIGHLIGHT ... if I start listing all that I loved ... I'll probably rewrite your update😆! SO GLAD YOU ENJOYED, THANKS FOR LOVELY COMPLIMENT Maya has become a care-giver and has even changed her name. I loved the little boy - FATTY ... he's so cute😳. HAAN VOH THO HAI Unnati is bound in an abusive marriage ... but did she have a past with Rahul? YES SHE DID...😉Maybe u could reunite them and get Rahul out of Mona's way😉?! LOL NICE THINKING So Dadi had an accident because she was trying to follow Maya ... as much as I'd like to say POOR DADI , I'd say THIS WAS A BLESSING IN DISGUISE as it brought Mona/Maya out of the shadows.

YES DEFINITELY... BLESSING IN DISGUISE

At the start , when I read about the fund-raiser ... I knew that is going to be 1 eventful place😉. I'm also confident (like Veer )... that Maya will be found that night itself ... and I can't wait . IT WILL TURN OUT TO BE EVEN MORE EVENTFUL FOR SOME😕😆

Poor Maya thinks that the chain being gone , signifies her losing Veer . Doesn't she get it ; that he's tied to her ... HEART , BODY & MIND😳!!!!!!!!! There's not a chance of her losing him😳!

VERY WELL SAID NAVI, SHE WILL NEVER LOSE HIM

Lastly ... my LIKE is on STRIKE😭!!! The stupid button is NOT working 😡 ... but I'll try again tomorrow😊! NO WORRIES😉

Loved the update , GLAD YOU DID

do continue soon ...

thanks 4 the PM😊. YOU WELCOME

PS - I didn't like DHADKAN very much , but that dialogue of Sunil Shetty's ... I WILL ALWAYS REMEMBER😳. You're right - it's perfect in suiting Veer's character!!!!! THANKS NAVI... YES ITS ONE OF THOSE DIALOGUES THAT STICK WITH YOU

Bye now ... I think I bored you enough😆! YOU COULD NEVR BORE ME, LOVE THIS COMMENT NAVI