MANVEER FF//PYAR KO HOJANE DO

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prologue
this story start the wonderful mahal in mumbai aj is mahal main har jagah chal pahal hai har jagah sab yaha se waha jare haan sab bhaag rahe haan n sab buhot khush haan n sab logo ko buhot ziyada acha lag raha haan sab living room mai bahat kar baatein kare haan
uday:dadi sahab kiya ap hume batayagi ya sab kiya horaha haan n q horaha itni sajawat q ki jari haan kuch special haan kiya??(he face questionly)
ds:hume maaf kardijiya uday beta but ab hum apki or jay ki shadi ka soch re haan n kaal ap dono ka rokha haan (she say tear fully eyes)
komal briraj vijay meneka also sad uday heart is so much cry n he all remember scene her n his chidhood n he remember manyata running fatly both play sword figh he hit her back both playing video games uday remember all chilhood scene with spen manyata n he eyes filed a tears
uday:ya nai hosakta haan hum jay kaise shadi karsakte haan humari enagement tu manyata ke sath hui thi na tu ya kaise hosakta haan phir
briraj:hum bhi chate haan ke humari beti manyata hume mill jaya lekin aj 16 saal(years)ke baad bhi uska koi ata pata nai haan n ab hume kuch nitija par pouchna hoga pata nai pari kaha hogi or kasi hogi
komal cry:uday beta hum jante haan u lose ur best firend n ur love but plzz try to understand uday u know after 16 years manyata ko hum sab talash kare hana wo abhi tak nai milli she say cry fully n her eyes filled in tears rolled her check briraj consol her
griraj:uday all is rite try to undertand manyata nai ayegi ab she is go away wo kaha haan ya koi nai janta ap haan kah dijiya jay ke liya hum sab yahi chate haan
uday shout:no dad no never i love only manyata not jay n i promise u all after more 2 months bas 2 months hum manyata ko zaroordhundh lega humpar trust kijiya (uday ki ankho main junnon tha manyata ke liya pyar tha ek majnu ki tarah wo buhot gussa main tha n manyata ko yaad kara tha n he thought why u leave me princess why u leave me his heart is very cry )
griraj stand n say:ya kiya kahre haan ap uday ya sab ap kaise karega
den tabhi ek awaaz ati haan piche se n wo ek girl hai n she cry very hardly her eyes full filled tears n tears rolled her check n she say very cry fully she is noun of them rajkumari jay
jay:hum dhundhega uday ke sath humari jiji ko wo zaroor millegi hume pura yaqeen haan wo apni behan se itni naraz nai hosakti wo humse itni door kabhi nai rehsakti haan
ds:par ap dono ya karega kaise jo aj tak hum sab nai kar paya army sab commishner sahab koi nai kar paya tu ap dono 2 months main ya sab kaise karega ya bataya hume zara
uday:ds u trust me?
ds:yes beta i trust u but this is imposible u know after 16 years we all seraching manyata but she is not here all say she is dead but i know i say trustfully she is lifed not end manyata hum sabki
breaths haan ager use kuch hota tu hum sab zinda nai hote
uday:ds ap humpar bharosa karti haan so plz give me a permission n give me a 2 month i serach manyata n i m definatly sure i do it
ds uday ki ankho main o junnon dekhti haan buhot khush hoti haan
ds:sahi haan lakin ager 2 months main manayta ko ap nai shoodh paya tu apko n jay ko shaadi karni paregi ager apko humari ya shart manzoor han tu hum apko ijazat dega is sab ki kiya apko manzzor han?
jay:par ds ya kaisa hosakta haan hum or uday kaise(she complete sentence but ds cute her sentence n say)
ds:ager apko ya manzoor nai haan tu phir hum aplogo ko ya karne ki ijazat nai dege ke ap manyata ko dhunde...
uday thought:i know main apko zaroor dhondho ga just wait n watch i m comming princess he smirk...
uday:dadi sahab hume manzoor haan sab apki sharte
ds:tu theek haan ap zaroor jaya hume yaqeen haan ap humari pari ko zaroor wapes leyaga
uday sab ki blessing leta haan n he left the mahal jay is very happy vijat also happy both left the living room
alll elder sit a living room n start converstion
griraj:maa sahab ya apne kiya kya apko pata haan na manayta abhi tak nai milli tu ab 2 months main kaise hosakta haan ya
briraj:ds ager hume humari pari millti haan tu hum 2 months or wait karega griraj ab bhi wait kijiya
griraj:okkk
komal:i hope is baar humari gudiya hum sab ko mill jaya
ds:aisa hi hoga komal bilkul aisa hi hoga ap fikar maat kijiya briraj himaat rakhiya hume humari poti n apko apki rani beti zaroor millegi hume pura bharosa haan uday par humne unki ankho main wo junoon dekha haan
briraj:bhagwan kare aisa hi ho
in scene shift
one beautiful girl running a campus 2 girls follow here n say
girl 1:kaha jari ho tum?
girl2:iska na kuch smajh nai ata kab isko kiya karna haan
girl 1:shradha kaha jari haan tu??
shradha:stop it girls main wahii jari ho jaha mujhe hona chaya smaji n u no what girls aj humare dad ka first birthday haa unke pass jari ho main tu bas n ya college bhi naya haan hum teeno ke liya so abhi kuch din ke liya choti karte haan waise bhi abhi start haan tu ziyada parayi nai hogi
(1 girl name piya she is very close firend shradha n 2 girl name gunjan she is best firend shradha n all are best firends)
piya:lakin hum kiya karega hume tu yahi hostel main rehna parega na
gunjan:haan yaar hum tujhe buhot miss karega
shradha:or kisne kaha tum yaha rahoga
both together:tu kaha rahayaga??
shradha :mere ghar mere banglow main mom dad kuch nai kahayaga i know okk
both:par?
shradha:par war kuch nai maine kah diya tu kahdiya n waise bhi tumhare mom dad ka ghar kitna door haan tum dono ka n mera ghar tu hostel ka 20 mints ka rasta haan ab or kuch nai ab meri baat mani hi paregi han nai tu...
both:okk miss han nai tu
shradha she is very beautiful girl awsome look like angel she wearing a cool pink n grey top with white pant n black goggal she hairs open n n curly few hair n she look awsome
n waha uday apne room main bath kar khush haan n say hum araha haan princess apko dhundhne bas kuch hi dino main n he smirksn

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prince yuvraj udayveer singh:he is prince of jaigarh he is young anger man he is hot awsome dashing amazing personality man all girl his die heart fans he don't belive God he belive only distiny money n ect he dot respect enlders he hate his dad he love only 1 girl his whole life he love her childhood firend n fiance but she lose after 16 years ago or ab wo regular drink smoking ek playboy womeniser ban gaya haan 1 day 1 girl next day next girl sleeping his bed he is very big bussines man india n very angry man...n ect

rajkumari unnati:she is good awsome girl she is very fiendly n she loves her bro wo apne bhai ki buhot achi dost haan behan haan n use buhot pyar karti hai n buhot bharosa bhi karti han she respect all she is very loving caring girl n she also hates her dad she is rajkumari of jaigarh

maharaj griraj:he is maharaj of jaigarah he angry person but he loves his childrens but wo sab unse nafrat karte haan unhone dusri shadi bhi ki thi but ab unko chordiya apne bacho ke liya

maya:griraj second wife n wo hamesha uday unnati se jalti haan n hamesha inki khushiya barbad karna chati hai inko

akash:he lives delhi he is maya son not griraj maya ki bhi ya dusri shadi thi n ya first married wala son haan ok akash delhi main parta haan n ek shradha naam ki larki se pyar karta hai n he hate uday




mirnalni devi:she is queen of devgarh wo apni praja ke liya buhot strick haan but dil ki buhot saaf haan wo apni puri family se buhot pyar karti haan

maharaj briraj:he is maharaj of devgarh buhot acha haan apne dono daughters se buhot pyar karte haan but inki sabse bari beti bachpan main kidnap hogayi thi

maharani komal:maharani of devgarh wo apne sab garah walo se buhot pyar karti haan

rajkumari jaynandani:she is so cute awsome girl stylish hot sexy girl but she loves her sister but she lose her childhood but she miss her always n anytime rajkumari of devgarh






meneka:mirnalni devi is daughter n maharani of mahadevgarh she is so sweet she love's whole family

vijay banna:yuvraj of mahadevgarh he is so funny he loves her cousin sister jay he always create a fun but he is also so sweet n he loves rajkumari unnati

chaudhary:maharaj of mahdevgarh he is so anger man n hamesha kaam ke sil sile main bahar rehte haan but he loves his wife n son but hamesha bussines trips par rehta haan




shradha kapoor:gud looking young stylish she belive God very much n she lovely caring innocent n helpless girl sabki maddad karti hai kisi ko dukhi nai dekhsakti han n she don't belive love use ya sab bekaar lagta hai she live's delhi n buhot bare college mai parti han all boys hamesha iske peache rehte han but ya kisi ko bhi apne kareeb nai ane deti ise hamesha se apne dream boy ka intezaar han she belive ke wo ek din ayega n white hours par bitha kar lejayaga she is very rich

mr.s shruti kapoor:shradha mother but not real but she loves alot shradha wo hamesha uska buhot khayal rakhti han n hamesha fikar karti han q ke shradha buhot wo han kisi ki bhi batameezi nai sehti muh tor jawab deti han sab ko so wo hamesha shradha ki fikar karti han n apne beti se n apne hubby se buhot pyar karti han n pure ghar ka khayal rakhti han

dev kapoor:shradha dad n shruti husband he is not shradha real dad but he love's her very much n use kisi cheez par ruk tok nai karte n hamesha support karte han n he is a very big bussines man of india but kabhi kabhi shradha ke liya strick bhi hote han wo bhi uski bhalayi ke liya take uska kuch hona jaya ya shradha ko koi inse dur na karde q ke ya unki real daughter nai han

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Edited by shreya.kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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prologue n character skretch=page 1
chapter one promo = page no . 6


Edited by shreya.kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful teddy bears!
Dear!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesme nice concept dear
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it
continue asap
thkxx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey sheya nice story
and prologue cs was dam awsum
pls continue sonnn
waiting for manveer meting
i hop manyata doesnt lov akash
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i like character sketch specially uday he hates his father thats a different thing in his character and in the ff also
keep it up
👍🏼 i love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww

updateee chappp

is really good prologue

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Posted: 12 years ago
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thankss😛

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