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shreya kapoor

@shreya.kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: princessSonia
hey shreya..😃 hey sonia...😊😊
loved d prologue...👏 thanks u dear😛😛

awesum CS... 👍🏼 thank you so much dear sonia😃😃
loved it..❤️ hmmm thankss again😛😛
do cont soon.. continue soon dear😆😆
n do pm me if possible.. yes sure i pm u😉😉

n firstly plz take care of urself... thankss dear hope me well soon😊😊😃😃
hope u get well soon...🤗 i hope so dear but i dont think so...😭😭😲😲😲

thankssfor the beautiful comment dear i m surprise u like it thankss for comment dear i pm u continue soon dear

n dont worryyaar abhi wo doctor par buhot gussa ho pata nai or kab tak is waguru dctor ke pass hospital rehna parega😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

i dont think i m fine very soon😭😭😭

but all plzz pray for me😊😊😊😊

thanksss sonia deary i luv ur besutiful comment thanks u

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shreya kapoor

@shreya.kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: MAHI1198
I loved the concept...
sorry fr late comment deary...
but awesome prologue and cs..
looking forward to read more...
update soon
and do pm me

u loved ir thankss😊😊
its okk dont say sorry dear😭😭okkk its ok😆😃😛
thankss u like prologue n cs thankss dear😊😊😊😊
yess soon chapter 1 ok dont worry😆😆😉😉
update very soon dear😉😉😉😉
yes i surely pm u dear😊😛

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shreya kapoor

@shreya.kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: mehak1994
awesum concept
thanks for pm
continue ASAP

thankss dear😊😊
ur welcome😛😛
continue very soon😆😆
😉😉😉😉😉😉

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Sonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: shreya.kapoor

thankssfor the beautiful comment dear i m surprise u like it thankss for comment dear i pm u continue soon dear

n dont worryyaar abhi wo doctor par buhot gussa ho pata nai or kab tak is waguru dctor ke pass hospital rehna parega😭

i dont think i m fine very soon😭😭😭

but all plzz pray for me😊

thanksss sonia deary i luv ur besutiful comment thanks u

awww m glad u loved my comment

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shreya kapoor

@shreya.kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: princessSonia

awww m glad u loved my comment

sonia dear itna acha comment han tu acha tu lagaega na idiot😆😆😆n i realled ur comment😊😊😊😊👏👏👏

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shreya kapoor

@shreya.kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: princessSonia
Get well soon dear...

hey dont worry dear😆😛
i m better 😊😊😊
n i m back to my home😉😃
so dont be sad n tensed okkk😃😃
n thankss for caring me always😉😉

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shreya kapoor

@shreya.kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

chapter one main ap sab dekhaga

promo

yaha shradha apne ghar ati han or uske mom dad use ghar main surprise dete han o buhot khush hoti han n wo apni 2 firends ppiya n gunjan ke sath ayi hoti han han uske mom dad use surprise dete han q ke wo kafi time bad london apni parayi khatam karke delhi ayi hoti han😉😉

scene shift

in jaigarh place

yaha uday ko ek call ata han wo call pic karta han n say

uday:humne jo kaam kaha tha wo hogaya kiya??

person:jee sir main puri koshish kara ho hume pata chale han wo delhi mai han

uday:kiya ya sach han kaha han wo hume unke barema hr ek cheez batao??😆😆

person:sir abhi ziyada nai thora hi pata chala han wo delhi mai han ek acha bara ghar ki bati han buhot bussines man ki beti han wo hum puri koshish kare han sir..😭😭

uday:ek baat kaan khool kar sunlo ager agle 7th day 1 week main hume unke barema sab khabar chaya wo kaha han kasi han kaha rehti han sab kuch means sab kuch..😡😡

person:par sir itna jaldi??

(uday cute him words n say)

uday shout:just shurt agle 2 years se tum sirf ya pata laga pahe ke humari princess kaha han delhi mai bas or kuch nai hume gussa na dilao ager humara kaam agle 1 week mai nai hua tu apni ulti ginti gina shuru kardena

call disconnected

in devgarh place

uday unnati devgarh ate han uday seeda ds ke office main chala jata han unse baat karne

ds:uday beta aiye bethiya boliya kaise ana hua?😊

uday:ds hum kaal hi delhi jare han n wahi apni baki ki parayi complete karega...😉😉

ds:par achanak kiya hua ke ap itna jaldi delhi jana chate han koi masle wali baat han??😲😲

uday:ds aisa kuch nai han apko humpar bharosa han na

ds:jee ap jaiya ilkul jaiya or hume khabar karte rahiya ga

uday:jee dadi sahab

uday left her office n unnati vijay n jay ke pass ata han

jay:uday kiya hum bhi apke sath chale??😳😳

uday:jay nai hum akaila jayega n hume jaise hi kuch pata chala hum sab ko batayaga

vijay:okk par apna dhyan rakhna uday banna

uday:hmmm choti tum humari fikar maat karna okk

unnati :jee bhai

both hug

tommorow in morning

uday freshup hota han n niche breakfast ke liya ata han tabhi dekhta han sab yahi han jay vijay n unnati

wo sab breakfast karte han baatin karte han n uday chale jata han n wo delhi pouchta han o apni car mai apne banglow main jaraha han tabhi uski car age wali car se buhot zoor se touch hoti han wo car main ek girl han wo gussa main niche utarti han n uday ki car ki mirror ko knock knock karti han uday bahar ata han door open karke

n wo girl koi nai the none of them shradha the beatiful stunning stylixh girl shradha uske n uday ke kapre kuch is tarah ke han n dono eye contact main han

she wearing this dress n jweller

uday waaring black shirt n white pant

uday lost her beauty n both lash eye contact n uday lost beauty n manyata hair style pic

shradha:ohh hello mr. ...!!!!!😡😡😡

uday nodded n lost her beautiful hair dress her milky skin long hair n her eyes

shradha:helloo mr. i talk 2 you...😡

uday again nodded

shradha shake him

shradha:ohh hello...

he come his sense

uday:jee kahiya??😲😲kiya kaam han?? opss acha achaautograph chaya but sorry mera mood nai abhi waise u r looking so much hot n sexy..😉

shradha:u just shurt u hit my car n say mind ur language mr. apni had mai rahiya ziyada free mat hoiya

uday:acha oh i m sorry wo humara dhyan kahi or tha isliya apki car se touch hogaya

shradha:ager ap apne sense main nai han tu ghar par rahiya yaha maat aiya ya public place han apke banglow nai n autograph hum tumse q le kahi ke raja maharaja ho bloody full..😡😡

uday:hum YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH hai india ke sabse bare bussines man larkiya humpar mati han tu ya drama band karo hume pata han ya sab paise lene ka bahana han

uday apne voliet se 10000 nikal kar shradha ka hand pakkar ke use pakkara deta han zabbardasti

manyata:how dare you touch me ur bloody hands n hume tumhare paiso ki koi zarorat nai han

waha sab ya tamesha dekh re han n reporters bhi agaye han

shradha apne voliet se 5000 or nikalti han n uday ke 10000 ke sath uske face par phaikti han n say loud voice

shradha:ya lo or kahi jake tameez siko

uday forcefully pic her arms n pull towards him n he hold her arms tittly she feel very pain

uday:tumhari himat kaise hui humse aise baat karne ki??

manyata:chor mujhe..

uday:nai chorega kiya karogi

he lost his control n full angry she is also angry media click a snaps n video all peoples see shradha n uday

shradha:hume dard horaha han choro hume warna

uday:warna kiya??

shradha bit her hand n uday shradha ko chordeta han wo chale jati han n piche murti han n kahti han

shradha:tujhe tu main ek din dekhlogi han nai tu..

n wo chale jati han

n uday say to himself

uday:or hume ud din ka intezar rehaga miss han nai tu

he winks n smirks🥺😉

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guys next update 3 may ko friday ko i update chapter one
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Edited by shreya.kapoor - 12 years ago