MUSKAANE JHOOTI HAIN|~chapter 2 updated on pg 15~

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i know guys i have two stories to update, but what to do! this idea was hovering my mind for past many days and it provoked me to post itself! sorry cant help it! ok so now read the prologue. u might find it puzzling, but many of ur doubts will be solved after the character sketch

Much away from the hustle-bustle of the town lay a huge open ground, which was covered with lush green grass and whose periphery was surrounded by towering mountains. In the middle of the meadow lay huge shed enough to encompass their family. In the center of the shed, his lifeless body was laying down on the stack of wooden logs. Though the environment around may seem to be pleasant, but the atmosphere wasn't. Even the clouds were lamenting on his early exit. It was raining cats and dogs.

"DADA" she screamed at top of her voice as she fell down on her knees near his death bed of logs. She took his hands in hers and rubbed them, expecting that it would create some heat in the shivering atmosphere bringing him back to life. But alas! He was invited by death herself, from whose abode; no one has been successful in returning till date!

He couldn't see her crying like that. He came near her and placed his hand on her head and caressed her hair. Within no time, she flicked away his hand from her head. He knew she was angry with him. After sometime, again he came near her and placed his hand on her head and started to stroke it. This time, she allowed him to do it. Somewhere at the back of her mind, she knew he was the only one on whom she could trust completely, even more than herself! Seeing that she was allowing him to be near her, he proceeded even closer to her. After a few minutes, he made her stand up as her dada's last rituals had to be done. As she moved back, he hooked his hand around her waist, while she covered her face with her hands. The rituals were soon over.

The log which would set fire was brought. It had the power to heat up the air which made everyone shiver. But no one felt anything! It was the coldest day in everyone's life!

Alas! The logs were but on fire and within no time, the fire gulped him whole! She couldn't see her dada resting on the bed of fire and she turned away her face, hiding it in his embrace. He hugged her tightly. For the first time in his life, he had tears in his eyes. Death wasn't a new concept for him. He had seen many people of his blood die because of this filthy game. Well POLITICS has enough power, that it can build your whole empire within no time and destroy it from its root within no seconds!

The family members left as they weren't able to see their hero, their son burn and turn into ashes. The ladies were first to run away. Though the ladies went, she didn't go as she wasn't able to leave her dada alone. Still she stood in his embrace.

Finally the gents left leaving just 3 people there: him, her and her dada, who was burning to death. After some time, he broke the hug. She wasn't crying anymore as her stock of tears had dried up. He knew that is was of no use waiting there. So he left her and went outside in the rain. All had black umbrellas over their heads, but he didn't have. He preferred getting wet. He thought that would help washout his sins. He suddenly stopped as he felt her strong gaze over him. He turned around only to find her standing like a mannequin looking at him with empty eyes. His white kurti was drenched with water making it transparent. He came near the shed and extended his hand for her to hold. Without thinking she ran towards him. As soon as she was out of the shed, she was completely wet and her white anarkali suit was transparent sticking to her skin. She came and hugged him and once again cried.

It was the first rain of the year. Both knew tough times were waiting for them with open hands. It was not going to be easy ahead! And to face every challenge, it was necessary for both of them to stand together. Both found peace in each others arms.

ok so guys done with the prologue!
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how was it?
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love u all loads
yours
pranks aka sanju
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Posted: 12 years ago
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{CHARACTER SKETCH}



Devraj Patel: Son of the founder of Jana Sahakar Party. Unfortunately resides in the heavenly abode (matlab dead)

Mrinalini Patel: wife of late Devraj Patel. Looked after the party after his demise.

Samaraj Patel: Elder son of Mrinalini and Devraj. Affectionately known as Samar. Elder brother of Brijraj Patel.

Brijraj Patel: younger son of Mrinalini and Devraj. Younger brother of Samaraj.

Pratibha Patel: wife of Samaraj Patel.

Komal Patel: wife of Brijraj Patel.

Unnati Patel: Elder daughter of Samaraj and Pratibha Patel.

Vijayendra Patel: Son of Samar and Pratibha. Younger to Unnati Patel.

Manyata Patel: one and only daughter of Brijraj and Komal Patel. Younger to both Unnati and Vijay.

Prithviraj Singh: unfortunately is dead. Friend of Mrinalini Patel. A successful business tycoon.

Devika Singh: wife of late Prithviraj Singh. Unfortunately she too is dead.

Giriraj Singh: only son of Prithviraj and Devika Singh

Radhika Singh: wife of Giriraj Singh.

Udayveer Singh: son Giriraj and Radhika Singh

Pradeep Sharma: A successful businessman. Close to the family of Patels

Sudha Sharma: wife of Pradeep.

Jainandini Sharma: daughter of Pradeep and Sudha Sharma

so, here we come to the end of the character sketch!

well, could u all decipher something, anything or everything?

lolz!

how was it?

do tell!

well all the relations are jumbled up! some might be the ones u never thought of!

well ye to bas trailer hai, picture abhi baaki hai mere dost!

so don't abandon this ss! stay tuned for all new relations, bluffs, games, emotions and stories! do read the note below!

NOTE:

well guys, u have read the CS! well this idea is a little bit inspired from the bollywood movie "RAAJNEETI". u might find some similarities so informing you in advance! well i am too young for being a good political player or any kind of national level politics! so all the plans, the lafdas the kaands in this ss might look childish to you all! but please bare with those! don't stop reading , this! and do inform me immediately if anything sounds to be too unrealistic!

sorry for the lecture in the note! thanx for supporting me!
love u all loads!
hope i can please you with my story!
hope u enjoy it!
well now i'll take your leave!
its high time! i am blabbering for a long time now!
enjoy guys!
have a nice day ahead
do like and comment
hugz
muahh
yours
pranks aka sanju
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Edited by iluvmanveer - 12 years ago
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Edited by iluvmanveer - 12 years ago
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if i have missed out on any one, i am very very very sorry!
if u want to be added on the pm list, do like this post. u will get pms!
well thanx for the support!
love u guys alot!
Edited by iluvmanveer - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nycc awsomeee can u plzz pm me next part soon but i m very confuse who's dead??n who is she??plzz update soon prologue full o confusion but very nyc concept very nyc story plzz update soonn...😃
Edited by shreya.kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yupee first 1 to comment kyunki pehle wala res tha;-)! The prologue is awsumm sanju par kaun mar gaya? I know u will tel us later:-) thanx 4 the pm, plz continue soon...
Edited by nishaya... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome prologue

but full of confusion.
who died
who is he
who is she

continue soon
waiting for ur update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb prologue😃
it was so heart touching yaar..😭
as you said yourself, it was confusing..but very well written😛
can't wait to read further..do PM me for next update😉
Thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update
sound ws interasting ha
pls update 1st chapter n do pm me if it possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aweusm👏👏
loved d prologue...👍🏼
it send shivers down my spine
thinking abt who died???😕😕

do cont soon..
n plz do pm me 4 d further updates..

n lastly thnks 4 d pm..😃

aur kuch bolu???😕

kuch nahi hai🤣

ok den

bubye...🤗

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