MUSKAANE JHOOTI HAIN|~chapter 2 updated on pg 15~ - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago

Guys, back with muskaane jhooti hain! I had promised the next part of jeena isi ka naam hain on 14th, but thot of giving muskaane jhooti hain, and after this will come better late than never. So guys, so I need to give a precap, hope so it's a no, cuz I am starting with the 2nd chap. Enjoy the story…

CHAPTER 2:

Uday sank on the bench as the scenes of the day when his dadu n dadi died flashed before his eyes…

~~*~~ (on the day of Prithviraj and his wife's death) ~~*~~

There was a flood of people. Uday sat rite by the side of the two dead bodies. Uday hadn't shed a tear of sorrow just sat silently. People came and paid condolence and gave a pat on Uday's back signifying "all will be fine soon. Control yourself" and in return he did nothing.

Suddenly the flow of guests was parted into two parts as if mosses' stick was placed in between. 'The family' of Patels arrived. Unnati came ahead and sat beside Uday in a white traditional dress. She came and sat beside him. She placed one hand on his back, while other caressed his face. Nothing was spoken.

Mrinalini entered with her family. Her puffed, sour and red eyes told how much she had cried, but at the venue, not even the smallest drop of water flew from her eyes.

Uday just laid his head on Unnati's shoulder and this didn't go unnoticed by Mrinalini devi. Uday and Unnati were in the position for a couple of minutes. Mrinalini devi went out as the place was getting crowded followed by Giriraj, her two sons, their respective wives, some officials and Unnati came out.

Vijay came in running with all teary eyes. But didn't shed tears, but his eyes showed there can be a waterfall anytime. He went and just said 'Uday'. And that was followed by a small jerk as Uday hugged him with full force. Vijay spoke a few words of consoling and then he too went out. After her dada, Manyata came inside. She came and sat next to him. "Uday" she said. Uday couldn't control his tears now. He cried with whatever strength he had making her shoulder all wet and making even her cry. "Manyata, Manyata" he said as he cried. Every person inside let out a sigh of relief as finally cried or otherwise it was not good that he kept everything to himself.

~~*~~ (END) ~~*~~

"areh Uday kaha gaya?" he heard his father call out. He wiped his tears away, and got up. "dad, I am here" he said as he came out of the garden and did a brisk walk till the sitting room. "oh, aap yaha hain, humne pura ghar chaan mara. Chalo lets go ya yahi rukna hain?" asked Giriraj with a small laugh. "areh aap dono itni jaldi ja rahe ho? Uday aleast tu to ruk thodi aur der. Ek to itne dino baad mila hain aur uparse itni jaldi jar aha hain?" Manyata said as she came down the stairs. "Nahi Manyata, I have to go. Fir kabhi milenge" he said as he turned around. "chaliye dad" he said and started to make his way out. Giriraj, Manyata, Samar and Brij looked at each other bewildered as Uday never was able to decline Manyata's request or demand. "chalte hain" Giriraj said as he joined his hands and went out behind his son. As Giriraj came out, he saw that the car was waiting for him outside with Uday in the driver's seat. He came and sat next to him. As Giriraj sat, Uday immediately started the car

The drive till home was a ideal drive without rash driving and very very very pleasant for Giriraj. Giriraj was all praises for Uday. As Uday gave the keys in the driver's hand (so that the driver could park the car) Giriraj said, "beta, aaj to aapne hume bahot khush kiya hain! Wah, kya drive kiya hain. Humesha aise kyun nahi drive karte?" Uday just looked away and walked ahead saying, "dad, I want to alone for some time. Hum dono is topic pr baadme baat karte hain." Giriraj felt sad for his son and himself. Sad for Uday because his face clearly told how sad and gloomy he was feeling, and sad for himself because he wasn't able to understand what had happened to his son.

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Jainandini came running in the mahal. "hi vijay!!" she squelled. Vijay hugged her and J too hugged back. Manyata cam efrom behind n said, "tu sirf jaake dada ko gale lag ja, not me." "offo manyata samjha kar" J replied and the girls hugged. J n Unnati too shared hugz.

"Kitne dino baad aayi tu J" Manyata once again hugged J. Unnati nudged Manyata and said "ab J mat kaho use, say bhabi sa" and both the girls burst into laughter (guys just to inform u in advance, ia mrunning away as soon as I update this. don't want to get victim of chappal, tomatoes, jotas and andas) . Vijay blushed and so did J. "stop u both. Kitna tang karoge hume" J said half blushing.

Pradeep and Sudha arrived from behind. Vijay, Unnati and Manyata, bowed down and took blessings from both of them. "Mrinalini Devi kaha hain?" asked Pradeep, J's father. "wh andar study main hain" said Manyata pointing towards the study. Sudha sat there between the youngsters chatting with them while Pradeep hurriedly ran inside.

"kya main andar ayu Mrinalini devi?" asked pradeep. Mrinalini was reading something and she raised her head above to see who was there waiting for her. "jee ayiye. Hum aapki hi rah dekh rahe the" said Mrinalini devi.

"toh J aur Vijay ke shaadi ke baad aap hume financial support karne waale hain hunh??" Mrinalini devi said as if doubting Pradeep's intentions. "jee deviji. Aapke party ke bhi funds raise honge, aura b kharcha badhne bhi lagega party ka, very soon. Party ko jarurat padegi hi padegi. Aur iske badle hume…" pradeep ended in a continuation tone. "jee, hum aapko poora support karenge, IN ANY CONDITION AND IN ANY DIFFICULT MATTER" Mrinalini devi ensured and Pradeep smiled."Ab pura support hoga na?" asked Mrinalini to Pradeep. "Mrinalini ji. Ab to aap koi fikr hi na kare" Pradeep assured her and they shook hands.

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So guys, that's all from this chappy, as I mentioned in the bracket earlier, pms send karke main 9-2-11 hone waali hoon. So bye bye

Guys adding to ur disappointment, no promo. sorry if the chappy was short.

SORRY!!!
from urs-

Pranks aka Sanju

P.S.: Anju I just don't know how in the world u guessed J n Vijay to be fiances

Edited by iluvmanveer - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
yess first to comment
but one question why did you make all
bro sis couple like
uday and unnati now
jai and vijay anyway
it is great combo
a very new idea infact
the first part awnn poor uday
i felt so bad wish could go and hug him
and unnati then even vijay tried
but lastly manyata succeded
i have a feeling that uday have soft corner for manyata
ok the last part left many questions
but i will not rush and let you answer them'
thanks for pm
Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...nd thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
oye crazyyytt...
J and vijaycha lagna lavla???
unnati kuthe geli?????
hehehe no offence...
bichara Uday
manyatala nahi mhanala manyatala????
surely gonna pay fr this later...
hehehehe...
update soon...
bhari lihilayes..
nehmi sarkhach kadak...
do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
BRILLIANT UPDATE SANJU.LOVED IT LOADS.GREAT JOB.

OH DEAR UDAY WAS SAD IN D WHOLE UPDATE.HE BADLY MISSES HIS DADA DADI.

SO UDAY WAS MORE ATTACHED TO MANYATA FROM CHILDHOOD.DEN Y DID U MADE UDAY UNNATI JODI.EVIL EVIL SANJU.

HEHEHE...MAINE KAHA DHA NA J N VIJAY R FIANCES. IN D PROMO DAT LINE STRIKED ME.MANYATA TEASING DEM.TUM SIRF DADA KI HI GALE LAGOGE...THEIR I GOT IT.

LAST PART WAS SOMETHING SERIOUS.SOME MYSTRY IS COOKING.MAY B SOME DARK SIDE OF POLITICS USING POWER N MONEY.

ENJOYED D CHAPPY TO ITS CORE..EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT CHAPTER.
TRY TO CONTINUE SOON.DANX FOR PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome really loved it lol j and vijay blushing scene was funny... feel really sorry to see uday like this please update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG 😲
ITS A NICE WRITEN SWEETY U REALLY DO A GREAT WORK 👏 NOW COMING TO UR UPDATE ... !!!
seriously tell me who is uday fiance i think she is unnati n i think uday loves manyta oh god i have many question in my mind i think next clear my confusion by d way its a new concept n i love it ... actually i didn't imagine that vb n j as couple omg i m gone die now 😆 but its a cute concept n i loved it so nice written n continue aspe n thanx FoR the pm N FIRSTLY I HATE POLITICS BUT I LOVE THIS STORY !!!
Edited by priyash.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
making bro and sisters
that is hilours
but i like and i am sure that deep down uday have feelings for manayta
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it loads
Thanks for the pm n plz update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

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