TDLS(Dark Love)-Bk 2. Imp note on Pg 93 - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice updt...nd thanku for the pm...cont soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome blossom great yr...
loved it loads...
toh finally manyata book padhegi ...
and Uday loves manyata as well as his chand...
that's so sweet...
kurwakiz scene was nicely written...
awesome update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi


Loved the update gargi. It was awsome and lovely.---Thanks andy😳your welcome😃

But wasnt it short?---i know Andy...but my net was slow today n i got tired of writing after that...i even had my lunch just at 12am.....becoz of the update...on the contrary i was thinking to give a big update where the book parts would also come but i could not complete...so ull get it in the next chapterok, i get it, we readers are soo greedy for long updates we forget what is going in the mind of writers..😭.


Somewhere deep in my heart i thought it was uday. I know its sounds stupid, but i felt so.---How could you?...😕...My Uday can't do that...He has done stupid things in his last birth..not this time again really i know i was stupid but still that doubt was still strong. you know my"uday" does evil things so i looked at shaurya with that eyes

Kurwakis mom is so evil . She gave me creeps. ---Yes she is...but she is also right in her way... but thats selfishness


So finally manyata got to know that the book is written in sanscrit.---Yes andy...in fact i was thinking to make it in a rajasthani dialect which would sound more realistic...but then i thought that won't be very good as many people still speak the dialects even today...we needed something that is almost extinct or unknown but isnt sanscrit still being taught in schools, in my place there are even degree cources in sanskrit, just one doubt. how many languages do you know? you seem so good in alll languages

Looking forward for the story
just one doubt. Uday wanted manyata to be his. But who is opposed to it?---There you go...You got it right...How can a story have just a love-sick couple?..it won't be fun that way right?ah!! i can see the evil side of you peeping out andi like it. make their lovestory a rollercoaster ride
Thanks for the pm and cntinue soon. I hope u are "high" now---M not Andy...this job thing is killing me..relax gargi there is no point worrying about it na, be calm and your dream job will come to find you.bt still today m a bit positive as tomorow my oldest frend is coming to meet me...😛thats nice have fun

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Posted: 12 years ago
nyschhh update gargi

Hmm so manyata now needs to learn the language and read her diary
M Telling u manyata is as slow as a snail ,i mean she takes ages to do anythingg...cant she do things quick??

Soo it was chunni bai who killed vishal...i guessd it ryt it was again a witch who wanted sumthing frm chandralekha...
Now who is this new person who dsnt loves his/her life and get into bad books of witches who wants the lovers to unite

Cont soon :)
Edited by sweetshab - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetshab

nyschhh update gargi

Hmm so manyata now needs to learn the language and read her diary
M Telling u manyata is as slow as a snail ,i mean she takes ages to do anythingg...cant she do things quick??

Soo it was chunni bai who killed vishal...i guessd it ryt it was again a witch who wanted sumthing frm chandralekha...
Now who is this new person who dsnt loves his/her life and get into bad books of witches who wants the lovers to unite

Cont soon :)



sweetshab]nyschhh update gargi--Thanks shabs...😳

Hmm so manyata now needs to learn the language and read her diary---Yes or else how will she read it...she can't ask anyone about it..

M Telling u manyata is as slow as a snail ,i mean she takes ages to do anythingg...cant she do things quick??-----How can you do this quick shabs?😕...She doesn't know sanskrit...

Soo it was chunni bai who killed vishal...i guessd it ryt it was again a witch who wanted sumthing frm chandralekha...Yes


Now who is this new person who dsnt loves his/her life and get into bad books of witches who wants the lovers to unite----u have to wait to know that😉

Cont soon :)----I will after the 45 likes😊

Thanks for the great comments shabs😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Gargi , comment edited pg 23 . THANKS 😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

RES😊

edited :
Awesome update Gargi 👏. -----Thanks Navi
So , Chunni bai is Kurwaki's mom😕. Wasn't she the old witch Maharaj Shaurya approached right at the beginning of your story 🤔? --------You got that right...I knew you would remember her😛...i wanted to have someone else as her mom first but then thought to keep it chunni bai...To link it with another part of the old times which ull know in the course of the story...


FASCINATING!!!!!!!!! I liked the whole sequence between mother-witch & daughter-witch😃!-----My pleasure that you liked that😳
Now we finally know the secret 😉. All the witches have been cursed by Chandralekha , and the only way for them to obtain salvation is if the lover's reunite in this birth ... very interesting 👍🏼. Kurwaki better wave her magic-wand and get the love-story moving faster😉. --------yes she better do something about this or we will see a lot of havoc coming in...And actually m planning for a world war 3 between the humans n the witches😆😈
Manyata needs to decipher that sanskrit book pronto ... I'm so excited thinking about what she's gonna discover !!!!-----------Ofcourse Navi ill try to make that interesting n misleading too😉
This was my favourite line in the update 😳:
"I loved you Chanda and i will always love you Manyata..."---I knew you would love this line...When i was writing this line i thought you would say this😳
But , who is the new villain ... could it be Manyata's grand-mother 😉?----Do you really think Manyata's grandmother is a lesbo?😡..no she is not...There is someone else who doesn't want to see the cuchicoo between them..and am going to give a character sketch with images too very soon, so that you can find about that person😆
Please continue soon ,
thanks for the pm😊.--------Your welcome Navi...😊
Thoroughly loved the chapter ❤️.----My pleasure again🤗



Thanks once again for this beautiful comment🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

Fantastic update...bt it was too short...it was kuwarki mom who killed vishal i thought it was uday...uday is desperate to see manyata...i love that...finally manyata come close to her past...nd thnx for pm...



Thanks prerna...i know it was short...next time ill make a long one..sorry for this time😊...Yes it was not Uday but Kurwaki...

yes he is in love with this modern Manyata now...😳

Yes finally manyata will know that its her future...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

Fantastic update...bt it was too short...it was kuwarki mom who killed vishal i thought it was uday...uday is desperate to see manyata...i love that...finally manyata come close to her past...nd thnx for pm...



Thanks prerna...i know it was short...next time ill make a long one..sorry for this time😊...Yes it was not Uday but Kurwaki...

yes he is in love with this modern Manyata now...😳

Yes finally manyata will know that its her future...

Thanks for the great comment Prerna...😊

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