TDLS(Dark Love)-Bk 2. Imp note on Pg 93 - Page 15

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

awesome Gargi!!

it really sent goosebumps on my skin!!

well umm... what can i say more..

yeah, the way Vishal suddenly woke up was really scary

i could actually kinda figure out the plain white eyes and then i suddenly stopped figuring out as it was more than scary.

well were those the witches who were trying to bring Manyata back near Vishal or specifically Manyata??

whats in that book???

k now really Uday / Shurya hasn't killed Vishal and the witches are responsible..

so many questions, so many mysteries, so many clues yet no answers, yet no firm words to define things!!

how can u manage all this Gargi??

hope i could get a bit of your color!

well, the chapter was rocking, scary, sensational, mysterious, frightening, and with so many adjectives!!

thanx gargi for such a beautiful epi!

u rock

muahh

hugz

Originally posted by: priyash..

i love this ff ... wat a story ... man ... unbealiveable vishal's death its really scary 4 me... i hate him but seriously his death was really scary ...😲 mujhe uske liye bhoth bura lag rha hai ... wat happened wid manveer ... why they r sepreated ... i m really confused i think so us booth ni srry witch ki waje se ...😕 ...i m still ... waiting 4 ur next update ... plz gargi ... plz pm ...me ... 😊 very well written ... 👏

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

Nice update...nd thnx for pm...

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

wow what an update!

Originally posted by: sweetshab

nice update gargi
U always leave us cliff hanging wid ur mysterious updates
Nd damnnn y is manyta sooo slow ..as if she is an reincarantion of snail??
Udayless update..though u gave us indo abt his whereabouts it was princey-less update :P

Cont soonn
or i may come to haunt u :P

👏👏GREAT UPDATE GARGI.. STORY IS UNRAVELLING SO WELL. I MEAN I STILL HAVE SO MANY QUESTIONS LIKE WHO, WHY AND WHEN??😆 LOL BUT THATS THE WHOLE POINT OF READING THE STORY AND ACTUALLY KEEP THE INTRUIGE AND MYSTERY INTACT. MISSED UDAY AGAIN... WELL HE HAD TO GO AFTER ALL HIS BUSINESS IS SUFFERING WITHOUT HIM AND HOPEFULLY OUR SLOW WAIT MAKE THAT VERY SLOW MANYATA FIGURES OUT WHO HE REALLY IS... LOL BUT THAT SEEMS LIKE A LONG SHOT FOR HER😆😆.. OH GOD AND THIS KURWAKI'S MOM KAHA ??? ISKA CHAKAR KYA HAI? I KNOW I KNOW WILL WAIT FOR IT TO UNRAVEL... WELL I MUST SAY I QUIET LIKE THE SPIRITS... LOL😆 ATLEAST WE KNOW THEY WILL GET RID OF ANYONE WHO COMES IN MANVEERS WAY LIKE VISHAL.. BECHARA😆 BUT HE NEEDED TO GO... GARGI ONCE AGAIN.. BRILLIANT AND LOVED IT.. CONTINUE SOONA ND PLEASE GET UDAY BACK FROM LONDON SOON TOOO😉

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Hey What's ur name?😊...I know everyone felt bad for Vishal but that was his fate to die a horrible death😕...Manveer is coming dear...There is always a bit of seperation at times untill Manyata really realises something for Shaurya/Uday...

yes ill PM the next time i update...

Thanks for reading and your valuable comments...🤗

Originally posted by: priyash..

opppsss sorry i forgot 2 tell my name ... hey i m kritika i m new reader ... yup vishal's death its really horrible ...4 me ... i don't know wat was there ... its paranormal activity types ... i loved 2 read a horror ...story really finally finally manveer r coming soon i miss them like a hell ...its time 2 party 🥳lol ...😆😆 very well written 👏 gargi ... 😃

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

awesome Gargi!!-------Thanks Sanju😳 pleasure is all mine

it really sent goosebumps on my skin!!-----Really?..i didn't knew this chapter will get so scary🤔 yeah it was!not tooo much but a bit! (only when u imagine those things)

well umm... what can i say more..

yeah, the way Vishal suddenly woke up was really scary-----I tried to make that part scary and actually wanted to detail that scene but then thought ill lose all my readers if i continue with ghastly scenes😆 lolz. yeah it might happen. point to be noted

i could actually kinda figure out the plain white eyes and then i suddenly stopped figuring out as it was more than scary.

well were those the witches who were trying to bring Manyata back near Vishal or specifically Manyata??-----Technically all the witches wants the same thing...Manveer!...just like us...but there is one who can force this to happen!..She is the one who is doing all this whos this "she" who is doing this! the witches are so good! i love those witches! go witches go.go witches go, hum tumhare saath hain!

whats in that book???-----Ummm..i can't tell you that now...you will have to wait to know that..😉 why cant u tell me! come on na!

k now really Uday / Shurya hasn't killed Vishal and the witches are responsible..Yes Uday didn't kill Vishal like most of the people thought it..😊..Happy?.. nah. not happy! Uday should have killed his damn f**king enemy

so many questions, so many mysteries, so many clues yet no answers, yet no firm words to define things!!----Is this getting too complicated?.. not at all! continue! its perfect

how can u manage all this Gargi??---Yes Sanju tell me about it..Sometimes it becomes a bit difficult n it makes the updates long...but then eventually i come back to my senses n make it more dark to reveal😉 hmm.. so naughty.

hope i could get a bit of your color!----No Sanju..thanks for the compliment but you are better the way you are..you won't like to make a complicated story like me...😕..People get confused at times with the plot... who gets confused?? whats confusing? i love suspense!

well, the chapter was rocking, scary, sensational, mysterious, frightening, and with so many adjectives!!

thanx gargi for such a beautiful epi!------Well thanks to you for such a wonderful comment and filling your replies with such grt adjectives...🤗 mention not gargs! pleasure is all mine! hugz

u rock

muahh

hugz -------------U rock too Sanju!!..🤗🤗 aww...

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Hi kritika!😛...zada party mat karo...😉..Manveer might again seperate after sometime