TDLS(Dark Love)-Bk 2. Imp note on Pg 93 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
res yupii first to comment unres Awesome loved da chappy u r really superb donnot mind but i m super happy dat vishal died awnn poor manyata she izz so confused jiji can u plzz update abt rajkumari chand i m waiting to know wat happened wid sharya update asap i pressed like button so plzz pm me
Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey gargi i loved this chapter like alot alot alot...
every word was written beautifully and da song gaved it a charm...
i was literally feeling like i was watching some kind of horror movie scene... da redit goes to you for writing so well that reader could actually visualize everything...
Now coming to the contents of the update...
it was bit scary for me... no matter how much vishal was cruel he didnt deserved to be treated this way... everyone is mean in its own way so was he... but he did suffered more than he should have...
iam now really curious to find out who this new ghosty is...
but i dont know y i get feeling like this kuwarki is also negative character... sometimes i feel like she loves shaurrya and instead of helping him she in disguise is making manyata hate him... but its just a guess...
do update fast this time n yea dont forget to pm me:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome Gargi!!
it really sent goosebumps on my skin!!
well umm... what can i say more..
yeah, the way Vishal suddenly woke up was really scary
i could actually kinda figure out the plain white eyes and then i suddenly stopped figuring out as it was more than scary.
well were those the witches who were trying to bring Manyata back near Vishal or specifically Manyata??
whats in that book???
k now really Uday / Shurya hasn't killed Vishal and the witches are responsible..
so many questions, so many mysteries, so many clues yet no answers, yet no firm words to define things!!
how can u manage all this Gargi??
hope i could get a bit of your color!
well, the chapter was rocking, scary, sensational, mysterious, frightening, and with so many adjectives!!
thanx gargi for such a beautiful epi!
u rock
muahh
hugz

Edited by iluvmanveer - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


Thank You to all the readers who liked the previous chapter😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!! gargi good update loved it.👏
the supernatural element in the story is becoming more scary
really the supernatural evil is more terrible than human evil
poor vishal
such a horrible death
good thing that manyta got curious about the connection bw uday and shaurya
what is kurwaki 's ma got to do with manvveer
many unanswered questions
cant wait to know more
update sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

hey gargi i loved this chapter like alot alot alot...

every word was written beautifully and da song gaved it a charm...
i was literally feeling like i was watching some kind of horror movie scene... da redit goes to you for writing so well that reader could actually visualize everything...
Now coming to the contents of the update...
it was bit scary for me... no matter how much vishal was cruel he didnt deserved to be treated this way... everyone is mean in its own way so was he... but he did suffered more than he should have...
iam now really curious to find out who this new ghosty is...
but i dont know y i get feeling like this kuwarki is also negative character... sometimes i feel like she loves shaurrya and instead of helping him she in disguise is making manyata hate him... but its just a guess...
do update fast this time n yea dont forget to pm me:)


Thanks sarah...glad you liked it..Was it really like a horror movie scene?...i tried to make it one...bt i was myself a bit scared later😆..

.i wanted to make it scary bt ya what happened with Vishal was really bad...Well what can you expect from spirits......besides they wanted to send a msg to Manyata and udayveer...

Well you will know about this new ghosty in the upcoming chapters😊

Well Kurwaki was a grey shade earlier n she makes it difficult at times bt now she is a positive character.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous update Gargi 👍🏼. Wow ... poor Vishal - what a way to die. (Now , don't get me wrong ... I'M NOT SAD THAT HE's DEAD - I just feel bad that he died without having his family with him🤢 , and basically - he died a NAMELESS PERSON!) Uday is away in London on business - I hope he sorts that out fast and get back😡. Maybe , by the time , he returns ; Manyata would've figured out his identity😉 ... hoping (sigh)! So , the evil-doer is Kurwaki's mother😲!!!! As if 1 witch wasn't enough for this ff😆!!!! Waiting to read more about her - she seems fascinating😳 ... and POWERFUL!!!
Loved the chapter Gargi , please continue soon ... ... thanx 4 the PM😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Fabulous update Gargi 👍🏼. Wow ... poor Vishal - what a way to die. (Now , don't get me wrong ... I'M NOT SAD THAT HE's DEAD - I just feel bad that he died without having his family with him🤢 , and basically - he died a NAMELESS PERSON!) Uday is away in London on business - I hope he sorts that out fast and get back😡. Maybe , by the time , he returns ; Manyata would've figured out his identity😉 ... hoping (sigh)! So , the evil-doer is Kurwaki's mother😲!!!! As if 1 witch wasn't enough for this ff😆!!!! Waiting to read more about her - she seems fascinating😳 ... and POWERFUL!!!

Loved the chapter Gargi , please continue soon ... ... thanx 4 the PM😊.


Originally posted by: ...navina...

Fabulous update Gargi 👍🏼.---thanks Navi..😳 Wow ... poor Vishal - what a way to die. (Now , don't get me wrong ... I'M NOT SAD THAT HE's DEAD - I just feel bad that he died without having his family with him🤢 , and basically - he died a NAMELESS PERSON!)---I know your not sad for him bt ya he died a terrible death and wihout his parents nearby😕 Uday is away in London on business - I hope he sorts that out fast and get back😡. Maybe , by the time , he returns ; Manyata would've figured out his identity😉 ... hoping (sigh)!----You can only hope n keep hoping 😉 because this time when Uday comes, he will come soon, but he will again go back and for long time😭 So , the evil-doer is Kurwaki's mother😲!!!! As if 1 witch wasn't enough for this ff😆!!!! Waiting to read more about her - she seems fascinating😳 ... and POWERFUL!!!--Yes she is powerful, after all she is a witch and that too a dead witch😈

Loved the chapter Gargi ,please continue soon ...... thanx 4 the PM😊.----Mention not Navi..i would love to PM you anyday..😳..after all you are my crush😳😆


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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks dear😊

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