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time had paused for manyata she stood there like a statue ,there was a surging ,seething ,murmuring crowd of people and soon Bridgraaj 's figure was becoming distinct ,he had com here as Adhiraaj asked him to come for a meeting ,he himself was innocent and unaware of the plan his family had laid a single mistake that was going to tear apart father -daughter relationship .Here manyata was loosing her patience ,she smiled to herself as tears of joy fell from her eyes she rushed to the reception but by then bridgraaj had already gone she stood there looking for him for some time and being unable to find him she asked the receptionist
MANYATA;Where did that man go?
RECEPTIONIST:which man madame?
MANYATA:He was standing right here yea Bridgraaj singh rajpoot where did he go?
she said wiping her tears and shalowing hard
RECEPTIONIST;oh madame he went to second floor room 258
MANYATA;Thank you so much
she smiled and rushed to the elevator her heart beat even got faster as she finally reached butterflies ran in her stomach as she reached she saw him heading towards a room she went back of him tip toe without him noticing finally he stopped near that room and knocked  while manyata hide herself behind a huge pillar and what she saw from her eyes her heart rejected to believe she saw a skiny girl of her age maybe a forigner with just what you can call a piece of cloth exposing her body she moved her fingure in a seductive way and pulled bridgraaj inside and the door was shut then ,manyata stood there her legs were rooted to the ground her dad for whom her mother and she herself had waited for so long and loved him endlessly was busy taking his pleasure rounds with girls of his own daughter age that was disguisting manyata headed back to her room she was lost in a world of her own tears fell off her eyes as she said herself
MANYATA:Now what shall i do what will i tell mom and how could he
without her noticing manyata missed a few steps and rolled off the steps she fell down from the steps ,87 steps she missed and landed up unconcious and all wounded the last thing she saw was a tall guy and she closed her eyes ,the tall guy was none other than aryaan singh rajpoot he knelled a bit and turned her face towards his ,aryaan was amazed he had never seen such anglelic beauty blood oozed from her forehead as he took her in his arms and rushed to the car on normal note he would have left such people on their own but this girl was different her beauty had already enchanted him as he drove her to the hospital and immediately her treatment was started it took her some hours to regain conciousness and whole time aryaan was by her side he wanted to be there when she gain her conciousness  as the doctor announced that she was fine now he rushed inside to see her looking blankly at the celling as tears roleld off her eyes for the first time aryaan felt bad seeing a girl cry he felt like she was too innocent she was just like a wet soaked puppy in rain without any shelter and he needed to be there for her to protect her ,he had never felt such for any girl except his aunty komal as she was more like a mom to him ,he was so excited about the little baby coming but he really went under deppression after knowing that aunty komal along with his new born baby sister had left the home and that is why in guidance of his dad he turned dark and hard core ,pushing all thoughts back of his head he finally spoke
ARYAAN:are you fine?
MANYATA;can you please leave me alone for sometime please
she pleded and he for some unknown reason could not deny her and quitely stepped outside as the doctors handed him her phone and said
DOCTOR:aryaan sir this is her phone some one have been calling for quite a while by the way sir where did you get this girl ?
ARYAAN:you are getting paid for doing treatment not for asking question now leave
DOCTOR:Sorry aryaan sir
saying this the doctor left as her phone started to beep again in the same tune he took the call on her behalf and the caller said
KOMAL:manyataa are you fine beta did you reach why were you not receiving my call beta you know na how much i get tensed now why are you not answering?
Tears rolled off aryaan eyes this voice was a familiar one which freshened one of his old wound that he suppressed for so many years
FLASHBACK
Aryaan came running inside and slept on her lap as komal turned her face
KOMAL:i am not going to talk to aryaan ever again
aryaan sat up with teary eyes and asked
ARYAAN;why mumma what did i do ?
KOMAL;Today you went to play and did not even bother to tell me
ARYAAN:i am sorry mumma actually uday was in a rush so we did not get to tell you
KOMAL:yes you and your best friend uday tell him i won't talk to him either you both have started to ignore me and my baby for your games
ARYAAN:no mumma instead we went to toy shop look what we bought ?
saying this he pulled out two toys one a soft toy and another a toy gun komal took the toy gun in her hand and with tears she said
KOMAL:Aryaan how are you sure that it is a baby boy only
ARYAAN:mumma we both are sure its a baby girl so soft toy to play with and a toy gun so that she can protect herself i want nothing to harm my baby sister mumma you know uday said he wants to marry my baby sister
KOMAL:Really so what did you say?
ARYAAN:i said let her come to earth if she too likes him  then only i will get her married
at this komal pulled him for a strong hug and kissed his forhead
FLASHBACK OVER
now things had changed uday was no more his friend now he had become his biggest enemy although aryaan still found it a zigsaw puzzle for uday 's hatred towards his family but now aryaan was holding the phone tears rolled off his eyes and he was shaking as he said
ARYAAN ;MUMMADONE WITH THIS CHAPPY
NEXT UPDATE NEXT FRIDAY

Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
PROMO FOR CHAPPY FIVE
MANYATA ENTRY IN MRINALINI 'S HOUSE
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THANKS I AM GLAD U LIKED IT
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Posted: 12 years ago
it wass awesomeee!!!!!!!!! btt bechari manyta,uday ne usko nikal diyaa!!!!! uska dad bhi aise hai!!!!! aryaan and mnyata scne was lovelyy!!!!!! uday and aryan r now enemiess!!!!!!! do cntinueee soon!!!!!😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updates Anni👏.
Can't believe Uday threw Manyata out of his jeep because he got jealous😆.
Oh no ... Brijraj and Manyata's relationship is ruined😭. Hope she believes him ... when he does explain what really happened there!
Aryaan's part was great. I'm so glad he recognised Komal's voice😳. The flashback was too cute. Little Uday was already planning his marriage at that time😉.
Please continue soon😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pia.raha

it wass awesomeee!!!!!!!!! btt bechari manyta,uday ne usko nikal diyaa!!!!! uska dad bhi aise hai!!!!! aryaan and mnyata scne was lovelyy!!!!!! uday and aryan r now enemiess!!!!!!! do cntinueee soon!!!!!😊😊


thanks a lot
he did kick her
and that is what will start world war three
yes for one mistake evrything turned upside down
i am glad you liked it
next friday😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Awesome updates Anni👏.

Can't believe Uday threw Manyata out of his jeep because he got jealous😆.
Oh no ... Brijraj and Manyata's relationship is ruined😭. Hope she believes him ... when he does explain what really happened there!
Aryaan's part was great. I'm so glad he recognised Komal's voice😳. The flashback was too cute. Little Uday was already planning his marriage at that time😉.
Please continue soon😊.


yes but it is just the begining of his possesive ness
yea but it will take a lot of time because more misunderstanding are going to arise in father daughter relationship
yea and they were bestest of friends
but one mistake of adhiraaj ruined everything
next friday is the next update
glad you liked it😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow nice update anni
loved both update n flashbak scene ws so cute
uday n aryan r bestfrend
thnx fr pm n cntinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Karkit

Wow nice update anni
loved both update n flashbak scene ws so cute
uday n aryan r bestfrend
thnx fr pm n cntinue soon


I AM GLAD YOU LIKED IT
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Posted: 12 years ago

NOTE :This update is specially dedicated to ...Zina... very bery happy birthday hope you like it
The moon spreads its light all over the city ,the winds blew soflty giving a pleasant feeling to the people ,the cicada and other insect sang to an unique tone to which the leaves twirled around and danced to it ,the hospital was in a state of peace and the corridor developed silence aryaan legs were rooted to the ground and he felt a lump struck in his throat ,unknown to himself the tears that had been stored this many years started to roll down his check and he felt like a five year old boy for whom his komal aunty meant everything as his chains of thoughts were broken by soft sobs and he asked concerned
ARYAAN:mumma you are crying ?
KOMAL:aryaan is this you my sweet boy
ARYAAN:yes mumma it me
they could hear sobs from both the sides but it was a cry of happiness ,a cry of the reunion of a mother and son , both could not hold back there tears and cried out there heart to aryaan it felt like although she was far from him still she was wipping off his tears and softly patting his head after a lot of crying when finally they spoke to each other ,they spoke how there life proceeded after that incident aryaan heart ached for komal and all that she suffered occasionaly he chuckled excited hearing about his sister ,on the mention of her marriage he a feeling of possesive ness suddenly grew inside him ,as for komal she was on the urge of crying after hearing aryaan part of story and somewhere for her only he getting indulge in drugs but biggest shock aryaan got when komal said he was answering his sister phone he wrapped up the conversation and disconnected the call and rushed inside her room ,her wide eyes were closed by now he came near to her ,she looked like a sleeping wax doll who just a bit of heat would melt ,she shivered as the cold winds hit her soft tender skin he pulled over a blanket on her body to prevent her from melting as by his touch she opened her big wide eyes and looked at him ,they looked at each other and finally aryaan broke the silence he strenched out his hands and said
ARYAAN:my name is aryaan ...aryaan singh rajpoot the son of adhiraaj singh rajpoot your cousin brother
manyata looked at him life is really unpredictable earlier in the morning when she prayed her stars to
make her meet it payed no deeds to her prayer and now when she wanted to run away from all this after getting betrayed by her OWN father her stars landed her right infront of her family ,as she rolled her eyes and said
MANYATA:i think you are mistaking me to be someone
ARYAAN;no you are the daughter of Komal aunty and Bridgraaj uncle right
MANYATA;i do not know what are you talking about my mom name is indeed komal but my dad 's dead
the last few words were not a lie that is what she wanted after what she saw .since childhood she had seen her mother suffer and do so much for her dad this was definately not the man her mother had been talking about so that is what makes him death ,and no she wanted all the strings and tangle with her dad to be broken but her this speech made aryaan really angry as he glared at her and said
ARYAAN:what are you talking about your dad is still alive come i will take you there come along with me
MANYATA:Excuse me did i ask you to give me a tour to my family no na so just buzz off i am glad you took me to this hospital and i always will thank you as a stranger it was more than enough what you did for me but now stop ok
ARYAAN;stranger what are you talking about manyata you are my sister ok my small sister you have to come with me please
tears stated to swell in his eyes he had never excepted such harshness from his sister it was heart breaking for him as her heart too melted she knew aryaan quite well as her childhood was filled with his stories she knew he was more like his own brother and in her imagination she had already planned to give all the love and respect needed to form a strong sister -brother bond ,she hated herself for hurting him both her own state of mind was disturbed after seeing her father but she no more wanted to punish her brother who had done so many things for her mother ,she took his hands in her tears were swelled in both of them eyes as she said finally convinced by her tears
MANYATA;Bhai please do not cry
ARYAAN:what did you call me? [getting all emotional]
MANYATA:bhai my sweet big bro i was just playing a prank on you and look there you got trapped
she said with a mischevious smile for which bond she had planned so long it did not even take a second to form as he took her in his embrace
ARYAAN:i am so happy today now choti lets go home everybody
manyata gave a fake smile as she knew aryaan was giving a false assurance because nobody would ever be happy seeing her but to keep her brother 's heart she nodded her head in a yes the next few hours passed by completing the formalities of the hospital as with very much love and care aryaan put her inside the brand new scorpio and the journey began towards manyata past
done with this chappy
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thanks

Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago

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