nadaan parindey chapter 8 and 9 - Page 9

Originally posted by: -Zina-

wonderful updatre...
i want more manveer nxt time..
thanks fot the pm.

thx glad you liked it
iw ill continue asap and pm u

amboo!! wat a chapter!
thik hain tune akash aur manyata ko engagement tk milaya. pr akash manyata ko princess bulaye, nt accepted! aisa kyun kiya tumne! no reh! waise engagement badi dhumdham se hui hain! ladkiyan, akash ki shaadi ho rahi hain dekh kr envy nahi hui, ye accha kiya. no one is jealous of manyata fr getting akash as hubby! lolz man hi man sochte honge accha hua, ye geek rastese hat gaya! lolz! sry fr reading late. very busy going out! will catch up with all your updates soon!

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

amboo!! wat a chapter!
thik hain tune akash aur manyata ko engagement tk milaya. pr akash manyata ko princess bulaye, nt accepted! aisa kyun kiya tumne! no reh! waise engagement badi dhumdham se hui hain! ladkiyan, akash ki shaadi ho rahi hain dekh kr envy nahi hui, ye accha kiya. no one is jealous of manyata fr getting akash as hubby! lolz man hi man sochte honge accha hua, ye geek rastese hat gaya! lolz! sry fr reading late. very busy going out! will catch up with all your updates soon!

its ok i am just glad dat u liked it
yea no one will be jealous of that greek😆
i will update asap and pm u😳

Very nice update anesha
really love ur concepts
cant wait to read manveer meeting

Originally posted by: andy.a

Very nice update anesha
really love ur concepts
cant wait to read manveer meeting

thank you soo much
i am glad you liked it
yea i will update and pm u 😳

It was a big day in Jaipur ,the whole city was decorated like a new bride and people were all hooting and cheering ,it was indeed the most awaited day Mrinalini 's elder son ,Adhiraaj won the election as the MLA again and now he was talking rounds of the city along with his body guards as people and media showered flower and sang songs in his honour after a tiring ride of about 2 hours he reached his home
THE RAJPOOT MANSION
he was greeted with much love and affection by Mrinalini and Giriraaj as the thrio sat and after discussing some buisness deal he asked
ADHIRAAJ:maasa where is bridgraaj?
MRINALINI:where do you accept him to be dear you know your brother better than i know my son
GIRIRAAJ:adhiraaj bhaisa bridg bhai is again mourning in the loss of his wife
ADHIRAAJ:uff 20 years have passed and still he could not get over that puny thing
MRINALINI:but what keeps me wondering is where is komal and that sinfull daughter of her last week when i visited the rajpoorohit he said that all my current miseries are due to this girl
ADHIRAAJ;but we are not going to search for her we will do some havaan and get this bad luck charm away but we cannot let that witch enter our home
TAKE WITH RESPECT SHE IS MY DAUGHTER came the cold reply from the bridgraaj everybodies eyes turned towards him ,he was a changed person now,his overgrown beard which was unshaven for years ,his sulken checks the dark circles which was the prove that he spend sleepless night with the thought of Komal he can and shot glances at adhiraaj
ADHIRAAJ:bridgraaj get over her its 20 years
GIRIRAAJ;yea bhai and moreover you can always get remarried you will find more beautiful ,young and preety girl than her
MRINALINI:yea finally a girl who can give me a son as grandchild
bridgraaj rising temperature knew no bounds as he said
BRIDGRAAJ:i cannot believe this many years passed but still your behavior is unchanged maasa inspite of you being a mother yourself aren't you supposed to be ashamed talking about my daughter like that and giriraaj bhaisa if now menuka bhabhi plays to divorce you and remarry will you accept
GIRIRAAJ:one tight slap across her face would set things right she is married and with her husband alive it is like going against her hindu vedas
BRIDGRAAJ:why then are you telling me to marry huh
ADHIRAAJ:bridgraaj enough of those flimy dialogue the truth is that womens are meant to be beneath our feet
BRIDGRAAJ;oh really wasn't it you adhiraaj bhaisa who was giving a speech on rights of a girl to win votes its ok making you people understand is like screaming at a stone so i shall take my leave now
saying this bridgraaj left the home leaving them in utter confusion and silence finally after a long time adhiraaj broke the silence with a evil grin on his face
ADHIRAAJ:maasa did 'nt i tell he ahs gone mad i think he needs some temptation giriraaj what about the foreign model
GIRIRAAJ:which model are you talking about?
ADHIRAAJ:do not play innocent the chickwith whom you checked in yesterday in hotel Orator
at this mrinalini gave one of her smile as giriraaj continued
GIRIRAAJ;so tonight we shall get bridgraaj with her i am sure he will enjoy
ADHIRAAJ:but where is he?
GIRIRAAJ:don't you know that today is that witsh oh my appologies that his daughter 's birthday as usual he has gone to temple to pray for his daughter
MRINALINI:now i shall take leave its time for me to chat my prayers i need to keep Maa Lakshmi happy
ADHIRAAJ:i think even i need to go
the trio went to their respective ways
JAIPUR STATION
Manyata got down of the train as the sun smiled at her and dragging her luggage out with great difficulty finally she managed to make her way out of the surging crowd into the taxi stand she saw many taxi pilled up in a neat row ,she felt an unknown fear ,as there was hardly nay girls and even if there was all were covered from head to toe in sarii people really gave her a weird look ,akash was certainly right coming to meet your family that also with short and tight tee was not suitable ,people were giving weird looks to her and for the first time she felt her dress was not covering her much but being the girl she had been she pushed all the thoughts in the back of her mind and before she could even speak a taxi drivers came rushing to her ,by a seconds she was surrounded by a drivers who were shouting and making there best attempt to make her convince to travel with them ,manyata was weak she had never been in such situation ,she started to sweat and moreover there language was soo hard to cope up with andfinally she saw a ray of hope in the dark a tall ,dark figure began to appear as in a rowdy tone someone barked

MAN:What is going on there?

all the taxi driver got separated as she got a clearer view of the guy ,he was muscularine ,tall ,fair just like a rajput king and as for him ,his eyes could hardly see anything other than the beautifull sight in front of him just before some times he had been praying to god to make him meet with his soul mate today which was his birthday and his parents death anniversary ,he was stunned for the first time he had seen such an anglelic figure she was fair with black shorts which was three inches above her knees and a red tight top ,god she was soo sexy and hot his mind ran wildly tearing her dress apart and exposing her but soon his naughty thoughts were disturbed as he heard her shrill scream
MANYATA:you mister

she said waving her hand infront of his face,with a sudden moment he caught it and bought it down and looked straight into her eyes
UDAY:inspector uday veer singh
MANYATA:yea whatever you are for you they all ran away now how am i supposed to reach my destination i was trying to cope up with them but you spoiled the whole thing
UDAY:i did see how helplessly yet you was trying to cope up with them
Manyata was ashamed as her checks turned crimson red and at that reaction uday could not help himself from smirking
UDAY:ok fine tell me where you want to go i will drop you
MANYATA:i want to go to Hotel Orator
UDAY :OK come on i will take you
saying this he took her bag from her hand while she followed him to his car[dek wala jeep] to uday it was his life but for manyata it was apiece of shit she hated jeep but being a victim of such odd situation she finally agreed but it was hard for her soft tender legs to reach the high passenger seat in the jeep she made many attempts when finally felt a strong arm around her waist within a second she was in the air and in another second she was in the passenger seat ,as she glared at uday for touching her while with a signature smirk plasterred to his face he started the engine and the drive began the roads were clear and free of obstacle
UDAY:so you have nt told me your name yet
manyata was fumed at him she did not like him carring to her till now he appeared as a rude arrogant police officer what could worsen her birthday than this and what could make his birthday a happier day then having such a hot chick by his side
MANYATA:my name is manyata kumari singh
UDAY;so you are a tourist here
MANYATA:No i came here to invite my family
UDAY:invite for what
MANYATA:my marriage i am engaged

Nice update
loved manveer's meeting
update soon and thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: andy.a

Nice update
loved manveer's meeting
update soon and thanks for the pm

welcome i am glad dat u liked
it now next update next friday
😃

Originally posted by: andy.a

Nice update
loved manveer's meeting
update soon and thanks for the pm

thx
nxt update nxt friday
glad u liked it

That was an explosive update Anni. Awesome work👏.