nadaan parindey chapter 8 and 9 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...navina...

That was an explosive update Anni. Awesome work👏.

I AM GLAD THAT YOU LIKED IT

Mrinalini and her son's have such low thinking😡 ... I'm very disgusted by their talks.
BUT ITS JUST THE STARTING OF THERE STOPPING LOW
Brijraaj is still "mourning" for his family😭. I felt so bad for him ... more especially because of the family that he's stuck with!
YEA BRIDGRAAJ IS VERY HELPLESS
Now , the best part😉 ... Manveer meeting was fabulous😳. Poor Uday is already smitten by her ; but I hope his feelings don't change when he realises which family she belongs to😕.
MAYBE HE WILL NOT CHANGE
OR MAYBE HE WILL
BUT WAT EVRE HAPPENS MANVEER WILL MEET
Loved the chapter Anni ,
do continue soon😊.
Thanx 4 the PM!
YOU DO NOT NEED TO THANK ME BARFI JIJI
THE NEXT UPDATE WILL BE NEXT FRIDAY

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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Nice update... Love manveer first meeting... Do pm me n continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Karkit

Nice update... Love manveer first meeting... Do pm me n continue soon


thank u so much for liking ti
kk i will pm u
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivanika

loved manveer's meeting


I AM GLAD U LIKED IT
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: roopali15

nice update

specially manveer meeting


glad to knw u liked it😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update but holy cow she's engaged btw she's got guts going to invite the people who wants her dead
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priya46

awesome update but holy cow she's engaged btw she's got guts going to invite the people who wants her dead


thank u i am glad that u liked it😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyy,so sorry couldnt comment on ur earlier updates!!!!!!! itss grr88,manveer meet was awesomeee!!!!!! uday carrying her,howw sweeett!!!!!!!! wll be waitng for ur nxt updatee!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pia.raha

heyy,so sorry couldnt comment on ur earlier updates!!!!!!! itss grr88,manveer meet was awesomeee!!!!!! uday carrying her,howw sweeett!!!!!!!! wll be waitng for ur nxt updatee!!!!!!!


its ok take ur time
thx glad you liked it
next update asap😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
By the mention of her engagement and marriage uday felt a lump was stuck in his throat once again luck had betrayed him ,even this beautiful girl was not his soul mate ,a arrow hit his heart and there was a pain in his whole body ,a pain of getting rejected by lord ,the drive was smooth but slow manyata sat admiring the deserta that covered both side of the roads ,this all was too new for her ,see had never seen a desert in her entire life and being bought up in a city such peaceful drive was just a dream for her while uday 's whole concentration was on her ,he observed her every move and smiled to himself suddenly manyata 's phone on the tune of a nadaan parindey from the latest movie rockstar manyata 's choice in music was  very classic and mohit chauhan 's lyrics in this song was her second love ,well ofcourse her first love was ranveer kapoor ,the caller id showed the name of akash so without delaying she picked the call
MANYATA;hello
AKASH;Hello princess so did you reach
MANYATA:yea i reached Jaipur and now i am going to hotel
AKASH:ok princess called you to say happy birthday from my ,tara and aunty 's side
MANYATA:Awnn thank you so much akash but where is mom and what about tara
AKASH:She is in college and aunty had an important surgery
MANYATA:ok tell them to call once they are back ok
AKASH:so you met your dad
MANYATA:no today i will stay at hotel tomorrow i will go and met him i have his photo i do not think it would be hard for me to find him
AKASH;ok princess i have to attend an important meeting bye
MANYATA:bye take care
AKASH:love you princess
MANYATA:love you too
saying this she kept the phone uday ears rang with anger as she said love you over the phone he crushed his teeth and asked
UDAY:your boyfriend
MANYATA:No my fiance
uday gave a fake smile he for some unknown reason boiled with anger he could no longer stand sitting beside manyata he stopped the car with a jerk and shot glances at her finally grabbed her arms and said
UDAY:Get out of my car
MANYATA;What?
UDAY:get out of my car NOW
saying this she steped outside his car as he took her bags from behind the seat and merciless threw it on the road ,she looked at him awestruck as he drove away in the speed of wind hot tears blinded her eyes as she picked up her bags ,she had never been so humiliated that also without any reason she wiped her tears and stood on the side of the road waiting for a car or something ,finally after an hour she finally managed a cab to her hotel ,it was another hour drive on reaching the hotel ,she checked in the room which was already booked by akash for her and then unpacked her luggage it was then that she realized in such a hurry she forgot to take her bag ,her i pad and her personal diary was there but she at any chance did not want to met that physco again so did not bother much ,she took a slower and the cold water ran through her bodu making her nerves cool but her head was still hot as she just could not forget the way uday drove her out of the car she stomped her feet and screamed
MANYATA:Urggg hate this uday veer singh he calls himself inspector but he do not even deserve to be a janitor of jail hate this place god please make me met with dad so that i can take him back ASAP
saying this she came back ,it was evening by now ,she changed into a faded blue full length jeans and a grey designer top with black boots and her hair just tied in a puff ,she realized that since morning she had eaten nothing at all and she was terribly hungry ,so she headed to the restro which was within the hotel itself ,the restro was beautifully decorated with rajasthani painting as some chaps sat on the stage singing some old traditional song she liked the atmosphere it was really good a she took a seat the restro could almost be called empty a waiter placed the menu infront of her and after giving a short thought she ordered her dinner .Time flew as her dinner was over the clock read quater to 10 she paidher bill and made her way to her room suddenly her eyes was hooked on a man standing in the reception he was fairly dressed in a raymond suit as he turned manyata 's eyes almost popped out ,her heart beat got even faster and all she could say in a tiny feeble voice with a lone tear in her eyes
DAD



DONE WITH CHAPPY THREE
SCROLL DOWN FOR CHAPPY 4😳
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Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago

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