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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pia.raha

oh my god,dat was super awesomeee!!!!! aryan and manyta sweeet bro-sis momentss!!!!! then manveer sizzling chemstry and udayy is happy as mnayat is nt aryan's gf!!!!!!!! sueprbbb,cntinue soon!!!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
Ha ha ha checking ke bahane romancing nd chichoragiri kinda real In... Po... Btw the chappy was awsum
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Zina-







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in sister sjip no thanks and no sorry😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow nice bond betwn sis bro realy awesme update
manveer scene ws loved it
bt wy aryan n uday r enemy?? Pls solve prblem btwn to gud frend
thanx 4 pm n cntinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Karkit

Wow nice bond betwn sis bro realy awesme update
manveer scene ws loved it
bt wy aryan n uday r enemy?? Pls solve prblem btwn to gud frend
thanx 4 pm n cntinue soon

thank u so much i m glad u liked it jiji
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
uday was enjoying his fullest with manyata
i hope we get more manveer
pls update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: roopali15

nice update
uday was enjoying his fullest with manyata
i hope we get more manveer
pls update


i am glad that you liked it i will update it today itself
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The sunlight kissed the walls ,while the sparrows took rounds around the enormus red stoned which looked like a well furnished mughal palace with royalty ,wealth and pride showering from the heaven upon this enormous house with its beautiful botanical flower in the garden that was at the westerly part the garden covered aches of the palace property as the huge seven feet solid iron gates were opened by two guards in traditional rajasthani dress with turban and swords on there waist it looked like she was making her way into a old place of some still existing kingdom all she needed was a horse instead of her brother car ,she looked at him and asked him with a shaken voice

MANYATA:bhai am I looking ok

A wave of emotion ran through her spine she was hell scared of her own family ,she was meeting them for the very first time and after knowing about them from her mother she was scared about there behaviour she knew she would be rejected and insulted but she had to do it because of her brother she very well knew she was just like an unwanted piece of rag in the family she was rejected by everybody even her own father but it was just the sake of her brother and her mother she decided to face all the disaster so now she was scared and terribly nervous her chains of thoughts were broken as she noticed aryaan trying to examine her ,aryaan looked at her from bottom to top it was a definitely not a yes she was going to meet her traditional backward in which the girls were not even allowed to show there face and here she the youngest daughter was in a black tight shorts revaling her thighs and a tight t shirt with english incripstion no way she was looking like any skinny model his dad sleeps around with but far much more inncoent and beautiful whatever she wears or however she is but she is the best for him now he knew why uday lost himself to her earlier in the morning such beautiful are impossible to ignore she was just like an apsara in disguise and he did inform the family about her in the hospital so they may be aware of her dress he passed a sweet smile and said

ARYAAN:you are looking more than perfect you are looking beautiful

MANYATA:you think that oldy dadisabh of your will let me in like this or I will I should change into something more decant

ARYAAN:no that oldy dadisabh of us have to accept you at any caost after all you are the youngest daughter of our family [he was cut short]

MANYATA:you forgot bhai the only daughter you know na the even planned to drown me to dead the very moment I was born do not know what they will do now

ARYAAN;they will do nothing at all things have changed I have talked with them and they were all so happy about you just see you will feel so better after you talk to them uncle bridg will be so happy

MANYATA:maybe

She mummered under her breath as the car drove in one way road between a pathway of huge tress as she could view the palace yet a distance away according to her calculation it would take her atleast a more 5 minutes to reach and aryaan words still puzzled in her mind was he sure that they would accept her she pushed all negative thoughts finally assuring herself that it would really not matter as she was here only for somedays and this was the very last time she was visiting this place and her family a final goodbye to break all strings from her family as the car finally stopped infornt of the huge enourmour wodden doors womens and mens stood in a row as in the front there was a woman in white with a women on her right side and two middle aged mans and two youngs mens before stepping outside aryaan introduced her by signalling through there position DS ,Menuka ,Giriraaj ,Adhiraaj ,Jaggat and Vijay was present there as he opened the door manyata heart started to pound she got out of the car she felt her knees shaking and at any time she would fall it was only aryaan caught her hands and it was his support that still kept her moving now she faced DS a women she always feared and hated but today the woman was in different matter her eyes were moist and her face reflected love she did not an unknown attachment forced manyata to pull in a hug for ,she hugged her dadi it felt like she was hugging her mom her ds hugged her with equal passion and there was a sensation of love as she carsessed her cheek and said

DADISABH:where was you my bacha I missed you I am so sorry please forgive me please mera bacha I was cruel to you earlier please

She folded her hands in front of manyata as manyata took her old wrinkled shivering hands in her and said with equal pain in her voice

MANYATA:its ok dadi I am here to forget the past and start afresh

DADISABH:Meraa bach where is komal

MANYATA:woa ma is umm ma is in delhi

DADISABH:I can understand bacha she could not forgive me

MANYATA:its ok dadi everything will fall back into shape I am here now

GIRIRAAJ:Maasabh lets now get her inside see hows the sun is tourturing her and getting her face all red

ADHIRAAJ;yes maasabh I do not want my neice out in the sun anymore

Manyata looked at him they ahd so much of love and affection in there voice as dadisabh said

DADISABH:and they are my bacha your kakasabh

MANYATA:I do know aryaan bhai said that giriraaj kakasabh and that's adhiraaj kaksabh

[she was cut short by menuka as she spoke in a low voice]

MENUKA:beta please do not take there names here we are not allowed to take names of mens

DADISABH;its ok menuka she is here and now she will learn everything hai na bacha

Ds said with an evil grin which for once made manyata feel a bit uneasy but the soon the mood was lightened as aryaan patted on the two other brother shoulder and said

ARYAAN:and this are your brother vijay the elder son of kakasabh and a right hand of DS he handles the political affair like any body could never handle

VIJAY:hello

MANYATA:hey vijay bhai

And this is jaggat

JAGGAT:kya bhai just this much anyway hey manyata I am your elder brother jaggat

MANYATA:Hello jaggat bhai

DADISABH:now if intro is over lest take her to her room I can sence she is hell tried menuka take her to her room

Saying this manuka held her hands as she folled her kakisabh ,the palce was even huge there were so many corriodors and so many rooms finally the last room of the corridor was opened for her it was bright with sun piercing each corner of the room and with a huga balcony facing the garden it was just like any other fairy tale bedroom of some old rajputtan princess the rooms walls were painted in crimson colour and had a king size bed with rich wooden furniture and oil painting of nature hung on the walls ,every body had left and now she sat on her bed as a small smile crept in her mind

MANYATA POV

How wrong ma was this guys are so good ,my kaksabh ,kakisabh and even dadisabh loves me so much it was an old burried matter now they are changed I must tell ma that things are not the way she things they are not bad but the person she had trusted my DAD is the real culprit it is he who shattered my dreams but I will not reveal about it to ma or ma will really be broken I can't see her in pain no more

END OF POV

Her chains of thoughts were broken as a maid entered the room with some clothes and jewelary ,she informed manyata to get ready as dadisabh had planned her to take her for the evening arti to the temple ,manyata asked the maid to leave and looked at the clothes and jewalary ,the jewels were of diamond with a traditional glint and the dress was a gaggra with a blouse and choli she gave it the most pathetic look, she had never worn such clothes she was never comfortable in full clothes and always wore something short but this thing was going to cover her body which was no less than chocking her to death '.

IN MRINALINI STUDY

Adhriraaj was twirling his glass of drink and an evil grin plasstered to his face as he looked at his mom and said

ADHRIRAAJ; well done maasabh the plan is awesome

DADISABH:I know beta

ADHRIRAAJ:poor she think that problem is solved and she can really be a part of her family did you see that freaking smile on her face

DADISABH;I did but little do my grand daughter know that it is the last time she is smiling beta according to our rule what happens to a raped woman

ADHIRAAJ:maasabh she is handed over to the hoare and if she rejects then she is hanged

DADISABH:that is what is going to happens

ADHIRAAJ:hahaha masabh you are truly evil but no one except us should be aware of this plan specially my son aryaan

DADISABH:do not worry beta after all he catalyst of this reaction so beta did you get the drug

ADHIRAAJ:jee maasabh take

He handed a packet containing white powder and said

ADIRAAJ: a special drug and the consumer have an sexsual uncontrolable urge emerging building inside the body a desire a hunger which is uncountrolable and he do not care for which woman but he will fullfil his desire no matter even if it is his mother

DADISABH:or his long lost sister

They looked at each other and passed each other an evil smile as mrinalini devi shook the king and it fell down on the chess board and she said with much pride

DADISABH:check mate

Guys you come to the end of the chappy

Please forgive me for my mistake

I am sorry for the late update

do hit button

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manyata; I CANNOT BELIEV HOW CAN SOMEONE STOOP THIS LOW WHY DID YOU DO THIS HOW COULD YOU RUIN MY LIFE WHY

tears had empowered her speech as she sat on her bed with nothing at all to cover her body and he looked at her all innocently unaware of the grave mistake that he had just committed

Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago

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