Manveer OS: Best Friend Forever - Page 4

Originally posted by: ...navina...

The OS was simply outstanding Payel di 👏. It was such a simple plot ... but your magnificent writing turned it into a magical story😳.

OMG your appreciation is making me blush dear Navina 😳
Manyata's confession to her diary was so cute! Then she , going to his house to confront him was so sweet.

Their kiss was very beautiful ... and it was a nice surprise☺️.

Awwwn...I love dat part tooo...actually I wrote it to repair my bad mood

Very well penned,

loved it immensely❤️.

Do write more

( I'm really eager to know how your OS's will be 🤔 if you write it ; in a good mood😉).

I can't post my good mood wala OS right now...you know it darling!!!

Thanks 4 the PM😊.

My pleasure 😊

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

awww...
that was so so cute...

Originally posted by: A-broken-heart

what an wonderful os this is payel!!!
loved it very much.

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Amazing OS

Beautifully Executed

such a good one

Your writing is great

i hope this OS has a continuation😃

thanks 4 de PM

Originally posted by: edward123

Wow good os
i luved it

Originally posted by: Chamakchallo30

The OS is so beautifully written :) thanks for the PM :D

Originally posted by: panchaali