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Fekta Holic

@WhatTheF

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Awww...payal di awsomee...OS
chooo...sweet and cute
thanx for PM.

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Anjali

@Anjalika13

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

awesome os dii 🤗

loved it ❤️

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Sonia

@princessSonia

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

hey panchi di,

its awesum👍🏼

loved it 2 d core...❤️❤️

haawww Uday reads Manyata's diary...😲

n Manyata knows it...😆

hahaha Uday ka chop hua...😆

n thnks 4 d pm...

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer
haye main marjawa
kya os hain
luvd it muahh...
i noe they didnt unite, but the ending was really unexpected, lol...
i loved it to its bits. so different, yet all the same, so unexpected, still predicted...
lovd it dear, u r a gr8 writer..
hows your eye problem nao?? hope its all ok

Plz don't ask about my eye problem my doc says it will take a long time to recover

So I thought I will write sometime may be rarely but without Manveer life is totally sad!!!! 😭

And thankz a looot for this nice comment dear 😊

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: princessSonia
hey panchi di,
its awesum👍🏼

loved it 2 d core...❤️❤️

haawww Uday reads Manyata's diary...😲
n Manyata knows it...😆

hahaha Uday ka chop hua...😆

n thnks 4 d pm...

And thank you for this cute comment 😊

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Amazing OS

Beautifully Executed

such a good one

Your writing is great

i hope this OS has a continuation😃

thanks 4 de PM

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Vibha Bangalore

@..IshqShava..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

The OS is so beautifully written :) thanks for the PM :D

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LittleDhampir.

@LittleDhampir.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Wow good os
i luved it

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

awww...
that was so so cute...

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

The OS was simply outstanding Payel di 👏. It was such a simple plot ... but your magnificent writing turned it into a magical story😳. Manyata's confession to her diary was so cute! Then she , going to his house to confront him was so sweet.

Their kiss was very beautiful ... and it was a nice surprise☺️.

Very well penned,

loved it immensely❤️.

Do write more

( I'm really eager to know how your OS's will be 🤔 if you write it ; in a good mood😉).

Thanks 4 the PM😊.