Manveer OS - FORBIDDEN LOVE -VIEWBIE'S MESSAGE-p31 - Page 11

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

very emotional but well done!

Originally posted by: andy.a

hi navi😊

Hi Andy😃.

as promised i have come with my comment

I've been waiting.

like i said yesterday the cocept was unique

loved it😃

Thank you 🤗 .

the way uday and manyata shared a love without disclosing it to each other was nice

later when you took us to the convent my heart fell

how could manyata and uday be one when she is a nun but you found a smart way round

Well , actually ; I made a disaster with the first version😭 ... and had to modify it to what it is presently.

but really sad to learn manyatas present condition

Don't be sad - her condition is not permament ... she will recover with "UDAY THERAPY"😳😉!!!

hate giriraj to the core😡 he is so arragent

He is a bas***d 🤬 in this story.

good that uday hit him

Jai will complete the deed 😉😈.

hope manyata becomes well soon

She will .

and then give us some good manveer moments

Andy ... this is an OS ... how many momentS are u expecting in 1 more update😕?

waiting for the next part

so when are you updating?

Next week.

thanks so much for the pm

Welcome😊.

Originally posted by: edward123

Hey Navina

Hi Hina 🤗 .

Great part 2 as i haven't read part 1

Why haven't u read part 1😕 ... it's on the first page.

But from what i have understood

Grijraj is the reason behind manveer's love to be forbidden

Their love is FORBIDDEN because Uday is a mARRIED MAN.

and is Jay good or bad??

Sometimes she's good , most of the time - SHE'S BAD😈.

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

hailaa a viewbie warning, but what was sexually explicit about that part, werent the sister and Uday part removed from part 1 😕, looks like the viewbie is on the roll

Originally posted by: Jarin04

Both of the parts were gr8. Loved the os navi. Update the next part soon