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Panther_panja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: angleroops
hey
i hate this jay

she broke her own dad and mom relation

seriously

now lets see what uday does

y he kept party??????//

pls continue soon

Hay don't hate Jay if you look from Jay side na then you feels that her father had cheated her mother ( his wife) which he hid from his family. This is very very very wrong that he ( Jay and Rani father )

How can a man been married and father of 2 daughters go for extramarital affair no women can accept this cheat and no daughter can accept this so I feel that Jay had done the right thing by exposing her father real face.

I take Jay side because any daughter who really loves her mother will do which jay did by drinking alcohol she revealed the truth of her father.

Edited by anj1208 - 11 years ago

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Panther_panja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#422

Loved the update

DON'T MIND ITS REQUEST TO YOU PLEASE PLEASE show some goodness in Jay na. Please please please don't show one sister tooo bad and another sister tooo good yaar.

Don't Mind just small sa request from me 😊 .

Otherwise I loved the update just loved it as the story is going interesting to read really the update was too short. This time with less pics more update😆 so dear 👍🏼 best of luck to you for more nice and beautiful updates.

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deepsoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: anj1208
Loved the update

DON'T MIND ITS REQUEST TO YOU PLEASE PLEASE show some goodness in Jay na. Please please please don't show one sister tooo bad and another sister tooo good yaar.
Don't Mind just small sa request from me😊.

Otherwise I loved the update just loved it as the story is going interesting to read really the update was too short. This time with less pics more update😆so dear👍🏼best of luck to you for more nice and beautiful updates.

I try to update long unfortunately I failed but I try next time 😳

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#424

awesome updates

i was nt on IF for some time and so read parts 38 - 40 in one go

and enjoyed myself very much

do cont soon

thanks for de PM

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deepsoul

@deepsoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#425

41 part!

Rani shocked n say" kaya?? Yaha itna sab kuch ho gaya hai or tumhe party karni hai? Are hum kese bhul gaye tumhe tho koi matlab hi nhi hai humare parivaar se bas tumhe tho wahi karna hota Jo tumhe acha laga right!" Yuvraj give evil smile n touch her hand n move her hair back side of her ear by other hand n say" absolutely right! Princess! Or hum chate hai is party mai tum sabse gorgeous logo islye humane tumare ek gift liya so aaj rat use pehan kar party mai aa Jana OK!" Rani say with angry mood" hum is party ka hisa kabhi nhi bane gey !" Yuvraj hold him tightly n say" hum khe nhi rahey princess hum bata rahey hai tumhe ana hi hoga warna hum kaya kar sakte hai maloom haina?" Rani aside her face with angry n didn't say anything here Nandani listen all this conversation n got angry vijay come to her n say" awww lagta hai kisi ke aramno pe badi buri trahe se pani fir gaya hai!" Nandani make evil smile n look at vijay n say" abhi tho kuch hua hi nhi hai vijay Bhai or aap abhi se jeet ka jashan mana rahey hai !" Vijay say" abhi wqt hai Nandani yeh sab band kar do is se kuch hasil nhi hoga!" Nandani say" kash apne humare vijay Bhai Hoke yeh Khan hota tho hum man bhi jate par apko tho ek hi isaan ki fikar hai !" Vijay put his hand on Nandani shoulder n say" hum Bhai Hoke hi khe rahey hai!" Nandani remove his hand n leave from there vijay feel unhappy here unnati enter in palace n saw all the preparations n ask to yuvraj n rani" yeh sab tayari kes liye?" Yuvraj smile n say" tumare Dada ki shadhi ho rahi hai !" Rani got more angry n leave from there n go to her room unnati feel unhappy n say" Dada aap ESA kuy karte hai dekha rani fir se gussa ho gyi hai!" Yuvraj say" WO tho humesha gusse mai rahey thi hai ab tho unhe gussa na aye tab ajeeb lagta hai!" N give winked smile unnati fed up n say" Dada u r too much!" N leave from there after unnati vijay also leave behind unnati then brijraj come n say"yuvraj humari beti ka bura mat mana tum tho Jante ho rani thodi si nadan hai!"

Yuvraj say" uncle brij hum jante hai apko khene ki jarurt nhi hai or humhey WO esi hi pasand hai!" Brijraj smile n say" hum bhut khush nseeb hai Jo aap jesa damad humhey mila!" Yuvraj blush n brijraj put his hand on yuvraj head n ask" acha kaya hum is party mai apne kuch mehman ko bula sakte hai?" Yuvraj take brijraj hand on his hand n say" yeh bhi koi puchne ki bat hai uncle off course app bula sakte hai!" brijraj smile n leave after that yuvraj say" yeh hi tho hum chate hai uncle ki aap unsi khas mehman ko bulye!" Give evil smile

Next scene
Rani in her room crying very badly n praying to god" hey bagwan! Ek traf humhey maa ki fikar ho rahi hai or yaha agar hum party mai nhi gaye tho. Pata nhi yuvraj kaya karega koi tho rasta dekho bagwan ki hum humari ko wapas LA Sake!"

Then suddenly unnati enter with big smile n say" bagwan jarur tumari icha puri karege bachi!" N to see unnati rani also smile n both laugh after unnati say" thank god tum hasi tho shai !" Rani say" yeh hasi bhi kitni ajeeb hoti haina unnati kisi bhi muskuratey Huey chehare ko dekh ke yeh nhi batya ja sakta hai ki uske peche kitna dukh chipa hai!" Unnati say" hum Jante hai rani yeh Jo bhi ho Raha hai us se tum kush nhi ho! But trust me sayad koi kushi ho!" Rani ask" tum ESE situation mai bhi itni positive bat kese kar leti ho?" Then suddenly vijay enter n say" lagta bagwan ji ne unnati ko ek special wardan diya hai ki uske samne koi bhi dukhi nhi reh sakta hai!" Rani smile n say" vijay Bhai aap bhi na ! Wase aap yaha kaya kar rahey hai?" Vijay humble n say" WO hum dekhne aye the ki humari bhen dukhi tho nhi hai !" rani say" acha tho yeh bat hai tho dekh le jiye apki bhen itni asani se dhukhi hone wali nhi hai ! Han nhi tho!" Everyone smile rani say" acha ab hum tayar hone jate hai warna WO yuvraj humhey nhi chode ga !" N she leave to bathroom after that vijay ask to unnati" aapko tayar nhi hona hai kaya?" Unnati say" bas hum tyar hone ja rahey hai!" She try to leave but vijay stop her n say " suniye aapko Indian dress kafi suit karta hai!" Unnati smile n leave the room
Next scene ( hall)

Yuvraj welcoming everyone n shaking hand one of ask him" yuvraj yeh party kis kushi mai?" Yuvraj said" hum rajwanshi hai humhey party ke liye koi bahne ki jarurt nhi hai !" Then one say" acha yeh bato ki tum shadi kab kar rahey ho?" Yuvraj say" yuh samjh lo ki bhut jald ab media ki trah sawal mat karo n enjoy the party!" N yuvraj leave n waiting for rani then Nandani enter n say" koi humara besabri se intezar kar raha hai!" Yuvraj say" abhi humara mood bhut acha so don't spoil it n leave " suddenly raj come to them n Nandani say" chalo aaj tumari bat man jate hai akir ana tho humare pass haina!" Yuvraj ignore her then raj ask" yeh party kuy rakhi or esi situation mai?" Yuvraj say" yeh bhi bhut jald pata lag jayega!" Raj ask" or rani kush hai?" Yuvraj didn't say anything n

rani enter from stairs everyone look at her holding there breath see rani everyone says" wow!" n yuvraj say" WO bhi kush ho hi jayegi!" N go to her n welcome her yuvraj try to hold rani hand but she refuse it but yuvraj is yuvraj he grab rani hand n take her in party n

announce " attention everyone aap sab yeh soch rahey hoge ki yeh party kis kushi mai hai wel its time announce hum bhut jald shadhi karne wale hai!" Everyone shocked to hear this n say" kaya!" Nandani smile n Media continually clicking photographs ek media men ask" kon hai WO kush naseeb yeh tho batey?" Yuvraj hold rani hand n say" in se milye yeh hai rani devgradh ki yuvrani or humari hone wali maharani!" Rani shocked n look at yuvraj

nandani got angry vijay is happy to hear this Everyone claps media try to ask lots of question but yuvraj refuse to say anything now everyone is congratulated them brijraj giving blessings to them unnati also come n say" congratulations Dada but apko humhey tho batana chaye tha na!" Yuvraj try to say something but rani anger bursts n say" unnati tum kesi bate kar rahi ho yuvraj ko tho batne ka moka hi nhi mila hoga nhi kuyki is duniya mai sabse busy insan tho yahi hai!" Yuvraj smile n both keep silent rani say" yuvraj humhey tumse akle mai kuch bat karni hai!" Yuvraj say" dekha unnati abhi patni bani bhi nhi hai or abhi se hukum chalna shuru bhi kar diya hai!" Unnati say" humhey lagta hai aap dono ko akela rehna chaye!" N she leave after her rani say" yeh kaya hai yuvraj tumne yeh announcement kuy ki hai?" Yuvraj say" are sab puch rahey they kab shadi kare ho tho humane khe diya!" Rani say" tum itne bhi seede nhi ho ki logo ne Khan or tum man jao!" Yuvraj say" tho kese hai princess!" rani was speechless but she say" tum na..." yuvraj say" abhi time nhi hai princess kisi or din bata dena OK!" He leave after that mohini entered n brijraj saw her n welcome her here unnati announce " attention everyone aaj humare Dada ke liye bhut special day hai islye unke is khas moke ko or bhi special bane ke liye dance karna chate hai !" Everyone claps then yuvraj interrupts n say" sorry unnati tumare performance se phele ek esi saqsiyat ka performance hoga Jo humare beech mojud hai so ladies n gentlemen put ur hands together for mohini !" Everyone confused that who is mohini n rani , mohini got shocked n Nandani give evil smile mohini hesitate to performance but brijraj force her to dance by saying"mohini kar do ek dance ki bat hi tho hai humhey pata hai tumhe dance nhi ata hai but aaj humari beti ka sabse imp. Day hai tho tum na nhi kar sakti hoo or kuch esi performance dena ki logo ko lage tum hi devgradh ki Maharani bane layak ho now go!" Mohini move on the dance floor n light goes dim n music start ...
Mera Ghagra
Movie: Yeh Jawaani Hai Deewani
Lyrics: Kumaar
Music: Pritam
Singers: Rekha Bharadwaj, Vishal Dadlani

A saheban, kadardan, meharban
A dil thaam ke baithiye
Kyunki ab aapke saamne tashreef la rahi hain
Agra ki azeem fankara
Mallika e husn, noor e nazar
Mohtarma, mohini..

Ladke, o re ladke
Kahan se aaya hai re tu
Pyaara hai re shakal se
Akal ka maara hai re tu (x2)

Haan jal gayi, Haan jal gayi
Meri baaton se tu jal gayi
Haan khal gayi, tujhe khal gayi
Meri beparwahi khal gayi
Mohtarma tu kis khet ki mooli
Hai zara bata

TV pe breaking news, hye re mera ghagra
Bagdad se leke Dilli via Agra (x2)

Ghagra ghagra tera ghagra ghagra tera
Ghagra Ghagra via Agra
Ghagra ghagra tera ghagra ghagra tera
Ghagra Ghagra via Agra
Ghagra ghagra..
Ghagra ghagra..

everyone shocked gents were enjoying but ladies saying" yeh kese nacch Rahi hai na? Koi standard hai ki nhi!" Yuvraj give evil smile n goes to dance floor put his hand in pocket n take some money in air which fallen on mohini .mohini stop n got shocked to see this reaction
to be continue ...

Edited by deepsoul - 11 years ago

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#426

well m sure rani will be extremely delighted to see a humiliated mohini!
loved it loadszzz
greatly written as usual
update soon

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angleroops

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Posted: 11 years ago

#427

nice update

wow yuvraj ne to mohini ke pol lkoldi

it was an awsum update

plus he annouced his ennagement

ppls update soon

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#428

awesome update...mohini ki to lag gayi...😆...excited for the drama in next update...😃

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Panther_panja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#429

Nice update what I liked was the the Yuvraj is going to reveal the truth of Mohini.

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deepsoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#430

42part!
Brijraj come to mohini n ask " yeh Sab kaya hai yeh kaya kar rahi ho?" Mohini was try to say but yuvraj interrupts n say" are uncle is mai mohini ji ki koi galti nhi hai ab inhe jesa dance ata hoga waisa hi tho kare GI na!" brijraj say" tum khena kaya chate ho yuvraj khul ke kho!" Mohini scared yuvraj say" uncle apko nhi pata?" Brijraj say" kaya nhi pata hai?" Yuvraj say" ki yahi ki mohini ek bar dancer hai!" Everyone one shocked n start whispering " kaya ek bar dancer hai ek bar dancer ko bulya hai!" Rani n brijraj also shocked to hear this mohini say" nhi yeh jhoot hai!" Yuvraj say" acha tho hum jhoot bol rahey hai ! Ek min!" Yuvraj clap his hand n one women come from door mohini shocked to see her women(she was mohini mom) she come to mohini n say" mohini meri bachi tu thik haina!" Brijraj confused n ask" yeh kon hai?" Mohini didn't say anything but yuvraj say" hum batatey hai yeh mohini ki mom hai!" Brijraj shocked to hear this n say" kaya? Yeh mohini ki mom hai ? Tho ?" Before brijraj could say something yuvraj announced party over n request to everyone leave after leaving brijraj shout " yeh sab kaya hai mohini agar yeh tumari maa hai tho tumne London kise bejha hai ilaz ke liye?" Mohini still didn't say anything but yuvraj say" uncle yeh Sab tho iski chal thi ki kese aapse paise nikal sake inki tho fitrat hi esi hoti hai! Inhe srif or srif paiso se matlab hota hai" Mohini break her silence n shout" han! Mai ek bar dancer hoo but mai apne shok ke wajse yeh sab nhi kia hai balki meri majboori thi!" Brijraj shock n ask" majboori kesi majboori? Maya humhey bewkoof bane ki?" Maya touch brijraj hand n say" esa nhi hai brij I still love u!" Brijraj remove her hand n say" nhi Maya tum mujhe se payar nhi karti hoo !" Maya say" nhi brij Meri majboori thi islye Maine kia warna mai tumhe dokha dene ki soch bhi nhi sakti hoo trust me!" Yuvraj interrupts n say" trust ka matlab bhi pata hai kaya aap ko?" Maya say with anger" tum beech mai mat bolo!" Yuvraj say" kuy? Mere beech mai bol ne se apki pol khul jaye islye? Kuy nhi bata deti ki yeh sab apne apne pati ke liye kia hai!" Everyone shocked again brijraj break n say" pati?" Yuvraj say" han uncle brij pati yeh shadhi shudha hai or inka tho ek bacha bhi hai!" Brijraj was shocked that his heart breaks into pieces. He didn't say anything but he leave n go to his room Maya shouts " brij listen to me!! Plzz I can explain!" N try to go behind brijraj But rani stop her way n say" bas ab ek kadam or nhi!" N point finger on her Maya say" dekho brij ko meri jarurt hai!" Rani say" tum jesi beshram ladki Maine aaj tak nhi dekhi hai tumara ek pati hai fir bhi tum mere datta ke pich padi ho !" Maya say" abhi mujhe Jane do mai tumhe aram se batati hoo!" Rani shout" humhey khan na ek kadam or nhi! Tum ne humse humari maa ko dur kia hai! Tum ek maa ho na agar tumare bache tumse dur kar do tho!" Maya shouts say" mere bache se dur rhena warna!" Rani smile but her eyes fill with tear n say" dekha dhuka hua na ab socho tumne tho meri maa se tho sab kuch cheen liya hai meri maa ko kitna dhuk hua hoga kab bhi socha hai? Maya remain silent rani say" ab is se pehele mai guards ko khe ke tumhe dakhke mar ke bahar nikalwa du chali jao!" Maya leave with her mom after that rani cry a lot yuvraj try to come near but unnati stop him n say" Rone do dada is wqt use akele rahne ki jarurt hai!" Yuvraj say " par choti !" Unnati say" don't worry dada use kuch nhi hoga!" Yuvraj agree with her n they also leave after that vijay come to rani n say " sabhalo rani apne aap ko warana brij mama ko kon sambhale ga?" Nandani think" inka drama fir se shuru ho gaya !" N she also leave n go to her room . Rani control herself n go to brijraj room here brijraj crying n drink a lot n saying to himself" humane Maya par itna trust kese kar liya ki humhey kuch bhi dekhai hi nhi diya or srif wahai dekhtey chale gaye Jo Maya humhey dikhati chali gyi! Hum itne bure kese ho gaye! Then suddenly rani enter N say" nhi datta aap bure nhi ho apne tho srif payar kia tha !" Brijraj look at her n open his arms n say" rani ayi humare pass !" Rani run n hugs brijraj n brijraj say" rani!! Bete humhey maaf kar di jiye humhey apke sath bhi bhut bura kia hai!" Rani say" nhi datta aap humse maafi mat magye bas aap maa ko wapas le aye!" Brijraj stand up n say" par kaya WO humhey maaf karey GI kaya?" Rani come to brijraj hold her ears n say" bas datta kan pakad ke sorry bol dena Sab kuch thik ho jaye!" Brijraj look at her with very cute smile n hugs her without saying any word
Next morning ( mansingh home)
Komal sitting n reading newspaper she turn page n shocked by reading newspaper headline (brijraj Singh caught by a bar dancer) n crush the newspaper her eyes fill with tears suddenly mansingh come n ask " kaya hua komal? Kuch hua hai kaya?" Komal say by tensed" bhaiya humhey Jana hoga maharaj ko humari jarurt hai!" N try to leave but mansingh hold her hand n say" tum uske wapas Jana chati hoo Jo tumari itni se kadar nhi karta hai!" komal say" hum jante WO humse payar nhi kartey hai par hum humare faraz se kese peeche hat saktey hai?" mansingh say" nhi tum khai nhi ja rahi ho! Hum tumhe uske pass nhi Jane degey!" Suddenly brijraj come n say" agar hum khudh kiye par pachta rahey ho tho?" Both shocked brijraj hand together say" agar hum apse maafi mage tho? Or kahe ki apko wapas lene aye tho?" Komal tears roll down from cheeks n try to run towards brijraj but brother hold her hand she shocked n look at him
next scene ( mahal)
Servants standing in one line n rani giving instructions to them!!
rani say" humhey yeh mahal adhe ghante saja chaye!"
Servant say" par yuvrani SAA adhe ghante mai kese hoga?"
Rani say" hum kuch nhi Jante adhe ho Jana chaye samjhe!"
Servants says together" ji yuvrani saa!"
Rani say " or han aaj Sara khana humri maa ke pasand bana chaye samjhe!"
Servants says together" ji yuvrani saa!"
Then suddenly yuvraj come say" kaya bat princess aaj sabki kabar le rahi ho?" Come close to her n say" khabhi humari kabar le liya karo?" N give cute smile
rani order to servants " ab sab ja sakte hai!" Yuvraj say" aaj bhut kuch ho?"
Rani say" han aaj mai bhut kush hoo aaj maa wapas aa rahi hai!"
Yuvraj also smile n say" really?" N hugs her rani push him n say" dur hatho mujhe bhut kam hai!" N she leave after that vijay come n say" awww awww yuvraj bana humari bhen tho apka kachra hi kar diya apka! Seriously humhey bhut bura laga!" Yuvraj say" vijay bana aap bhi humara mazak bana le jiye par dekhna ek din WO humhey khud gale lagye GI!" He also leave vijay smile n say" us din ka humhey bhi itezar hai yuvraj bana!"
Next scene(mansingh home)
mansingh say" tum khai nhi ja rahi hoo komal!" Komal say" kuy bhaiya?" brother say" hum nhi chate ki tum fir ek bar bato mai ake firse WO sab kuch saho!" Komal say" par bhaiya!" mansingh say" par war kuch nhi andar jao !" Brijraj say" dekhye hum sach much sarminda hai or komal humesha ke liye le Jane ke liye aye!" mansingh say" leke tho shadhi kar ke bhi gaye they par kaya hua brijraj?" Brijraj say" WO sab ek Galt fami thi !" mansingh say" tho kaya guarantee hai brijraj ki firse tumhe Galt fami nhi hogi?" Brijraj remain silent
Next scene(mahal)
Dinning table is full decorated with flowers n with diff. Dishes rani saw them feel so happy Rani say" good!" To servants then unnati come n ask" yeh sab kaya rani itni sari dishes aaj koi special occasion hai kaya?" Rani smile n say" han unnati bhut special occasion hai aaj maa aa rahi hai!" Unnati also surprise n say" kaya aunty aa rahi hai? Sach much yeh tho bhut badi kush kabari hai!" Rani say" Han unnati maa aa rahi hai aaj mai sach mai bhut kush hoo!"'unnati say" tumhe nhi lagta hai rani ki is kushi mai sabse bada hath Dada ka hai?" Rani remain silent she was blank suddenly one servants come n say" gustaki maaf rajkumari saa maharaj aa gaye hai!" Rani feel so happy n say" kaya??" N rush towards door n saw brijraj n ask him" datta maa khan hai?" Brijraj remain silent n rani ask him again after so much forcing brijraj say" WO nhi ayi hai!" Rani shocked
To be continued...

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