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Panther_panja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#431

Great Update just loved it. Smartly Yuvraj reveals the truth of Mohini. 👏⭐️

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TINA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#432

hey deeps welcome dear ...!! <3 , long time , how r u ..??
lot of hugs dear ...!!

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deepsoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: tinadreamzyland
hey deeps welcome dear ...!! <3 , long time , how r u ..??
lot of hugs dear ...!!

thank u Tina ! i m fine u can tell me ? I was little bit busy 😳

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TINA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#434

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I came back to forum just one month back , hearing the news VD has quit, I am so happy he quit the show , I wished for it all while ...!!
and awesome update as always deeps ...!!

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deepsoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: tinadreamzyland
@deepsoul
I came back to forum just one month back , hearing the news VD has quit, I am so happy he quit the show , I wished for it all while ...!!
and awesome update as always deeps ...!!

even I m so happy that he quit that show at least he get some more better role n show ! thank u dear!!!

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sanah12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#436

Awesome update
Loved it loads!!
Uday revealed mohini's truth so happy about that
Do continue asap
Thanks for the pm

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#437

sorry m late!
loved the update
mohini ka chehra dekhne layak hpga
update soon

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deepsoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: angleroops
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0033">HEY PLS UPDATE</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0033">UR SS</font>

as per ur huge request i update my ff hope u like it 😳

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deepsoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#439

43 part!
Rani shocked n say" kaya? Par kuy ab tho Sab thik ho gaya tha na?" To hear rani voice everyone come to hall door yuvraj ask " han uncle ab tho sab thik ho gaya tha fir tho kaya hua hai?" Brijraj hold rani cheeks say" yuvraj humhey maaf kar di jiye hum komal ko nhi la paye"rani stunned brijraj go inside yuvraj follow him n ask brijraj" kaya hua uncle? Kaya bat hai humhey batye ! Hum bhi tho apke bete jese hai!" Brijraj hold yuvraj shoulder n say" esi bat nhi hai ek aap hi hai jis se khey saktey hai !" Yuvraj hold brijraj hand n ask" tho uncle batey humhey!" Brijraj tell everything then yuvraj say" aap fikar mat kijye hum haina hum bat kare gey mansingh ji se!" Brijraj say" nhi agar mansingh ne apko kuch khey diya tho hum nhi chate ki apki bezati ho!" Yuvraj say" uncle hum haina hum sab thik kar degey trust me!" Brijraj feel sad n go to his room here Rani crying like a hell vijay n unnati handling her unnati say" rani chup ho jao sab thik ho jayega!" Rani say" kese thik hoga unnati humhey tho kuch bhi samjh nhi aa raha hai!" Vijay say" sambhalo rani mami ji jaldi aa jayegi !" Yuvraj come n say" ab bas bhut ho gaya bas karo apna drama!" Rani become silent for a second n say" tumhey yeh sab drama lagta hai kese ho tum? Yuvraj say" hum bas itna khe rahey hai ki itna kuch nhi hua hai ki tum itna ro rahi ho!" Rani say" itna kuch hogya hai or tumhe itni si bat lag rahi hai! Kher tumse tho bat karni hi bekar hai !" Leave for room vijay n unnati go after her yuvraj look at her then Nandani come n say " humari jiji bhi na khama Khan mai drama karti rheti hai !" Yuvraj don't look at her ignore her n try to leave but Nandani hold his hand n say " yuvraj come on humse kise naraz gi?" Yuvraj take off her hand n say nandani humhey tumse naraz GI nhi hai infact humhey tho koi farak hi nhi padta hai tumare hone na hone se!" N leave Nandani say" hoga yuvraj bhut jald mehsoos hoga!"
Next scene ( mansingh house)
Komal sitting in a hall n crying mansingh come say" komal ab rona band ki jiye humne Jo bhi kia apke bhalai ke liye kiya hai!" Komal say" bhaishab WO khud lene aye they humhey !" Mansingh say" wo aaj lene jarur aya hai but kal wo tumhey fir yahi lake chod dega !" Komal say" wo badal gaye hai humney unke akho mai dekha hai!" Mansingh say" brijraj jese log kabhi nhi badal they hai !" Suddenly a voice come" agar wo badal gaye ho tho?" Mansingh n komal shocked to see yuvraj mansingh say" kaya matlab hai tumara?" yuvraj say" hum bas itna khena chate hai ki brijraj uncle sach mai apni galti pe pachta rahey hai!" Mansingh say" is bat ki kaya grantee tho uncle kisi bhi cheez ki nhi hoti hai ab uncle apke bridge project ko hi le lijiye apne kitna kuch kiya tha but fail ho hi gaya na!" Mansingh shocked n say" tumhe kese pata hai?" Yuvraj say" humhey sab pata hai mama ji!" Mansingh say" maan gaye mrilani devi ko unka mukabala nhi kaya choice hai!" Yuvraj say " thank u mamaji agar apki izazt ho tho kaya hum komal aunty ko le ja sakte hai?" Mansingh say" ab yuvraj khud aye hai tho hum mana kese kar saktey hai!" Yuvraj give evil smile here rani in her room still crying unnati n vijay still handling her rani say" agar hum jayege tho WO jarur ayegi hum jate hai!" She run vijay n unnati try to stop her n follow her but Rani stop at hall door everyone shocked to see komal rani smile run n hugs komal very tightly n crying more komal also crying n say" chup ho jaye ab hum aaj gaye hai!" Rani say" maa aap phele kuy nhi ayi?" Komal silent yuvraj interrupted n say" ohh ho sari bate yahi karni hai ya kuch bad ke liye bhi hai!" Rani say" han maa ander aye pata hai humane apke liye apki sari fav dishes banyi hai!" Komal smile n say" acha!" N they go inside unnati ask" dada yeh apne kese kiya?" Yuvraj say" yeh hi tho tumare Dada ka kamal hai;)!" Unnati smile here rani take komal to dining table show her what she make brijraj come from his room n saw komal n shocked to saw her everyone come there brijraj come to yuvraj n hold his hand n say" thank u beta yeh sab apke wajse hi ho paya hai!" Yuvraj hold him back n say" nhi uncle humane kuch bhi nhi kiya hai!" Brijraj say" yahi tho apka badpan hai!" Rani interrupted n say" ohh hoo datta aap wahi bate kartey rahey gey ki yaha bhi ayege!" Brijraj come n sit beside komal everyone all at them then rani say" are aap logo ko koi punishment nhi mili hai !" Everyone smile n join dining table brijraj say to komal" humhey maaf kar di jiye komal aaj hum sabke samne apni galti mante hai or humhey maaf kar di jiye!" Komal say" nhi maharaj Jo bhi hua use bhul jaye!" Brijraj say" hum vada kartey hai ki apko kabhi bhi koi taklif nhi hone degey!" Eye contact between brijraj n komal everyone feel shy yuvraj cough brijraj n komal eye lock break they feel uneasy uncomfortable here Nandani saw all from aside feel angry after make fake smile come n said " wow mom aap aa gyi hum bata nhi saktey hum kitne kush hai! " komal give smile to nandani
Scene cute after lunch(komal room )
rani our her head on komal Lap n say " maa humhe tho lga ki aap Ayegi hi nhi! " komal say " atey kese nhi yuvraj jo lene aye they! " Rani irritate n say " ohh hoo maa uska naam mat lo? " komal say "Betsy ek puche? " rani wake up say " han maa pucho na apka pura hak hai! " komal say " aap yuvraj se itni chidi hui kuy rehti hai? " rani say " maa mujhe wo bilkul pasand Nhi hai wo jese dekhwa karne ki koshish karta hai wo bilkul pasand nhi hai! " komal say" acha ek bat batey jo unhone aaj kia apke datta or maa ko ek kiya hai wo tho galt nhi haina? " rani say " han par..! " komal say " tho apko nhi lagta hai ki apko unhe ek moka or dena chaye? " rani thinks suddenly brijraj come n say " han beta humhe bhi wahi lagta hai apki shadi hone wali hai unse ek moka tho apko dena chaye! " rani thinks n look at both n say " thik hai aap itna khe rahe hai tho hum ek moka dege! " briraj n komal become happy n briraj say " hey thats my little princess! " again nandani hear all this n become angry n say " not so easy not so esay! " Rani come out n nandani hide rani go to hall n do a phone call to yuvraj n yuvraj say " hello! " but Rani didn't say anything because she was confused that what agree saying to him but yuvraj understand that this is rani n say " hii princess aaj humari yaad kese aagyi?" Rani shocked n say " tumhe kese pata ki hum hai? " yuvraj say " tum khao na khao humhe pata lag hi jata hai wase tum kuch khe rahi thi? " rani say " han wo mai yeh rahi thi ki... maa datta ko lagta hai ki humhe tumhe ek moka dena chye islye... " yuvraj smile n say " isyle tum humhe date pe le Jana chati ho? Is mai itni hickichane ki kaya bat hai hum every ready! " rani smile n say " jab tum itna sab jan hi chuke ho tho hum aaj rat 8 Baker tayar rahege! " n cuts the call then nandani come n say " khan jar rahi ho jiji?? " rani say " maa or datta ko lagta hai ki humhe yuvraj ko ek moka dena chye or jo usne kiya is humhe bhi yahi lagta hai isyle humne dinner par jane ka socha hai! " nanadani smile hugs her n say " hum bhut kush hai par aap ko nhi lagta ki yuvraj ko yeh Jane ki jarurt thi ki yeh kisne kia tha I mean mohini ko yuvraj ne hi plant kia ho or sab solve kar ke sabko impress.kar raha ho but jo bhi ho hum apke liye kush hai! " turn her face n give evil smile 'n say in her mind " ter tho chod diya dekhte nishne pe lagta hai ki nhi?"
To be continued...

Edited by deepsoul - 11 years ago