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Posted: 12 years ago
it was awesome...
really enjoyed the story progressing...
Poor Unnati she is gonna do a lot of middle work now perhaps
now really waiting for rani-yuvraj face off
continue soon and thanks for pm
Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey
awesome update
so manveer jaenge akele...
awesome update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update deepsoul loved it good attempt your giving story a nice and interesting turns.
Thank you for liking my comment for you. 😃

This time fast okiee na 😃



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Posted: 12 years ago


nice update ..
great work ...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update manveer scene ws so cute love it

thanx 4 pm n cntinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
when will the next part be updated...??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: manasa16

when will the next part be updated...??

sorry i got busy these days so surely tomorrow i update👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
27 part!
Evening
Car reached at farm house n Everybody come out from car then unnati say" finally hum punch gaye warna tum dono key fight mai tho esa lag raha tha ki hum hi sahid ho jaye" then rani say" acha tho tumhey lagta hai ki mai fight karti hoo? or is raj ki koi galti nahi hai? " then unnati say" nahi humara matalb wo nahi tha " then Yuvraj say" ab tum dono shuru mat ho?" then rani frd mini come n say" hii rani how r U?" then rani say" hii mini " then they hug each other after that mini whispers n ask about unnati n Yuvraj then rani introduce unnati n Yuvraj by saying " yeh hai unnati Yuvraj ki sis n yeh hai raj Yuvraj key dost" then mini say" Hiii " then rani say" or yeh hai" then Yuvraj interrupts n say" or yeh hai tumari dost mini jo tumarey sath college mai padthi thi right " n he kiss on her hand then mini ask" tumhey kese pata?" then Yuvraj say" meri ek problem hai mai sari ladkio ki kabar rakta hoo nahi mai bimar pad ja hoo I fall ill" then rani with angry say in her mind" yeh lo yeh fir shuru ho gaya " then rani hold mini hand n say" esa karo apni bimar ka ilaz kisi or se kara lo abhi mini mere sath ja rahi hai ok" then mini say" mai kha ja rahi hoo mai khai nahi ja rahi hoo " then rani with angry face look at her n say" mini" then mini understand that rani saying her to move from there then mini say" Arey han mujhey yaad aya mujhey tho night party ki preparation dekhni hai! aap esa karo reception par jaye waha aapko apkey rooms ki key mil jaye gi or hum sab aapko night born fire party mai milgey or ek bat aaj koi soye ga nahi" then Yuvraj say" ohh really " then mini smile n say" mera matlab hai aaj hum sab frds milkey kubh masti n enjoy karey gey " then Yuvraj say" lagta hai apney humarey entertainment key liye kuch jada hi preparation ki hai?" then mini say" esa kuch hi samjh le jiye " then rani say" ho gaya ho ab hum chal saktey hai mini?" then mini say" han chalo well bye mr raj see u at night born party" then Yuvraj say" Plzzz call me raj n yes see u soon " then rani take mini with her n they go next direction n while moving rani ask" yeh kaya ho raha tha mini tu us raj key sath kuch jada hi frank nahi ho rahi thi?" then mini say" ohh come on rani wo humarey guest hai " then rani say" rheney dey mini yeh guest se kuch jada tha" then mini ask" agar ho bhi raha tha tho tujhey itni problem ho rahi hai?" then rani say" mujhey koi problem nahi ho hai bas yeh hai ki wo acha ladka nahi hai samjhi?" then mini say" mujhey tho wo bada cute laga " then rani say" ohh plzz wo koi cute vute nahi hai tujhey pata hai Atey wqt bhi ek ladki se flirt kar raha tha tho tu us se dur hi rehna " then mini say" ok meri maa ab chaley mainey terey liye special room book kia hai" then rani smile n say" acha chal chaltey hai" n they go n here unnati n Yuvraj while walk to reception unnati ask to Yuvraj " dada yeh kaya ho raha tha" then Yuvraj say" kaya ho raha hai choti?" then unnati say" ek traf tho aap rani se payar kartey hai or dusri traf aap usi ki frd key sath flirt kar rahey ho?" then Yuvraj say" choti it just a harmless flirting or bhala harmless flirting se bhi Ksisi ko nuksan hota hai kaya or hum yeh nahi kartey tho rani ka face gussey se laal kese hota?" then unnati say" kaya apney yeh sab rani key face gussa laney key liye kia tha? Ese tho wo kabhi apkey pass nahi ayegi " then Yuvraj say" ayegi choti wel tum nahi samjho gi ab tumari class katam ho gye ho? tho hum room mai chaley" then yuvraj take keys n go to room but unnati feel sad
Next scene
Nandani n raj sitting in a restaurant then raj say" pata hai nandani humhey ese kitni dino bad akeley mai bat karney ka moka mila hai humhey tho yakin hi nahi ho raha hai ki aap humarey samney bethi hai " then nandani hold raj hand n say" tho ab yakin kar li jiye" then they look at each other eyes n background music plays " kuch khas hai kuch ajneeb esas hai" then raj request her for dance n they dance n feel the music
N after dance Everybody claps for them
Next scene
scene start everyone singing n dancing around born fire then mini ask to rani " rani mr raj khai dikhai nahi de rahey hai kha hai?" then rani with angry face " mujhey kaya pata or tu mujhey kuy puch rahi hai? Mai koi uski secretary hoo?" then mini say" Arey esa mat bol tu hi tho unko lekey ayi hai or wo humarey mehman hai" then rani say" mai unko nahi lekey ayi infact mai tho chati bhi nahi thi ki wo aye wo tho datta ney kha tha islye lekey ana pada or plz uski bat tho tu kar hi mat mujhey uski shakal bhi nahi dekhni hai " then mini say" dekhena tho padegi " then rani say with confused " kaya matlab " then mini say" pichey dekho wo Yahi aa Arey hai" then rani say" ohhh no yeh tho Yahi aa rahey hai" then Yuvraj comes n say" kisi ney humhey yaad kia " then rani say" nahi hum se Ksisi ko koi dilchaspi nahi hai tumhey yaad karney ki" then Yuvraj smile n say" kisi ya fir srif tumhey " then he look at mini n say" Hiii miss mini I m sure apney tho humhey yaad kia hi hoga" then mini say" yes mr raj hum tho bas apkey barey bat kar rahey they" then Yuvraj sit beside to mini n hold her hand n say" ohhh realy thank u miss mini I m so touched" then mini also smile n say" pleasure is all mine mr raj " then Yuvraj say" plzz humhey mr raj mat bulye just call me raj" then mini say" ok raj but aapko humari ek bat mani padegi " then Yuvraj say" ya sure why not miss mini khaye" then mini say" ki aap bhi humhey miss mini nahi balki mini bulye gey" then Yuvraj say" ok mini" then both smile n here rani with angry mood move from there then unnati meet rani n say" hii " but rani was in so angry mood that she couldn't see her n move from there n unnati was feel upset n she also sit beside Yuvraj n ask him in low tone " aap yeh kaya kar rahey hai rani bhut gussey mai " then Yuvraj say" choti yeh sab un hi key liye tho kia so relax n enjoy the party" then unnati say" par yeh shai nahi hai I mean aap jo yeh kar rahey" then Yuvraj say" choti humhey pata hai ki wo gussa hai par wo jaldi hi normal bhi ho jayegi so relax hum hai na" then mini interrupts n say" kaya batey ho rahi hai?" then Yuvraj smile n say" kuch nahi bas rani ka gussa dekh key unnati pareshan hai" then mini say" ohh rani usey jab gussa ata hai na tho bas samjh lo ki kuch n kuch bada honey wala hai" then Yuvraj say" hum kuch samjhey nahi matlab ?" then mini say" pata hai jab last time use gussa aya tha tho usney kaya kia tha ?" then Yuvraj say" kaya? " then mini say" ek bar ek ladki ney use nicha dikhnaey key liye us ki dress pe thoda sa pani dal diya tha tho bas usney usey swimpool mai gira diya tha " then Yuvraj smile n say" ohh realy humhey tho pata hi nahi tha ki wo esa bhi kar sakti hai" then unnati say" aap has rahey hai rani yeh shai nahi kia usey esa nahi karna chaye tha" then mini say" nahi unnati tum rani ko galt samjh rahi ho wo Humesha se sabki madat karti hai par jab uskey sath galt karta hai tab wo uska jawab jarur deti hai kuyki tum hi socho koi apkey sath galt karey tho usey jawab dena tho jauri ho jata hai" then Yuvraj say" bilkul shai kha mini apney kuyki sabk sikhna jaruri ho jata hai" here rani take drink n sit in corner n enjoying born fire party n Yuvraj looking at her continuously then suddenly one girl announced " attention everyone now we r going to play something every interesting " then mini ask" interesting kaya hai wo tho bato?" then girl take a pillow n say " ok so yeh ek pillow hai" then a boy say" kaya hum aaj yaha sona hai kya?" then everyone laugh n girl say" nahi hum sabko yeh pillow ek dusrey ko paas karna hai or music play hoga or yeh pillow jiskey pass rukey ga use wahi karna hoga jo hum sab kayegey ok so sab tayar hai" then rani say" hum nahi khele gey " then mini ask " why?" then rani say" humara mood nahi hai" then Yuvraj say" mood nahi hai ya fir dar gyi sari ladkiya hoti hi ek jesi hai darpok " then rani make angry face n say" mini hum rajput hai or hum kisi se nahi dartey hai hum khele gey " n then they look at each other
to continue...
snowdream thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was awesome and short deepanti...
Yuvraj is too much on rani😕 poor girl
but enjoyed it
continue soon
thanks for pm
Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yippe first to comment ...as krishna di posted a res box
deepsoul i never commented before am always very lazy types in commenting and all lol
but i want to confess that i love ur ff alot ...
it is just superb
and ur an outstanding ...ossum ...brilliant writer
and coming to this update woah it was just ossum
no words beautifully written...
loved it to the core ...
update soon plzzz
and pm me as well ...
p.s . i again want to comment first it feels ossum ...
and thanxx for the pm
LOVE ANMOL

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