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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angelina6

omg sunshine it was really awsome i didnt imagine that uday will be in love with her i think he is just taking her has passtime but he is damn serious man
i loved it whole update it is really beautifully written and cherryon cake was manytas those colorful word
thanx for pm
and donot make all of us wait for update update fast
and pm me

Thanx 😊. Yeah he is indeed in love 😳 and I guess the upcoming chapters will be a little more interesting (I said I guess so don't be so sure 😉). And don't worry about manyata's colorful words u'll find plenty of them in the future!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Zarin 🤗, I know I'm very late in commenting, dint comment on last two chapters either, commented on this amazing FF was always on my 'to do' list, but was not able to comment😕. but cannot thank you much that you have been regularly sending me PM's on your updates. Thank you so much for all those PMs😳😳.

This chapter was really a big twister 😳😳, loved it👍🏼 . There were two big surprises in this update. One was Uday really falling in love with Manyata, I seriously dint see that comming. Pheli nazar mein phela pyaar ☺️. The second amazing surprise was giriraj 😲, I mean hearing him support his son mera mukh kula ka kula reh gaya 😆. This was such a pleasant surprise, I mean giriraj has always been this negative character in all our minds, so I really liked when u made his character positive right from the beginning.

I cant wait to read the next chapter and see how this father-son duo are going to get Manyata in their family 😉. eagerly waiting to see how manyata who hates all mens, coz of her father will fall in love with our princey😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg...
i read the update abd i was like...
i need more i need more...
this was short indeed...
plz plz plz plz update fast, i need it...
lol
fights really interest me
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

Hey Zarin 🤗, I know I'm very late in commenting, dint comment on last two chapters either, commented on this amazing FF was always on my 'to do' list, but was not able to comment😕. but cannot thank you much that you have been regularly sending me PM's on your updates. Thank you so much for all those PMs😳😳.


This chapter was really a big twister 😳😳, loved it👍🏼 . There were two big surprises in this update. One was Uday really falling in love with Manyata, I seriously dint see that comming. Pheli nazar mein phela pyaar ☺️. The second amazing surprise was giriraj 😲, I mean hearing him support his son mera mukh kula ka kula reh gaya 😆. This was such a pleasant surprise, I mean giriraj has always been this negative character in all our minds, so I really liked when u made his character positive right from the beginning.

I cant wait to read the next chapter and see how this father-son duo are going to get Manyata in their family 😉. eagerly waiting to see how manyata who hates all mens, coz of her father will fall in love with our princey😳

It' s okay dear I don't mind. Take ur time . I'm just glad that u enjoy my ff 😊. hmm uday's falling in love was a big surprise to everyone. 😃 And yeah giri is posetive character. I just love positivity! 😉 But giri won't be shown much in this ff. And one more very important thing. I think u have got a big misunerstanding. Manyata doesn't hate all mens because of her father. She is just a tomboy who just doesn't believe in romance but this has nothing to do with her father . her father was a very good man who loved her very much but died in a car accident when she was 14. If you have any further confusion then u can read the character sketch on the first page again. thanx again for ur lovely comment. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

omg...
i read the update abd i was like...
i need more i need more...
this was short indeed...
plz plz plz plz update fast, i need it...
lol
fights really interest me

hahaha u'll get more soon (hopefully 😉) and thanx for ur comment. And to me fights are the main attraction in manveer love story. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sunshinehkl

It' s okay dear I don't mind. Take ur time . I'm just glad that u enjoy my ff 😊. hmm uday's falling in love was a big surprise to everyone. 😃 And yeah giri is posetive character. I just love positivity! 😉 But giri won't be shown much in this ff. And one more very important thing. I think u have got a big misunerstanding. Manyata doesn't hate all mens because of her father. She is just a tomboy who just doesn't believe in romance but this has nothing to do with her father . her father was a very good man who loved her very much but died in a car accident when she was 14. If you have any further confusion then u can read the character sketch on the first page again. thanx again for ur lovely comment and don't worry about the pm's. u'll always get them if u want. 😊

Edited by sunshinehkl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sunshinehkl

It' s okay dear I don't mind. Take ur time . I'm just glad that u enjoy my ff 😊. hmm uday's falling in love was a big surprise to everyone. 😃 And yeah giri is posetive character. I just love positivity! 😉 But giri won't be shown much in this ff. And one more very important thing. I think u have got a big misunerstanding. Manyata doesn't hate all mens because of her father. She is just a tomboy who just doesn't believe in romance but this has nothing to do with her father . her father was a very good man who loved her very much but died in a car accident when she was 14. If you have any further confusion then u can read the character sketch on the first page again. thanx again for ur lovely comment. 😊

Oh ok thanks for clearing things for me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
only one thing is coming to my mind and that is🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 she definitely is he's in love already
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg!! ur ff is getting more interesting wid every update...
i'm in luv wid ur ff dea!!
love at first sight-uday has fallen 4r manyata...!!
i just wanna know how uday will make manyata fall 4r him!!
please update soon nd thanx 4r d pm dea!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Oh ok thanks for clearing things for me 😊
u r always welcome dear 😊

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