Manveer OS: 'Long Awaited Love'

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manisha98

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

hey dea...such a beautiful os!!👏

r u sure u've written 4r d first time...cuz i don't think so😆!!

felt really bad 4r manyata in starting...but den uday made it up

it was a great OS👍🏼 nd do write more..!!

-Manisha!!

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nimra malik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: chitra_rao
nice work mimi 😊, for a change i like akash here 😆, continue writing 😛

thank you so0o0o much jan...yeh i thought some how akash have to be positive somewhere... it doessnt mean i like him hahahahahahahahaha...😆

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MrsSSO

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Great work 👏

Continue writing ...

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nimra malik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: MsLuscious
Mimi i loved your os dear... Seriously i didn't felt for a second that it was written by someone who has never wrote before... Your os made me like akaash for the very first time😛
The story was great and your os was pretty long...
Infact i would give you extra credit for the dialogues they were like perfect...
I didn't knew you are a talented writer so if you can write so well you better start a FF we need talented writers in our form to relive manveer moments again...
Superb work do write more😃

thank you so0o0o0o0o0o much sarah... ur words means to me alot... it was my 1st time and u like it means i did pretty well job😃... i will try to write an FF also... thanks again jan... love u

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nimra malik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: ...navina...
Great OS 👍🏼. Do write more.

thanks navina 😃

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757315

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

awesome

it is wonderfully written and beautifully expressed

i loved the dialogues and the feel and emotion

hahahahahahhaa aksh is good

very nice 👏

keep it up⭐️

u should write a ff 😃

this does not look like ur first attempt 😲

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nimra malik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: cherry.parul0
reading this story felt like...''KASH YE KABHI KHTM NI HO''...i wanted it to b an endless os..

awWw Thank you, thank you cherry ... 😃 thats really very much 4 me... i m crying by happiness 😭 😆...

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nimra malik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: snowdream
it was so lovely dear...so emotional cum romantic...😊...
For a moment i felt so bad for manyata...but all is well that ends well...😛
Please continue to give such works in future...😃

thank you krishna jiji... thanks for lovely compliments... yeh it was not that much romantic... cause i m tooo much poor in writing romance...😭 but i did my best... and in future i will try to write more stuff... thanks again..😃 love u...

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nimra malik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: manisha98
hey dea...such a beautiful os!!👏
r u sure u've written 4r d first time...cuz i don't think so😆!!
felt really bad 4r manyata in starting...but den uday made it up
it was a great OS👍🏼 nd do write more..!!
-Manisha!!

thank you manisha thank you so0o0o much...yeh its really my 1st time but my younger sisy helped me in it...yeh after to0o0o much beautiful responce i wil definitely write something...😃 thanks again... love you.