Manveer OS: 'Long Awaited Love' - Page 3

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

awesome

it is wonderfully written and beautifully expressed

i loved the dialogues and the feel and emotion

hahahahahahhaa aksh is good

very nice 👏

keep it up⭐️

u should write a ff 😃

this does not look like ur first attempt 😲

Originally posted by: mimi.maik

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4" color="#330033">awWw Thank you, thank you cherry ...😃thats really very much 4 me... i m crying by happiness😭😆...</font>

Originally posted by: cherry.parul0

hehehehehe...ab apka reply read krne k baad mere khushi wala tears na nikal aye ...i hope...waise ab agr u cry by happiness to keep one glass too with u...tears collect krne m help karenge...nd thn unka aap use kr lena...save water... I knw bht fata hua joke tha...sooo thnx for bearing me nd my fata hua joke... :D :p

Originally posted by: andy.a

Loved this os
akash was good in this
manveer rocked

Originally posted by: -Zina-

i am really sorry i literally forgot to edit my comment!!
okay now coming to your first try!😲 omg!! i don't believe it's definitely not your first OS!! it's beautiful!!😳 wow!! i mean you write so well 👏all the expressions were so perfectly described!!👏 just awesome it was very worthy!😃 i really loved it to the core of my heart 😳 i must say you are a brilliant writer great job!!👍🏼 it was a perfect mixture of love, hate and misunderstanding! 👏 poor akash bechare ki love story hamesha incomplete reh jati hai😆
a perfect OS!😳
keep it up!👏
thanks for the pm😛

Originally posted by: Manveerangel

👏 👏 awesome 👏 👏
That was sooo nice i loved it

Originally posted by: pia.raha

oh my goddd,dat was jstt superrr super gr88!!!!!! the proposall was jst awesomeee!!!!!!! manveer momentss weeree lovelyy!!!!!!!!!!!😊😊😊