'WHISPERING HEARTS '..... Chap - 6 ; Coming soon !! Surely :) - Page 23

Saloni I am going to read everything now
And then will post my comment
Sorry for the delay
Res for now will edit asap

All the updates were awesome and beautifully written
Lets stary with the prologue
It was awesome I loved your descriptive skills
And it was utter confusion I read I 3 times to understand
Then chapter 1 was superb
It gave me another head pain as I was confused
Saloni u did this even in your first story where no one could figure out who actually slept with manyata
I loved the length of the update and your writing is awesome and superb as usual

Then chapter 2 that was short
And I have migrane now
I mean who is who lol
And the flashback just killed me
To say the truth I am confused
So please update soon to clear my confusion

At the end I would say
This updates were awesome, mindblowing, wonderful, descriptive, confusing , perfectly written, wonderfully thought of, excellently pely and magically executed
The whole story has a very different feel to it and u are an extra awesome writer
Please contnue this story
U need 2 more likes which I personally will make sure u get because I wanna read what happens next

Thanks for the pm
Sorry for late comment
Love u
Hugsss

hey saloni sorry for not comment study and also exams are there i will read and will comment promise a long wala comment i hadnt read 2 nd chappy yet

Originally posted by: edward123

wonferful upate,,,,,,,,,awww thnxxx dear !!!!

loved the update...so UV's in a revenge mood huh,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Yeah surerly he is... Just nd watch what uv does to manyta in upcoming episode

hey Friens, i hd gt so hell lotta busy nd with college tht dint gt the time to even catch a minute glimpse of IF.

Welcome back :) and yes ofcourse you should continue this story :)

Wel cmoe back nira
and yes...plzz...cont...

yes ofcourse u should continue dear😊

Welcome back !