'WHISPERING HEARTS '..... Chap - 6 ; Coming soon !! Surely :) - Page 25

Originally posted by: angelina6

hey saloni sorry for not comment study and also exams are there i will read and will comment promise a long wala comment i hadnt read 2 nd chappy yet

Originally posted by: andy.a

hi saloni😃,,,,,,,,,,, hi andy

i know last time i way very late in commenting so today iam really early,,,,,,, but this time i m super duper late in replying. i guess u already knw the reason.

but i felt the update was a bit short, considering your normal updates😆,,,,,,,, dont worry next update tht i m gonna post is super duper long so much so tht u wuld gt bored reading it.

the update was really lovely😃,,,,,,,,, thnxxx glad u liked it.

coming to the update it did help to clear a few doubts, but all doubts are not fully cleared,,,,,, in 3rd chapter, all ur doubts will gt cleared

who are the 2 girls who sort admittion in the college? according to the story it cannot be manyata, but if it was the past it could be manyata,,,,,,,, ,answer is coming in the next update.

mnayata is really arrogent, she has her own stand in her thoughts,,,,,,,,, yeah i said, manyta is really arrogant here but there is a reason fr her this behaviour which wuld unfold soon as the story progresses.

jai is also arrogent and who was the girl sammy was referring to?,,,,,,,,, AHHH,,, think dear, who culd it be????

who are the 2 people who were having a convo in the begining of the chap,,,,,, Guess who culd they be ??

wasnt manyata going to apologise to uday at the begining of the chapter. then why did she not apologise to uday when she saw her,,,,,,,,,,,really ??? manyta was going to opologise to uday bt whr did i mention tht.???😕

the way uday took her away from the college warning the students was really filmy,,,,,,,, i knw it was😆 nd why wouldnt it be ?? i mean the previous night before i wrote dis chap, i was watching some boring movie of sunny deol😕, the one in which dis song is "jab hum jawaa honge",,,,,,in tht movie i saw him picking up the heroin nd taking her to his ranch so i gt the idea nd i added tht scene in d end fr manveer🤣

cant really wait to read more, please please do update soon please, i really want to know how the story is going to progress,,,,,,,,,, gonna update today later at night

really loved this update,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,aaah, thnx andy, m glad u liked it

thanks for the pm😃,,,,,,,,, ur welcome dear 😳

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Heya saloni...,,,,,,,hey Sarah🤗

frst of all iam very very sorry for commenting so so late😕

actually i was so busy in my life i even didnt had time to scratch my head😆,,,,,,, ahh its ok dear, i m myself super duper late in replying 😆coz my situation is same as urs. I am also really so busy with my college nd othet stuff tht nowadays i hardly gt any time to think of something else.

but today i came specially to read both of your chapies,,,,,aww thn i wuld take this as a huge compliment tht u came in specially to read my chapters.😳

alright now i should start commenting about your first two chappies...

Chapter one was beautifully written i love how you are showing flashbacks and present at same time...,,,, yeah in the initial episodes there wuld be a combo of present nd flashbacks.

so manyata has got admission into the most prestigious college where uv and jay studies as well... ... Really ??? bt whr did i mention tht???😕. i think u r really very very very confuse dear 😆but dont worry all ur confusions will gt cleared in next chapter abt who is who.

Chapter two was again mind blowing... U really think so ??😆

but one thing confused me alot who is SAMMY,,,,,,,, lo ramayan khatam ho gayi aur aap puch rahe hai ki Lord Rama kaun hai ????😆 never mind u will surely gt to knw abt him in upcoming chapter

ix it uv? and jay calls him sammy maybe its the name from which manyata used to call him when they were kids... ,,,,,,,Ye bolkar toh tumne muje he confuse kar diya

i think manyta belongd to royal family PROBABLY😕,,,,,realy , i dint knw tht yaar ???😕

But this story is really different and lil puzzling me...,,,,nd ur guesses are puzzling me dear.🤪😆

i cant guess for the first time who is who😆... actually nobody could bt dont worry in upcoming chap u will gt to knw abt each nd every character.

but the best thing about your ffs are you give very yummy long updates😃... i mean when you read it you enjoy it to the core...

but second chappy wasnt that long ,,,,,,,,bt i thought it was long enough ,,,,chalo koi nahi next updateis surely gonna be hell long

you better be the same saloni who used to give long updates of PKHNIK😳,,,,,,, i m same Saloni dear , just wait nd watch fr chapter 3😉

will wait for 3rd chapter of this great FF do pm me ,,,,,, Will update soon sarah aur apko pm na karne ka toh sawaal he paida nahi hota

and yea dont you think of discontinuing your work...,,,, earlier i was thinking of doing it bt lets see whts happen in future??

we cant afford to loosed such amazing writer😊,,,,,,,,,,,awww thnxxx so much sarah fr such appreciating nd flattering words of urs.

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

Saloni ,All the updates were awesom,,,,Lets stary with the prologue It was awesome I loved your descriptive skills,,,,, thnxxx so much saira , i m really glad tht u liked it.🤗 🤗

And it was utter confusion I read I 3 times to understand ,,,,,,,,,,3 times, itni confuse ho gayi tum ?

Then chapter 1 was superb .It gave me another head pain as I was confused,,,,,, hahahaha😆

Saloni u did this even in your first story where no one could figure out who actually slept with manyata ,,,,,,,,,awww so u still remember how in pkhtnik, i confused all my readers with tht thing.😉

I loved the length of the update and your writing is awesome and superb as usual ... thnxxx saira once again, vaise tum ye sach ke tareef kar rahi ho ya aise jhootey he

Then chapter 2 that was short ,,,,,,, really was it shoert??? i meant almost everyone said the same. I thought it was ok ok... never mind chapter 3 is surely very very long.just wait nd watch

And I have migrane now ....LOLZ🤣 🤣 saira migrane dene ka kaam mera nahi balki andy ka hai.

I mean who is who lol . And the flashback just killed me .To say the truth I am confused .So please update soon to clear my confusion ....dont worry dear, all ur confusions abt everyone will gt sorted up in the choater 3rd tht i m gonna update shortly.

At the end I would say This updates were awesome, mindblowing, wonderful, descriptive, confusing , perfectly written, wonderfully thought of, excellently pely and magically executed

Thnx so so so so so much saira fr ur such appreciative nd flattrring words 🤗 🤗nd also fr improving my vocabulary .😆

The whole story has a very different feel to it and u are an extra awesome writer .Please contnue this story.....will continue cdear, dont worry

U need 2 more likes which I personally will make sure u get because I wanna read what happens next,,,,,,awww so sweet of u yaar nd dont worry m gonna update next chap soon

Thanks for the pm,,,,,,, ur welcome sweetheart🤗

Sorry for late comment ,,,,,its ok i m myself super duper late in replying

Love u,,,,,,, luv u 2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10...😆 😆 🤗

Hugsss,,,,,,,,huggs 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: Fantasyangel

haan g bilkul

Originally posted by: Chamakchallo30

Welcome back :) and yes ofcourse you should continue this story :)

Originally posted by: catty2000

Welcome back !,,,,,,,,,,, thnxxx dear !!!!!!

Me too couldn't catch up with IF because of exams 😆,,,,,,,,,,yeah i cn understand tht

.😉

And please continue soon ...,,,,,dont worry will continue it.

Originally posted by: manisha98

Welcum back dea...!!,,,,,,,,,, hey thnxxx manisha

Plz continue d story...nd update soon!! 😃

Originally posted by: pia.raha

yess ofcrsee plzzz plzz do cntinueee,and welcummm backk!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic

Wel cmoe back nira
and yes...plzz...cont...