'WHISPERING HEARTS '..... Chap - 6 ; Coming soon !! Surely :) - Page 20

Originally posted by: milhan

w-o-o u really rocked it...but its a bit confusing... hope my confusion gets cleared next tym...,,, thnxxx yaar !!!!!! dont worry abt the confusing track, all ur confudions will gt cleared in next chap

a pretty amazing update... thnxxx fr comenting😳

thnx for pm.... ur welcome !!!

Originally posted by: harika04angel

fantastic nd awsm😊

update sooon!!!!

Originally posted by: Sanarasheedroxx

WOW!!! Its Ws Amazing 👏👏
the prologue is awesome and the title is so beautiful⭐️

thnxxx dear, really glad to knw tht u liked it 😳

Coming to the update
It ws fab 👏 Really enjoyed the update though it ws a bit confusing 😕 Bt still i luved it to d core❤️

dont worry . all ur confusions will gt clear soon in the next update

Update ASAP 😊 will continue soon dear if i gt good response nd feedback😳

Thanxx fr d pm and dis lovely update🤗

thnxxx fr ur lovely comment yaar🤗

Awesom update Saloni. love it lots. cont soon 😛

Originally posted by: andy.a

hi saloni,,,,,,,,heya😳

iam very very sorry for this late comment, was really busy with my college,,,,,,,,,,,Its ok andy so m i in replying to u !!!!!

read the update the day you posted itself and i must say i simply loved it 👏,,,,,,thnku so very much. M glad u liked it. Vaise sach bol rahi ho na jhuti taarif toh nahi kr rahi...?????

the way you interconnected the past and the present in the update was simply super,,,,,,,thngod atleast u gt some idea, varna baaaki sanb ke to kaan nd dimag dono fuse ho gaye !!!!!

i really loved this uday, the angry young man,a playboy, who cant stand a girl more than 2 hrs,,,,,,,,,,. OH ! i dint hv to do too much. Real DEK ke dialoggue se churaya ye dialogue !!!!!

unnathi and uday's relation was very nice,,,,,,yeah both siblings are rocking !!!!!!

but i am slightly confused,,,,,,,,,,,lo, ab tum bhi confuse ho gyi,,,i knew it sooner or later u probably will !!!!!

is not manyata a princess here, if she is not one then whom was uday telling about to unnathi about his marriage with the princess with devgarh,,,,,,,,,As navina said to me once, patience dear patience !!! Wait fr the truth to unfold in upcoming episodes.

whathever it is manyat seems very bold there in the college,,,,,,,yes she is. AS uday says she is a 'HUNTERWALI' !!!!

the way she taunted uday was highy insulting,,,,,,,She crossed her limits nd boundaries

who knows what uday will do to take revenge on manyata😕,,,,,,,,wait fr the next update to see what uday does ????

but then she ended feeling guily about it,,,,,,,yeah she did, bt fr what ??? 😕 MYSTERY😉

uday too did insult manyat for what she did,,,,,,,obviously after all he is Yuvraj UDAYVEER SINGH !!!!

what is the use of crying over spilled milk,,,,,,,😆 right !!!!!

i must say this chap was simply awsome,,,,,,,THNXXX Andy !!!!👏

really it was worth the long wait,,,,,,,Was it ?????

do update the next part soon,,,,,,,yes i will !!!

and make it also this long, i love your long updates,,,,,,Thnx !! 2nd chap is longer thn dis

and thanks for the pm,,,,,,,,,,,,ur welcome dear !!

once more sorry for this late comment,,,,,,,OH plz dont opologise dear !!! its ok, i cn understsnd.

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Fantastic update Saloni👏. Every scene was spectacular ... not to mention , perfectly written 👍🏼. THANXXX !!! Navina, m glad u liked it.

I really don't know which part to highlight ,as i enjoyed the entire chaptr😃Really ??? I thought i might have bored u to death as it was quite long ...

But 1 part I must mention ... when that girl leaves Uday's room , he turns to Unnati and says : "kitna chillati hain ..." - THAT WAS AWESOME.

I could visualise that😆!!!

U found it awesum ???? WEll i dint hv to do too much. Real DEK ke dialoggue se churaya tha ye dialogue !!!!!

I'm very eager to know what happens next ,do continue soon ...

i will soon !!!!!!

U have made a tremendous start with this ss , ... it's already amongst my favourites😳.

Thnx navi fr ur such grand nd lovely words of appreciation👏

This story getting a place in ur favourites in itself a big compliment fr me sweetie !!!!😳

Thanks for the PM.,,,,,,

Thankss fr ur lovely comment !!!!!

Originally posted by: mrs.K

Awesom update Saloni. love it lots. cont soon 😛

Originally posted by: Roze12

koi raat kay sanatay may yahain ghoom rha ha... ... 🤣

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira

🤣🤣🤣

Koi ek nahi balki do do jun ghoom rahe hai !!!!!

i gt sleepless nights nowadays toh ye mera fav past time hai...

raat mei dek forum pr bhatkana😕

P.s Bye roze,,,,,,gotta go nw,,,,

gn,,,sd,,,tc !!!!