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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey lovies !! thanks for "liking " nd giving ur precious comments on the prologue.

I was abt to update chapter-1 a few days ago but unfortunately i lost the chapter while trying to update it, due to my stupid net connection. So sorry for extra delay caused...

Thanku for ur patience...
Here is the chapter 1 , Enjoy




CHAPTER - 1 (The Bet)



"GUSTAKHI MAAF !! Rajkumari sa !! Par aap andar nahi ja sakti !! Yuvrajsa has orderd us not to let anyone,,,anyone in, including u as well"...said a maid bowing her head...

"I had already sensd tht semaji, tht y u r standing nd patroling over here. But u only tell me, what was the reason tht prompted me to come here .Do u think am i deaf or what tht i cant hear all these sounds tht are coming out of dis room. Listen, noone in this world understands my Dada better thn me. Alrite !!! So,I need to see him nyhow, plz move out of my way !!! ...said Unnati in a commanding tone..."Par rajkumarisa, agar yuvrajsa ko pta"..."Hum haina Seemaji, u plz dont worry !!!"

Unnati entered Udays room, she knew he wouldnt be here so she forthrightly moved towards the other end tht was the attached room. She was left flabbergasted seeing the sight in front of her. Not able to move ahead she froze at the doorway. It took not more then 10 seconds fr her eyes to get filled with water..." NO plz no!!! DADA !! Akhir aisa kya ho gaya tht u have once again come here to hurt nd pain urself "...she whispered to herself in tension nd worry.,,,,, "Akhir kya baat hai "???



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"BABY !! ur phn is ringing,plz pick it up"...a hot nd attractive girl said flickering her eyes while sleeping on a lavish king size bed with a blanket on top of hers nd thn "AAAHAHHH" she screamed her lungs out..."TUM !!! Tum, kaun ho, nd hw u entered in" .... :she asked seeing someone in her room

Meanwhile, An amazingly handsome,ultra sexy nd robust looking man also appeared hearing the shoutings "Who let u in ? BABY ye kaun hai"...she questioned the guy pointing towards tht person,,,.."HI ! I am Unnati. Baby ki choti behen" replied unnati with a smile.." Tumse kitni baar kaha hai choti ki hamesha batakr aya karokho dara diya na inhe, "..said Uday stretching his hands."OH ! behen ho !!!! thn, think i must leave now...But, THNXX Uday for the wonderful ,,,,,, said the girl smiling cheesingly to uday nd thn started picking her items. Uday smirked waiving at her nd said ... "Driver will drop u home "... The girl left nd as soon as she left, he remarked..."."UFFF !!! ye ladki kitna chillati hai, hamare kaano mei dard hone laga hai... he said to unnati making a face, she smiled nd hugged him lovingly...."oh dada! u r really too much"

"So choti tell me what ws so urgent tht has brought u here,couldnt u wait at home fr me to return. he asked cupping her face..."Dada, i was passing through this area, where our this grand hotel is, so thought y not meet dada,,,so..." before she could complete, Uday gestured her to stop as his cell started to ring once again. He received the call ------

" Hello, dadisaab, khambagani .kaise hai aap...m sorry, my phn was on silent mode newys u tell y were u callin... What ?? oh no !!! But why dadisaab ? NO ! this cant happen , y u nd dad want me to return back to INDIA,"...Unnatis eyes twinkled as she heard India....U already know, m still pursuing my management course here at London (LBS) nd now U want me to return nd complete my MBA over there in India...he asked questioningly,,,,I also knw tht the princess of Devgarh will officially b declard as Yuvrani in the Great Mahasaba Meet once she turns 19, but fr tht still 8 mnths are left then y so early ??...U already knw dadisaab, i look upto you nd respect u alot . I m sure there must be some valid reason coz of which u nd dad are calling me back so I wont ask nething further frm u... He replied calmly....Alrite dadisaab ! so Next Week thts on 10th FEB is my flight way back to MUMBAI,,,,I' ll see u soon "



" Pura ghar chaan mara nd madam u r sitting here. Newys just forget it ! Oh my God, I just still cant believe this dear, m so damn happy. Huzoor-e-mallika !! I've gt the greatest nd happiest news fr u. Guess what it is ?? arey chado, mai he bta deti hu, I cant handle this suspense nemore,,,.she said giggling,,,,,," U know what Mallikaji, u have gt selected to study in the most prestigious university of INDIA.., ur dream university (R.E.B.S) Royal Excel Business School, the most superior college of all management colleges. U've cracked all their rounds so stupendously tht they've even awarded u with the scholarship YIPPIEE !! Haina kitni dhamakedar news..YYAAYY !! arey dekh toh sahi meri taraf" ,,,,,,,she said getting hell lotta excited,,,,,.What hapend ? ab tujhe kya ho gaya? why do u look so sad. U've gt selected to study in ur 'dream university' nd still there is nt a glint of happiness in ur eyes. Are u really nt happy ? ?

"It's nothing like tht, I m really very happy, trust me afterall I have gt selected to study in R.E.B.S lekin" ,,,,,,,,"lekin...lekin kya ?? tell me whats d matter",,,,,,,, "Iekin mai R.E.B.S jaana nahi chahti, I don't want to go there.",,,,,,,,, "WHAT ?? oye tu pagal ho gayi hai kya ? par kyun ?",,,,,,,,"Kyunki, I don't feel like leaving Papa alone. I don't want to go there leavin my home, this place, dis city. So, I've decided m not going newhere. Aise papa ko chorkr jane ka mera man nahi manta" ,,,,,,, "haan vo mai janti hu yaar, par sach mei tu nahi jana chahti kya ?? ,,,,,,,,,questioned the girl astoundedly.


" So returning back all the way to India, DADA ?",,,,,,asked Unnati excitedly..." hmmn, choti, dadisaab ke orders hai manne toh padenge"...said winking at her... "DADA agr hum apse kuch mange toh ap mana toh nahi karenge, I too want to go to INDIA with you. I wanna live there with all of you,,,plz plz plz dada ",,,,she was forced to shushed in b/w whn his cell started ringing once again. He made a face looking at his cell,,,, Unnati questioned him - "Is it her, Dada ?? ",,he nodded in yes nd thn moved forward to attend the cal..




" Humne bhi ek faisla lia hai hamari beti R.E.B.S ja rahi hai matlab jaa rahi hai,,,,An elderly looking tall man of abt 52 yrs said walking in,,,," BT papa, vo",,,,,he intervened in b/w,,,,
"U knw, I cant even describe in words beta, how much proud nd happy u have made ur father by geting selected in India's top most institute. Here everyone is congratulating me fr my daughters sucess nd here u,,,"He smiled nd thn she hugged him.With tears of hapines he replied -
" Mere bachche !! aap jao aur purey karo apney sapney, apne liye nahi toh hamare liye" "lekin papa",,,,,,"Don't worry abt me, shyamu haina na mere sath, mai akele thore he hu" "Ji bitiya rani !! aap befikr hokar jaiye hum saab ka pura khayal rakhege",,,,,,Shyamu kaka said entering in,,,,"Ab toh khush beta",,, she hugged him.,,,,,"O ho !! Uncleji , tussi toh great ho yaar !! mai nai keh rahi thi ki tu khamakha chinta kar rahi hai meri huzoor-e-mallika",,,,,,,"But, beta how will u manage there alone ? it is such a big city",,,,,,,he asked getting worried.



" Hey, yeah missed u too, BABY,,,,Uday said rolling his eyes...So u gt the news, as expected. !! Yes, Next week m returning back to INDIA,,, No !! No !! its perfectly ok, i mean there is no need of you to come all the way frm Canada to meet me here...We' would be meeting each other v soon UR HIGHNESS... he answered boringly...,i knw u r nt Her Highness at present bt soon u will be.. right ??,,,, yeah bye,, will miss u too, Good night.,,,,,,.saying tht, Uday disconected the call nd breathed a sigh of relief "




" Arey uncleji, whn I m here have no fear, akhir mai bhi toh ja rahi hun na iske sath. I also scored quite decently so I had talked to a person in admin deptt who informed me tht with this score nd by paying a bit of extra sum of money as donation, I can also manage to grab a seat fr myself in this prestigious college, aur ye sunkar toh mere bauji bhi bahut khush hai",,,,the other girl said excitedly.
"Toh Uncleji ab aap apni dono rajkumariyo ki tension chor dijiye !! Vahan hum koi hostel ya PG mei nahi balki meri "Phuppi" ke ghar rahenge aur vaise bhi meri phuppi mujse zyaada in huzoor-e-mallika ji se pyar karti hai",,,,,she said teasingly",,,,,,,"kya !! sach mei ? Why dint u tell me this before",,,,,,, "if I had told u earlier thn surprise kaise rehta ?"
"Papa ab toh koi tension nahi haina aapko",,,,,,he nodded nd hugged his nanhi pari.,,,,,,,,




" Thnk god she disconnected soon varna hum inhe aur kaise jheltey",,,,,,,UDAY said with a smirk.

"Dada, inhe aap 15 min se zyada jhel nahi sakte, forget abt her, u cant bear a girl fr more thn 2 hours but see now wht u r doing, U r soon officially going to get engaged to her once she turns 19, this arrogant princess of Devgarh, the girl to whom u are betroteed to frm ur childhood. Why r u doing this Dada, she is so mean, spoilt, self centered nd an arrogant girl. U also know tht u will never ever remain happy with her thn Y dada y ???...Unnati questioned him seriously.

He looked at her with straight face nd replied - "Chotti, hame bhi ye kuch khas pasand nahi hain.I knw tht, she would never be able to become a perfect life partner but she has all potential of becoming a perfect Queen nd moreover this alliance between the 2 estates Jaigarh & Devgarh would bring in the fortune nd would prove beneficial to both the estates. By marrying her, I thts 'Yuvraj Udavveer Singh' will not only get Devgar but also the uperhand in MAHASABHA membrs ,,so see this deal is nt tht bad chotti...he said winking at her.

He moved towards the mirror to style his hair. She held him frm his shoulders nd asked him seriously looking straight into his eyes - "Tht was Yuvraj Udayveer Singh who was answering bt now i want to ask my Dada, R u really ready to spend ur whole,,,,whole life with her ?? To make her ur better half.?? - He looked deep into her eyes nd said- " I am happy with this alliance Choti aur vaise bhi ab in baato se kya, fark parta hai ,sach toh ye hai ki hamari taqder ka faisla bachpn mei he ho gaya tha jab humne theek se hosh bhi nahi sambhala tha ,,hmmn,,,aur vaise, ye sab kya baatei lekar baith gayi tum choti, chalo...He said cupping her face... " Ofcourse farak padta hai dada, aap chahe humse kahe ya na kahe but i know what kind of girl you would want fr urself Uday stared at her with serious expressions.. Someone who would be a challenge fr u , who culd not b win so easily. I know dada , tht somewhere in ur heart u r also looking fr "LOVE" for,,,,, ,bfore she could continue she was immediately shushed in b/w by him.

He said sternly,,," Stop it choti !! Always remember tht We are RAJWAADE,,,, this love, feelings nd emotions is all for commoners not fr Royal people like us. Nd moreover this love, is nothing but all crap, a piece of shit. Its an entertainment package tht teenage girls like u fantasize abt it. Love does nothing except making a person weak,,,,, So plz get ur facts clear Chotti, I m not looking fr ur so called bullshit feelings,,,,,hmmn...he said sternly nd thn smiled a bit looking at Unnati.



"So,beta When u both are decidin to leave for MUMBAI? ",,,,,,,,,,"Papa, ye ke rahi hai jaldi jana hai so by " TOMORROW",,,,,,,,,,,"I m proud of u bachche aur koi bhi problm ho beta toh remeber I m jst a phone call away hmmn",,,,,he said hugging his daughter with love.



" Chotti !! ab tum apne dada ka dimag he khaogi ya kuch dinner bhi karogi hmmn,,...he said patting her head,,,,,,,, "OK, i wont further bug ur mind but I really wana tell u one thing,,,he smiled nd she says - Dada, I have heard people saying tht -

" GREAT LOVESTORIES ARE MADE THN , WHN PEOPLE LIKE YOU WHO DOESNT BELEIVE IN LOVE, ULTIMATELY FALL IN LOVE "

He looked at her chotti as if she had grown an extra head nd said..." Chotti, hum dekh rahe hai tum hame kaafi love ke lectures de rahi ho akhir kaunse friens ke sah tum ajkal rehti hi,,,,,,,, i mean "BOYFRIENd" ke sath, ek baar milwao toh sahi taange tod denge hum uski...",,,,,He said smilingly... " Arey dada, hum toh bas apko sach ",,,,,,,,,before she could continue he intervened,,,,,,,, " ab agar tumne ek baar bhi aur hamara dimag khaya iske barey mai baat karkey toh tumhara INDIA jana cancel.,,,,,,,She looked at him with wide eyes nd thn hugged him tightly,,,, "Thanku so much dada fr taking me to India with you,,. I love you Dada, I love you alot,,,,,10th FEB plz come soon...!!!! ".


The girl breathed a long breath thinking abt her dream college R.E.B.S nd leaving fr "MUMBAI" tomorrow.



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"I never thought u would be a sissy"

"Do not have enough potency"

"A big time looser & Failure, don't deserve ny respect"


Reminiscing abt all these words nd thoughts, Uday started blistering with impetuosity nd scorching with rage. With each nd every passing second his blows nd punches on the punchingbag were getting extremely fiery nd ferocious. Uday's eyes were bulging red with resentment nd fury.

"Dada !!",,,Still standing at doorway of tht attached room, Unnati whispered in concern seeing his condition.,,, "Akhir aisa hua kya hai ?? What has happened Dada , tht u r in this state today. What is it thats eating u frm inside. Whats so much bothering u, DADA ? Y u r burning in so much anger & animosity ? ,,,,Unnati cried to herself with tears in her eyes," I know something major grave nd bad has happened that's y after so many years u are here Dada, today in this dark nd lonely room... Ur anger nd frustration always seems no bound whn u r extremely upset and aggrieved over something nd this is only one way through which u vent all ur anguish out, tht is by giving pain to urself,,,by taking into boxing" Unnati muttered to herself cryingly looking at her dada's wrath, standing at doorway.

Uday was nt aware of his surroundings nd was still firing punches on tht punching bag madly. He was not aware tht his phone was constantly ringing frm past 15 minutes.


" Moving irately towards his direction, she turned him around furiously such tht they both were face to face nd then "BAM" she slaps nd bangs him hard on his face in front of everyone, in the presence of whole Damn college".

"She even Questioned him abt being a man ? nd mockingly gestured him to wear Bengals in his wrist"


Uday started punching more vigourously nd strenuously as soon as these 2 abovementiond flasbacks appeared in his mind. His eyes had turned devilishly red. Unnati looked at him agashtly nd raised her hand in concern nd could only managed to whisper "DADA"


"Piercig his gaze with her fiery eyes, she took her steps towards him nd thn "PLASH" she splashed a Jug full of Black Paint on his face".


The above mentioned thought infuriated Uday to such an extent tht he started thrashing the punchinbag so fiercely nd wildly tht even blood had started oozing out profusely frm his several wounds nd cuts tht had been made in his hands. He had turned blind in his anger nd was throwing punces crazily.

"Dada !!" ,,,, looking at his wrath, unnati screamed in acute worry with tears flowing down frm her eyes constantly. He came back to his senses whn the voice of his chotti fell into his ears but still kept himself busy in punching hard. he grumbled,,,, " UNNATI !! jao yahan se abhi".,,,..., "But dada, aap aise is condition mei ??/",,,,,,, "I said "LEAVE ,, RIGHT NOW, UNNATI" ,,,,,Uday shouted angrily looking at her nd within no time unnati ran away frm there cryingly, Seeing his choti leaving like tht, he closed his eyes to calm nd compose his volcanic eruptions frm bursting out. His thoughts were disturbed once again with the sound of his mobile ringtone. Seeing the name nd number at display screen, he threw his cell phone onto the floor in extreme abhorrence nd disgust nd shouted loudly -

"You have commited the biggest sin of ur life MISS MANYATA SINGH by messing up with me, Yuvraj Udayveer Singh, now u will have to pay the price fr ur each nd every mistake tht u did knowingly or unknowingly...I swear u will regret this big time,,,,,,Tomorrow morning, I m gonna pay to you for each nd evry insult tht u did of mine. I m gonna teach u the biggest lesson of ur life tht never ever dare to mess with "YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH",,,,,,,,,,,Uday roared loudly clenching his teeth

The expressions of anger, fury,hurt nd hatred tht were hovering Uday;s face from god knows how long within no time changed into ultra wicked expressions. Thinking about something, he said -

"Wait nd Watch Miss Manyata Singh, just wait nd watch, what tomorrow i will do to you",,,,nd thn Uday gave his devilish nd wicked smirk saying tht."



The clock had already struck 11:30 p.m. She was lying on her bed ready to be engulfed by the sleep bt this night was turnin out to be one of the longest night tht she had ever known. Dreadful activities of today were hovering in her mind one after the another. She was trying hard to rest her mind so tht she could sleep fr a while but it seemed tht the sleep had drained off frm her eyes. Getting fed up with all the tossings nd rolling over on the bed, she stood up nd walked towards the window. Looking at the moon shining so brightly nd cheerfully, she closed her eyes resting her back on the window nd instantly this thought pondered in her mind.


" He started moving towards her in a way as if A hungry tiger moves to catch its prey". Shortening the distance between the two, he stared into her eyes fiercly nd kept looking at her without blinking nd moving much. He took a step more closer towards her, thus mimimising the distance b/w thm. He held her both hands in his one single muscular hand nd firmly pinned thm at her back. Nervously, She took in the lump in her throat. He moved more closer towards her face such tht now she could feel his warm breath caressing her face. Unknowingly to her, her heart started pounding at a very rapid pace. Her body started warming up in its own consent whn his body mildly brushed against with hers. Before leaning in to claim her lips, he stared into her eyes one last time only to notice tht her gaze was already penetrating deeper nd deeper into his intense gaze. There were various expressions crept on her face nd thn

She came out of her thoughts with the ringing of her phone...


" Hello,,,, hi ,,,,, "replied this girl.,,,,,,

"Hi,,,,,kaisi ho, ab kaisa feel kar rahi ho?? ,,,,,,replied the other person.

"hmmn, m ok. Thankgod, atleast u called me Jalaj,,,,,I was getting very restless.. Hey,,,wanted to ask you tht Did u talk to him ? I tried calling him a lot, but he is not taking my calls nd later I think he threw away his phn in extreme anger. I know, he is hell lotta angry with me tht he would never ever forgive me fr whatever I did to him today in presence of everyone. I played with his feelings, made fun of him nd sort of mocked him today in front of the whole damn college, I knw I have committed the gravest mistake today nd tht he is super pissed off with me. That's why , whn I went to meet him later, he walked off angrily frm me. I know, at this point of time, he would be busy venting all his anger nd frustration out . But, Mai kya karti Jalaj !! mai apne gusse aur nafrat mei itni pagal ho gayi thi tht I lost all my senses relating to what is RIGHT nd what is WRONG",,,,,,saying tht drops of tears started flowing down frm her eyes,,,, " Tomorrow morning, I would straightforward go to him nd would ask fr his opology over nd over again till the time he forgives me,",,, Jalaj, Tumhi batao vo mujhe maaf kart oh dega na.,,,,mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai !!!!!!

"HMNN,,,zarror vo tumhe maaf kar dega, bas tum dhang se maafi manga,,,,,,,,answered jalaj nd thn,,,,,,,, "aura ab so jao raat kaafi ho gayi hai, theek hai, good night"

"Thnx fr calling me jalaj nd bye,,good nite",,,,, saying tht she disconnected the call.


Breathing a sigh of relief, she muttered to herself " I would opologise to you tomorrow, tum dekh lena, mai bhi dekhti hun kab tak mujse gussa rehte ho",,,,nd thn a tiny smile lingered on her lips. Resting her head on the window pane, she closed her eyes only to be perturbed nd disturbed by this crazy thought once again.


" Breathing heavily, both were looking into each other with fire in their eyes. She was getting a bit scared with his continuous stare on her like tht. Nd thn, He pulled her head backwards forcibly, with his other hand, paining her alot. As a reflex of this, she looked at him fearfully with tears clustered in her eyes. He slowly nd gradually started minimsing the distance between their lips. Her eyes gt closed on their own nd lips parted nd started awaiting the moment whn he would suppress his strong nd firm lips into hers lips. Tightening the grip of his hand on her head, he blasted out loudly.,,,,loud enough to make everyone hear...


" Hum chahe toh abhi isi waqt sarei aam sabke saamne tumhe tumhari aukaad bta sakte hain ki tum kahan ho aur hum kahan ? lekin vo kya haina hume kachre ko muh laganey ka koi shauk nahi hai ",,,,,,,,,,,,,She opened her eyes in a reflex as he spit those words nd stared at him with tears clustered in her eyes. He further blasted at her saying-

" I don't want to malign myself by kissing 'YOU',,,,,,a disgusting girl in disguise of boys"

Saying tht he unlocked himself frm her nd pushed her away forcibly causing her to stumble down.

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Friens !! Finally u have reached the end of chapter 1 .

So, how was it ? I hope i dint bore u with it...

I know This chapter was quite long. All those people whoever have read my previous SS (PKHTNIK) before know this thing very clearly tht i m quite "famous" or rather i would say "infamous" for giving extra long chpters. 😆


Please do LIKE and gives your COMMENTS f u found the chapter worth reading .

but i want both - ur "likes" nd "comments"😉😆

Next chapter will be posted soon depending on the feedback received.

Kindly avoid all sorts of gramatical nd spelling mistakes.


"SALONI"


Edited by coolsaloni.nira - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Suparb. Very nice update. Slbnef ek bar pherse mera dil jit lia tumne. Fantastic.
Edited by Archi02 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

SALONI GREAT UPDATE...

BUT THORA CONFUSING THA...
prologu WERE BIT DIFFERENT FROM STORY MY TOTOLY CONFUES
I HOPE I WLL GET SOME RELIF FROM THE CONFUSTION IN NEXT UPDATE
sMITA
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update Saloni
beautifully written
thr were slight confusions but i guess
they will b cleared as de story progresses
do cont soon
thanks 4 de PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb,amazing,awsomee...update nira dil garden garden hogaya super excited for next part
plzzz...update soon thanx for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Saloni jiji it was exceptionally awesome!!!👏👏👏
Superb work jiji
i guess from the update that uday is not gonna forgive manyata easily

it was bombastic 😆

splendid work
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Posted: 12 years ago
phew...finally completed readin it...!!
superb work saloni...
luvd it a lot...!!
but i'm confused a bit now...
plz update soon...nd thanx 4r d pm...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update was really nice...bt stry was confusing..waitin fr nxt chaptr..hoping nxt updt mein thoda clear ho..
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Posted: 12 years ago
amboo so goood
plzzz update second chappy and pm me plz
it was awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update Saloni dear😊 so ManVeer are at logger heads and Uday doesn't believe in love...hmm...that quote about how great love stories are made was excellent👍🏼 i loved the entire chapter..continue soon and thanks for the PM😛

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