Mistake - a Manveer OS ch 3 pg 9...completed/..

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snowdream

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Shals9
Wow!! Thats amazing OS. Loved it!!

Pls continue and update part 2 soon.

part 2 hunh ...will try😃

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snowdream

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: princessSonia
yep i too want part 2😃

😃😃😃

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snowdream

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: anushruthi
Very nice OS
very expressive and full of emotions
of no does M die ??
do cont this if u can
i vud luv 2 read more

thanks dear..will continue if possible...

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NAVINA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Great OS , Krishna. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Certain portions gave me goose-bumps ... it was excellent. Really emotional at the end 😔.

Very well written👏.

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snowdream

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: ...navina...
Great OS , Krishna. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Certain portions gave me goose-bumps ... it was excellent. Really emotional at the end 😔.

Very well written👏.

thanks😛

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Sonam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Jiji I jus wanna know Love VS Fate ka new update kab milega?☺️☺️

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snowdream

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Vasishtha
Jiji I jus wanna know Love VS Fate ka new update kab milega?☺️☺️

Uffo my sonam darling thats so funny...😆...will try to write 2ni8 sweety...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

awesome os krishna di just love it
think of updating its 2nd part if you are intrested
hum to har kisi me intrested hoti hai 🤣

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snowdream

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: angelina6
awesome os krishna di just love it
think of updating its 2nd part if you are intrested
hum to har kisi me intrested hoti hai 🤣

Ya i wrote half of part 2...will update it soon...It would be a 2 chapter OS