Mistake - a Manveer OS ch 3 pg 9...completed/..

Nimrit

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Posted: 12 years ago

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awesum chapter di. beautifully written. cant wait to read the final part.

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snowdream

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: princessSonia

thnks di
can i call u krishy di?????😕😕😕
r u updating any of ur other works 2day???😕😕😕

u r welcome dea🤗r..and u can call me so😊...nops will try to update the way of love 2day😃

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snowdream

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: chitra_rao
Amazing update krishi 👏, UV was ultra adorable here, the way he took care of her for a whole year, not giving up the hope, and his love just increasing day by day like a rising mercury was just fabulously written 👏👏, please take u time, and dont rush on the final update, this is such an amazing OS please dont end this in a haste , take ur time and give us another ooosome update 😛

Thanks chitra😃...

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manisha98

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Posted: 12 years ago

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dat was awesome!!

luvd it till d core!!!

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manveerrox

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

wow

such an amazing story

waiting 4 next part😊

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snowdream

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: manveerrox
wow
such an amazing story
waiting 4 next part😊

Thanks a lot dear😊

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nimra malik

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Posted: 12 years ago

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wow krishna jiji seriously dont have enough words to say how much this OS was beautiful, pure and intresting,...👏 👏 👏...,

loved it deeply to the core... the feelings of both manyata and specially uday's was beautifully and well written... u did greatest job ever snow... just loved it by heart... and plz dont rush in posting 3rd chapter... i want a beautiful , nice and perfect ending... so update the next part when u got time...😃 thanks 4 the p.m... love u

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snowdream

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: mimi.maik
wow krishna jiji seriously dont have enough words to say how much this OS was beautiful, pure and intresting,...👏 👏 👏...,

loved it deeply to the core... the feelings of both manyata and specially uday's was beautifully and well written... u did greatest job ever snow... just loved it by heart... and plz dont rush in posting 3rd chapter... i want a beautiful , nice and perfect ending... so update the next part when u got time...😃 thanks 4 the p.m... love u

aww thanks dear...😳..even i admit this OS has various self realization part ...k 3rd update will be done only when i get proper time...even i don't want to write it in a rush😃

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