(J of A Wife - Book 2) REDISCOVERING LOVE! - Page 53

Originally posted by: andy.a

😛navi, love you for dedicating this chap for me

love you so much,❤️ you really made my day😃

thank you very much navi👏

your a great friend thank you that you sooo much

U are welcome Andy ... but there's no need to thank me!

now coming to this update

yes it was worth the wait beautiful, lovely, fabulous , well written , fantastic and a super duper update

Thank you 🤗 .

the scene were veer mallik searched for his identity was lovely

but if only I could remember

thinks veer. but how could he when he is not veer

poor uday how could he be someone else other than him?😕

veer since i am highly biased in my opinion i will think that uday is veer itself

but removing that thoughts i see that veer as a man did exist and he had a had a girlfriend, a family a job in the indian army and many other things ... yes ! there was a Veer ( once upon a time)

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evidences in support of uday= veer in this chapter

1) Veer had a stubble. But still , he did not resemble the guy in the picture.

how could he when he is uday?

2) Unknowingly , he smirked at himself

even uday had this characteristic smirk . unknowingly is the key word in here. that means veer is non other than uday for sure

3) Ekdum rapchik rapchundus lag rahe ho ... HAAN NAI TOH!!!

living with manyata is sure to rub it on his talking

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Okay Detective Andy ... u made your point!

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navi, i can see how that brilliant mind of yours was laughing while writing the part when veer's mom explains to him how he got that style of talk

you silenced all people by giving a solid reason for that ha nai tho

but not me , not me

for me veer= uday, whatever be the evidences

4)Veer nodded gratefully at her reply.

poor fellow has his mother feeding him some stories making him believe he is somone else

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U are right Andy - I was laughing a lot with that scene 😆 ...

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now the manyata beti conversation was simply lovely

really admire giriraj, he is really supportive now a days

now how manyata feels about how she had organised a party for that akash on udays award night and how she feels guitly on that account and how sh ewould never see him play again was really heart touching😭 ... yeah ; that got quite emotional.

now that ds oh i just hate her, she is like a typical indian politician, busy calculating her gains

even her grand daugter is a business commodity for her

what sort of grand mother is she? A shrewd 1 ... who puts her riyasat before her family😡!!!

loved the vijay bai scene it made me laugh

I thought of adding a bit of humour ... because my updates are always so serious!

now was really to see manyata in her rajwada mode the way she spoke to ds about her happiness

she asked giriraj his opinion and i just loved what he said to her

he is a better father than brijraj

Yes - he is a better parent.

so finally manyata is moving to texas she too deseves happiness in her life ... and the further away she is from all the "creeps" - the happier she'll be! (HAAN NAI TOH!😉)

navi forgive me i hit the like button twice and now i cant like it

I understand ... it happens to me too😆!

will keep on pressing the like button till it gets liked

Awww ... so nice of you😳!

really sorry about it 😭

Don't be!

once more it was a superb update

loved it sooo much😃

a big thanks to you once again

THANK YOUUU😛

now 3 weeks eh is it not too long how about cutting it to 2

so will you be coming to IF these 3 weeks?

I will be going for councelling - BUT I will be here everyday on the forum , I'm just taking a break from my SS for a short while!!!

any way i am so happy reading this update

do try to update soon

If I get a chance - I will update😃!

navi did you reach this line, did i bore you?

Nope - u did NOT bore me.

once more it was super duper update

THANK YOUUU

Originally posted by: -Zina-

Awesome chapter Navina!!👏👏

Thanks Zina 🤗 .
i loved the manyata in it!!😊 the way she was talking to her unborn child was so cute😳...i really hope that Veer is Uday!! He might be😉!
as he does not remembers his past i am sure that he is Uday because the love of ManVeer was so pure and boundless uday can never leave his princess!!😉 ... he hasn't left her - he is just lost!

i hate this DS 😡she is such a greedy women just wants one thing a heir a heir and a heir to deavgarh riasat doesn't cares a shit of anyone's feelings!! its been only two months since uday is gone and this freaking budhiya is out of her bull shit mind😡 iski shadi kisi budhay say krwa do phir ye apna heir khud paida kr lay gi🤣!!

O God Zainab ... I almost fell off the bed laughing😆. DS can't bare a heir now ... it's past her age!

but well done manyata she called that guy BHAIYA🤣 lol that part was so funny!!😆 i like the susar and bahu bond!😳 that part was so so sweet when manyata and unati were trying to act like uday! manyata saying relax choti and unati saying theek hain princess! this was so heart touching!😭😭 Manyata calling Arjun "bhaiyya" was the only solution I had to get her out of that problem. Unnati & Manyata ...they are keeping Uday's memory alive!

manyata's speech while receiving uday's polo's best player award was so😭😭i felt like crying their! she has a firm belief that he is not dead, and some how she is right!!
i hope the next chapter is the meeting of Veer and manyata!! do this meeting soon so that the love story starts again!!😳 I think they'll meet in the next chapter ... I'm still deciding on that😕.

you are a brilliant writer Navina!! 👏i always love to read something written by you! please write more! and the way you write blue and red that's very nice😊 please update soon!!😃

Thanks Zainab ... your writing is also quite colourful today😉.

Thanks for the lovely story and the pm!!😛
i am impatiently waiting for the next update!!😉
🤗
love u alot!

Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll

oh navina.. i'm in love with ur story...

Awww😳 ... so sweet of you.
beautirful chapter..

Thank u 🤗 .
manyata calling arjun bhaiya😆

Bechara Arjun 🥺.
unnati n manyata trying to imitate uday was so emotional😭

Don't cry Sow ... By remembering him - they're keeping him alive!

wonder who veer malik was n why her parents r making uday take his place even though he doesnt look similar to him.. i mean if uday was checkin himself in d mirror n the pics n realises they both r different then it has to be..

Ooo - that's the secret😈.

cant wait for uday to get back his memories n go back to his princess

Uday & Manyata's reunion will take a while.

continue soon😊 ... 3 weeks time😃!!!

Originally posted by: arna753

awesum update. Thanks Nimrit 🤗 .

manyata calling arjun bhaii was really nice. pls do bring veer and manyata scenes in the next chapter.

Are you in favour of Manyata & Veer ? I'm still deciding whether the next chapter will have them meeting or it might be in the 5th chapter😕.

cont.soon

I shall 😉.

Originally posted by: edward123

woh lovely updates..

Thanx Hina 🤗 .
i have a hunch that veer is surely UDAY...

I hope your hunch is right😃.
but i may be wrong
... or u may be right😉.

waitin 4 the story to unfold

It will ... SOON😛.

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

The update was super duper awesome 😃

Thanks Saira 🤗 .

It was beautifully written and wonderfully executed ⭐️👏

Awww ... u are making me blush 😳.

I loved the humour part inside it 🤣

... thanks to Vijay Bhai 😆.

Aww giri has transformed so much great job on the navi * claps *👏

I gave him a chance to repent on his past actions .

Aww my VEER Now he looks more handsome with a clean shave

... his skin is now - SMOOTH LIKE A BABY'S BUM😳😉😆!!!

Awww his dialogues just wonderful ☺️

( Don't mind me awwing when it comes to veer is love him too much ) * blush ☺️ ... I UNDERSTAND - DO CONTINUE!!!

Now I loved ViJAY bHAI and KOMAL in this update⭐️

Manyata was awesome and that's all because u wrote it so MARVELOUSLY * claps* patting ur back*👏 ...OUCH - u pat very hard!

The highlight was my VEER ☺️

Obviously😆.

Go at the end I would say that this update was MINDBLOWING and AWESOME and MiND BOGGLING and just SUPER DUPER⭐️

Thanx a lot😳.

And I am super happy now v EER is offically mine 🥳

OURS Sweetheart ... or did u forget😕?

THIS UPDATE WAS SHORT😔

No - it wasn't.

i want longer updates with MY veer inside

Why don't u write an OS with veer in it.

now actually i liked the whole update too much can i copy paste the whole thing 😆😆😆 ... please don't do that 😒.

okay now i am into the dictonary mood so let me write the words i use for very nice updates

terrific,

fantastic,

amazing,

super,

stupendous,

outstanding,

great,

incredible,

marvelous

,

fabulous,

impressive,

extraordinary,

magnificent,

superb,

astounding,

tremendous,

excellent,

awe-inspiring,wondrous,phenomenal,

exceptional

and there's always superspecialawesome! Thanks for ALL 21 compliments. Have u been reading the dictionary again!!

And three week long wait is TOO long but we need a double update after that😛😉 ... I don't think so 😈.

NOW NOW NOW pm me when u come online

Because I was missing u the whole day TODAY

MY S--L M--- u can fill in the blanks lolzz ☺️

At first when I saw that ... it looked like SALMAN ... then I realised what it actually was😆😉.

Will like it later I am using my phone

Thanks so much for pm * big hug* 🤗😃

Welcome 😃.

Love u muah❤️😉

Love u 2 Saira ❤️ 🤗 .

i have liked already 😃

I saw ... thank you!!!

Originally posted by: ...navina...

I loved the comment Saira ... thank u so much!!!