(J of A Wife - Book 2) REDISCOVERING LOVE!

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#511

lovely update navina

It was too shrt (-.-)
veer doesnt look like himself ? How come?
I love the lingo he used to compliemnt himself isnt it quiet familiar *winkkii*
Aww manyata wanna teach her princess flying kites with her UV
I loved the baba manyat duo ..hayy soo much affection,concern and hopes :)

Cont soon :)

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manisha98

@manisha98

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Posted: 12 years ago

#512

Aww...dat was such a gud update..

manyata calling bhaiyya, and vijay banna spilling tea was 2 gud!!😆

luvd d update nd do continue soon!!

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Fekta Holic

@WhatTheF

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#513

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#514

hey navina...😳

I m sorry nav tht i couldnt reply to ur earlier chapters but u knnw the reason v well ...

1st becoz of exams nd thn i was being hell lotta lazy 🥱 whn my exams got over, tht i did nt comment for ur chapter 2 even after reserving it.😳 but today after so many days nd finally breaking all shackles of my laziness,

here i m with my ,...

precious nd golden comments😕🤣

do i really need to say this thing afain nav ????? ok,,,, if u want thn i certainly will ...😃

Like the rest of other chaps ,this chapter was also mindblowing nd amazing chap yaar,,, i really loved it

but u knw what nav ????

for the first time, there is something in this chap tht i really dint like it,,,i will disclose about it later...ok.

this chapter starts with awesum scene of veer who was busy looking around the walls of his room which were fully adorned with his pictures but still he was confused about his appearance, his identity.

i mean,,,come on yaar, now why wouldnt he be , whn he is really not the person his mother claims to be...

yes navina,,,i m still very confident tht this person is none other thn UDAY himself...

u want reasons naa fr my belief,,,here they are...:

FIRST, Veer himself was not convinced enough tht whether the guy whom he saw in those pictures is really he,,,himself , ...how could he be, whn he is uday...

SECOND, he gave his signature smirk once he got rid off of his stubbble ...like uday

THIRD, unknowingly he blurted out the famous dialogue... "rapchik rapchandus,,,,,,haan nahi toh"...as udays princess used to tell him

do you want more reasons kya,,,,,,to prove me tht whatever i m thinking is not true ?????😕

U r really playing a smart game nav,, leaving no stone unturned to confuse all ur readers with this UDAY & VEER game...😆

first u gave us all lollypop nd made us all very happy by giving us this small clue of veer being uday whn he said :rapchik rapchandus dialogue;;;;; nd thn in the very next moment u made all our hopes dashed into ground whn u gve the clarification of veer;s mother of why veer blurted those things...

this can be possible tht VEER, who is the major in an indian army have had learnt thsoe words nd lingo form one of his FRIEND, who could be a MUMBAIKAR as this is the lingo of MUMBAI ...

as its not only manytas copyright on those words,,,i mean she herself learnt this mumbaiya language iwhn she had reached mumbai so this can very much be possible tht VEER had also learnt tht language nd lingo from his friend who could be a mumbaikar...

so in this manner veer's mom justification can also be held true tht veer might have learnt tht lingo frm his friend nd now he said tht ...

but in this case i 100 % sure tht it was not veer who spoke these worde but instead uday only, who blurted out tht cause of his princess effect on him.😉

THN, i really oved manytas nd unnatis small bonding whn manyta was busy talking to her baby.

THE award ceremony niight was the heart wrenching one...i could really feel her love nd pain fr uday... i rea;lly loved manytas speech nd how she remebered the previous award ceremony night with this one...

isnt this quite weird,,,,tht in the earlier previous awards night, eventhough manyta was physically present with uday but mentally she was thinking about her the then majnu nd during this award night, she wwas physically present to collect the award for uday but emotionally nd mentally was perturbed by ONLY nd only her udays thoughts...

i freally liked this scene👏 👏 👏

btr u still managed to add a pinch of humour in this extreme intense nd serious chapter whn manyta addressed "mr arjun as "BHAIYA JI" nd thn listening to tht our VIJAYBHAI threw it on the king ...tht was really funny man😆

The one thing navina tht i really dint like in this chapter is DS weird yet extreme selfish behaviour ,,,navina...

i mean ds and brijraj loved UDAY as her own son nd now after his death,,,both are so hell bent on getting manyta married to someone elso nd tht too whn only 2 months had been passed since udays death...

i know ,,,u showed tht devgarh is in some problem thtsy ds was so worried for her state future nd thus wanted to get manyta married.

but still yaaar...ds cant be so cold hearted towards manyta nd uday whom she loved like her own son...

STILL, IF u want to show tht ds did all tht to save the future of her state thn plz give the solid reason for her doings ,like tht DEVGARH is really in such a grave danger, tht ds who although is really shattered with udays death nd dearly misses him nd all but still was left with no other option other then getting her granddaughter remarried...something like tht...plz plz...plz

This is my request to you tht plz dont show ds as such cold hearted woman yaar... who has no heart to feel her granddaughters pain,,,nd feelings...i cant take ds as negative or grey character yaar... coz i have always loved her bonding nd motherly like affection with UDAY in the show also,,,so just coz of this i dint like whn u showed ds doing all tht...😊

hope u would understand...

REst of all the chapter was mindblowing..loved manytas nd girirajs relation...😳

Again one thing is confusing me yaar tht...???? (pta nahi meri confusion kabhi khatam hogi bhi ya nahi😆)

WHY THE HELL DEVGARH IS IN PROBLEM , nd WHAY THE HELL DEVGARH STATE IS SO KEEN ON GETTIN A HEIR FOR ITSELF WHN IN ACTUALLY IT SHOULD BE JAIGARH???

AS its the JAIGARH state who have lost their YUVRAAJ nd the next possible HEIR for it...

so how come,,,devgarh got in problem...?????

this is what is pissig me off...plz enlighten me navina...

nd then where is jai yaar...is she still in tht asylum only...😆

she was admitted in asylum on i guess 4th month anniversary of manveer rite ????

after tht uday got shot in jaigarh nd now he is even declared dead in front of whole world still JAY KA KOI PTA THIKANA NAHI HAI...KAHA CHIPA DIYA HAI TUMNE USEY NAVINA...😆

Rest of all was mindblowing,,,👏

u r my star as usual⭐️...

...now next update u gonna post is after 3 weeks...😭 how would i be able to live without ur story yaar...nahi...😭 ok enough of my melodrama...😆

try to come soon nd update it ASAP

nd yes next time u update ,,,,,plz give us tripple updates ...this is ur punishment for u fr taking such a long leave/...

PHEW...mera comment toh kuch zyada he lamba ho gaya...😉

ab bhugto ye itna lamba aur boring comment...😆

i think , i should take ur leave now,,

i have already eaten half upof ur mind...

kya pta putra bhi kha liya ho...

ok jokes apart...

bye navina...stay well nd keep rocking...👍🏼

Edited by coolsaloni.nira - 12 years ago

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Shahista

@Shahi01

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#515

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😆

UNRES

Firstly here is a hug for you

Ek dum rapchik rapchundas update navi.

Written beautifully as always.

Manyata giri bonding...

Veer not convinced of his own identity

Manyata talking to her little princess inside her

Her accepting udays award.

the comica relief was brilliant, vijay spilling his tea

and manyatas line '' bhaiyya''😆

alll in all a beautiful update. Gosh now we have to wait for next update

in 3 weeks time😕😲 thats sooo long. MUuuaaah but nways its worth the wait.

Edited by Shahista01 - 12 years ago

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misteyes

@mistyeyes16

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#516

i am sure that veer is uday and in the promo when uday asks manyata do u love veer its manyata hallucinating uday (she missesuday and she imagines uday is with her that explains the uday scenes in promo)

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Safia Rafiq

@safia25

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#517

I know Navi.,,that my comments are not soo long and detailed like Andy and Nira,😭😭 but i comment by the core of the heart as you are a superb writer. and a really good friend (if u considered me).😳😳😳

Now coming to the update, so that was fabulous, well written and yeah heart touching.⭐️⭐️ The way manyata ,say about his hubby on the stage, that was so emotional 😭😭(really i cried alot). but happy that how she called Arjun (bhaiya)😆..i can't help myself but only laugh out of my stomach..🤣

is shifting to texas for starting a new life with Uday's memories (aww how sweet of her)..🤗

Now coming to our heart-throb Uday (who is now veer)..yeah i know definitely Veer is our Uday..the lady ,who pretending of Uday's mother and considering him as Veer; is so mean, she is just ba*t**d😡...awww shweety Uday, he don't know that he is Uday🤪..and the way he said, Haan nhi toh!! that was marvelous but hate his,, oOpps sorry not his actual but fake mother is making the false talks that his way of talking is similar to major (forgot the name)😔..but the truth is that his talks are similar to his princess☺️..

Navi the update is totally awesome.👏.but u know na that how much i m greedy about your updates so, no 3 weeks u have to update ASAP...😃

again thanks navi for the update and sorry for the late comment, as u know how much i m lazy🥱. so plz update soon...😆 a very big and warm hug...🤗

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#518

hey,navina agn a suprb update and now wit ur every updates i am geting uday's charcterstics in veer

like smirk-uday's fav thhing to do

rapchik rapchundas,haan nehi to--- manyata fav wrds

veer cant remember nethng,dats bcoz veer is uday!!!

also veeer ka jo reactn tha manyata ko 1st time dkhkar---

all dis has mde my detctve mnd to thnk dat veer is uday!!!!!! awww i soo wish dat!!!!!!

i am sure now dat there is smthng meaning hidden behind ur promo,which i missed 1st time bt now wit every update its gettng clear!!!!!!!

😊

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#519

Originally posted by: swetsurati
superb,mindblowimg,awsome...update navi👏👏
👏i can bet veer is uday...
Veer shook his head ... but if only I could remember! ,he mumbled. He walked into the bathroom. He stared at his reflection in the mirror. YOU DON'T LOOK LIKE VEER MALLIK ... he spoke to himself. With a pair of scissors ... he began to trim his beard. He cut it as close to his skin as possible , because in the photos , Veer had a stubble. But still , he did not resemble the guy in the picture.

In a fit of frustration, he grabbed the razor-blade & shaved off his remaining facial hair. He wiped his face in a towel. He stared at the image before him. Unknowingly , he smirked at himself ... before complimenting : Ekdum rapchik rapchundus lag rahe ho ... HAAN NAI TOH!!! 😲

in ACP praduman style hmmm...kuch toh gadbad hai 🤣pata lagana padega...
Beta ... when are u going to drop that habit? What habit , Mom? ,asked a confused Veer. Talking in that lingo. He frowned at her in a questioning manner. She carressed his face. Beta - u don't remember, but I do. Your colleague ; Major Bhushan Dixit , who was shot and killed at the border - he used to talk like that. Because u were constantly stationed with him ... u picked up his way of talking. Veer nodded gratefully at her reply.
juthi aurat...kahin ki 😡ye koi major bhushan ka style nahi hai ye manyata istyle hai🤣
ho sakta hai veer is dead aur veer ki mom ko uday mila ho aur woh ushe juth bol rahi ho k woh veer hai...an she doesnt want to lose her son again..bcuz uday is veer's look a like...hmm...ab kuch kuch samaj aaraha hai...
awww...award faction scene was sooo..emotionle😭
😭😭😭awww...unnati and manyata scene was soo...cute...Unnati - there is nothing stressful about making a couple calls. Relax Chotti! Theek hain Princess! Both laughed at their failed attempts at imitating Uday.
haww...DS a sooo..kamini 😡😡😡
😡😡lolzz...manyta call arjun "bhaiya"🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
uncle giri is very good FIL...👏hawww...next update after 3 weeks this is not fair😭😭😭😭😭
plzzz...update soon.🤗

Thanks Sweta 🤗 .

What will u bet 🤔 ... that Veer is Uday?

So has ACP Pradhyuman bypassed Daya Sir & Abhijeet Sir ... and given the case to Sweta Sir😉😆? My advice to u ... keep gathering evidence😈.

The scene at trhe Awards function , did become a bit too sad

... I got carried away in writing it. Unnati has become an integral part of Manyata's life since Uday vanished.

We all knew from the start that ; as much as DS loves her family ... she loves her state more! And as Giriraj said - she will do ANYTHING for Devgarh

Manyata called the poor guy "bhaiyya" ... because that was the ONLY THING I COULD THINK OF TO GET HER OUT OF THAT SITUATION😆!!!

Giriraj is reformed now - I turned him into a good parent.

3 weeks is not that long ... it'll be here in no time. But if I do get a chance in between , I will post the next chapter😃.

I loved your comment Dear ❤️ ... thanks a lot😳!!!

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#520

Hey navi this chapter made me more confused...😕there are so many proofs but still i think veer isn't uday😆Well to know the real khichdi we need to wait and watch...but for me the best part of this.chapter was where manyata calls arjun bhaiyya😆 i wasn't expecting anything like that i thought she will use her jungli bili style😆 well loved the chapter and her speech was fab...now have to wait for three weeks to get another super duper chapter well would wait but try to update fast😃

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