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Posted: 12 years ago
heyy safia i'm sooo sorry that i couldn't comment on ur story becoz i was busy these days nd i.didn't get time comment but i read it nd really really really liked it especially manveer's nok jhok just hope they both will get togther nd really liked j as a loving sister that loves her sister.sooo much
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Posted: 12 years ago

wowww

loved it!!!!!!!!1

ab uday ko RM jana padega

superb update

wowww

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Safia! Really interesting👍🏼. It was after a very long time that I felt I was watching the show again. Loved the dialogues u wrote for Manveer ... it was very believable! Eager to read further, please continue soon, thanks for the PM😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank you for pm..good going...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update...
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
this was truly awesome
loved it to such an extent that
now i cannot get over it and
cannot wait for further updates
if possible please pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey! I've been reading your ff for quite a while and I must say, its really interesting. Could you post chapter -18 soon!? Cuz I really wanna know what happens next.😊

P.s.- Btw, this is the first time I'm commenting on someone's ff/ss , so please update fast😆!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Guys, after so much days, i m here..
Guess what? today is the same chapter number that "18" which was the last chapter of BOOK 1 PKHTNIK written by SALONI..
So,
A happy Anniversary to PKHTNIK...😃😃😃
Was thinking ,it has been a long time and no Manveer scene?
so this update is full of MANVEER scenes.. enjoy!😳😳

____Chapter: 18____

The beautiful sun of the morning arises, sun rays were smooching manyata's face.. She apparently open her eyes, only to see her baby priyam woken up and playing with the teddy bear which vijay gave her..

Hello, good morning mama ki jaan!! Mama ki jaan mama se pehle hi uth gyi.. Sounds good!!

Knock knock!! Vijay knocked on the door..

Before manyata could reply , vijay was already entered in the room..
Hello, Bachaw!! How'z ur first morning in Raj mahal going??

Vijay bhai apko kya lagta hai, Priyam apke sawal ka jawab de paegi.. Itni umeeden laga rhe hain..

Aww!! Manyata bhai, jab hum jai bhai se akhon hi akhon me baat kar sakte hain, to priyam bachaw se ishaaron ki zaban mushkil thori na hai..

Vijay bhai, nice try!!

Priyam bhai, chalo hum aj apka nursery room dekhen.. Apke Vijay bhai ne khaas apke liye banwaya hai..

Vijay bhai, me aur Jai apki behenen hain ye to tuk banti hai pr Priyam apki behen hui yeh kuch samajh me baat nhi aayi..

Manyata, my sweety bhai, wo kya hai na kal raat humne aur Priyam bhai ne ek chhoti si deal ki thi so ab Priyam humari teesri behen hui.. And Obviously hum apni behenon ko bhai kehte hain.. He winked..

Hawn!! Manyata was beyond shock..

Chale Priyam bhai, he asked..

He was about to take her in his arms when she started cry ..

No!! Shoo shoo!! Chup hojae bachaw.. Apke Vijay bhai apko kuch dair baad lekr jaen ge.. Shuu!! Shhh!!

Vijay bhai!! Priyam puppy nhi hai.. Haha!! Shoo shoo!! Vijay bhai u are too funny!!

Dono maa beti ek jessi ho.. Balke maa beti hi nhi , Maa beti aur maa ki behen bhi.. I tell you!!
He went out from there leaving uncontrollable laughing manyata behind..
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Good Morning!! Manyata wished everyone..
But was beyond shock when she saw Unnati and Uday too seated there where only one chair was left and obviously that was for her..

Haye Bhagwaan!! Yeh Uday ka bacha kab meri jaan chorre ga?? She mumbled while sitting near him..

He came near to her ear, and whispered : jab tum humara bacha hume wapas de dogi..
Never Happening!! She said out loud..

All present people in dinning area look at Manyata, who was definitely pale..
Kuch nhi!! Bss me aur uday mazak kr rhe the, was all she could say..

She slightly make her spoon to fall on floor, and then move under the table to take that spoon, and pop it in uday's leg..

Ouch!! Manyata what are u doing? Uday screamed out in pain..

Uday are u fine ? OMG!!
He glared at her and gave her "wait and watch" look!

What? Esse dekh rahe ho, khao ge kya?
Clever girl!, he taunted..

After finishing meal, everyone headed towards their own respective works, except Vijay banna and Unnati..
Vijay Banna!, unnati call out his name..
Hann!!
Ab bhi humse nafrat karte hain?

Aaa, nh, nhi, nhi unnati!! Essa nhi hai?

To phir jab aj hum itne waqt k baad mehel me aaye to apne humse ek baar bhi baat nhi ki..

Unnati, tum humari bachpan se best friend thi, ho, aur raho gi.. Bss kuch family matters ki waja se yeh sab...

To iss ka matlab Family matters ki waja se zulm hum par bhi hoga..
Manyata k sath jo zulm hua wo humne kiya tha? Humne unhe ghar se bahir nikala tha?

Unnati, essa nhi hai..

To phir kesa hai Vijay banna? Ap sab ne apna apna gussa hum par nikala.. Kyun?

Unnati this time you are right! Jai said from behind..
You know what Unnati, for the first time i realized k jiji and Uday ki in laraiyon me humne bhi apne ahem rishton ko dekha hi nhi, unhe aur kamzor hone dia, aur shayad issi waja se jiji aur Uday bhi aur door hogye..we are sorry Unnati..
Jai apologized..
Both Jai and Unnati hug eachother..

Ahan!! Now no more tears please.. Warna yahan nadiyan na behh jayen, i tell you!! Vijay mocked..
And so he joined their hug too..
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There Manyata was throwing pillows on Uday in her room..
No actually one pillow + one abuse..

Halkat vere, bumm, a pillow was flown on uday..

Khasmanu khane, tharki, bum, another pillow!!

Manyata, agar tum issi tarah poora din hum par pillow maro gi to sadly sadly tumhara poora din zaya jaye ga.. Because not even your one shot touched me.. Uday said proudly while catching another pillow..

Uday k bache, tu samajhta kya hai apne ap ko.. Tujhe kya lagta hai k tu yahan par aakr pehle ki tarah mere sir par betha rahe ga..

Ahan!! Yeh shart to tumne rakhi Manyata.. Remember ! Aur wese bhi tum hume humari beti se door nhi rakh sakti..

Me wahin sahi thi, atleast Toronto me tum to nahi the.. Ab pata nhi aur kitne din tumhe jhelna parre ga..

Simple!! Hume priyam dedo, aur apni azadi pao..

Pata hai kya Princess, last time and in this time, there is a big difference, last time jab ap mehel aayi thi tab aapki azadi humse shadi karna thi , ek yuvrani banna thi,
And this time, apki azadi apko mile gi jab ap hume Priyam lauta dengi..

Huhh!! Mene wo azadi bhi jeeti thi apni marzi se aur yeh azadi bhi apni marzi se hi jeeton gi.. Samajh aayi..

Ahan!! Itni asaani se nhi Princess.. Abhi to game shuru hua hai aur wese bhi hume games harna acha nhi laga..

Acha nhi lagta, to aadat bana le, tujhe aage zaroorat parre gi..

Kamal hai princess, 2 saal canada me rehne k baad bhi baat to tum ab bhi moniya style me hi karti ho.. Wahi jhali moniya..

Ho gaya ya aur mirchi lakr doon..
Tujhe samajh nhi aata , me kya keh rahi hoon, chala jaa yahan se..

Bss hume Priyam dedo.. He chased a broad smile..

Tu esse nhi maane ga,tujhe teri zaban me hi samjhana parre ga..
Yuvraj Udayveer singh, apko iss tarah Yuvrani Manyata k kamre me aana shobha nhi deta, chaliye jaiye yahan se.. She said while pushing him back off the room..

Ahaan! Princess, not bad!! Hairat ki baat hai k aap apna naam hi bhool gyi.. Mrs. Yuvrani Manyata Udayveer Singh!
Yaad aya?
Aur jahan tak kamre me aane ki baat hai to hum apke patti hain, haq hai humara.. He pulled her from her waist.. Kyun sahi kaha naw? He said raising his eyebrows..

Haq? Meri jutti!! Teri to, chhor mujhe.., she struggled to hard to release for his gage and wins to do so..

Halkat, vere yere, khasmanu khane, tharak k peepe, khoon chusne wale junk, saandh kahin k.. She said while pushing him to a wall,

Ahaan!! He raised his voice and gestured her to shut her mouth up..

By this sudden change Manyata felt terrible, and gave him a fake smile..

He patted his cheek, good! Smile k baad kya sikhaya tha? He asked..
Hello Uday! How do you do? Aj ka mosam kitna acha hai!! Matajee tumhari humesha sunen! Tum aur tumhare bache humesha khush rahen!

Ap ek baat kehna to bhool gyi, humari jodi humesha salamat rahe..! He completed..
Manyata gulped down and murmured: GHANTA!!
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Uday! Uday! Uday!, manyata called out his name loud..
Meanwhile all came there running, including Jai, unnati, Vijay, and Uday..
Manyata, is there everything okay? Asked Uday..

Ley! Mene to sirf Uday ko bulaya tha par yahan to poora ghar uth kar agaya..
Jiji, kamal karti hain ap, hume dara dia.. Jai complained..

Jai, tumhare jiju aaye hain naw to me ne socha k unse thora kaam karwaya jae..

Thats my Manyata Bhai, vijay complimented while Uday glared at Him angrily..
Uday! Mujhe ice-cream chahiye..

So what Manyata? Mahel me servants hain ok!! Tum unse bhi mang sakti ho..

Nahi!! Mujhe dark chocolate fantasy ice-cream chahiye..

Okay! To ap yeh order bhi kar sakti hain..

Aww!! Bhool gaye, pehle tum mere liye laate the, aur bhi me chahti hoon k tum hi humare liye lao..

Manyata! Stop these stupid games .. Order it..

Theek hai, to me mahasabha se keh doon gi k atleast Yuvrani Manyata ab Yuvraj Udayveer k sath nhi reh sakti.. Eo apni Mahrani ko to sambhal nhi pae, apni beti ko kya sambhalen ge.. Manyata said all in one to torture him..
Manyata, ice-cream kahan se mile gi..? He asked

Aahh! My uday! Kitni aasani se maan leta hai naw meri baat..

Blackmailer!! He announced..

After his leaving, all couldn't suppress their laugh.. A victorious smile appear on Manyata's face..

Sach me jiji, ap kamal ki hain! Jo uday apni shopping k liye servants ko bhejta tha, aj wo khud apke liye gaya and wo bhi ice-cream lene.. Jai giggled..

Yeah really! I couldn't stop but to laugh my stomach out.. Said Unnati.
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Uday reached palace with Manyata's so called Dark chocolate fantasy ice-cream.. But was out of his mind when he saw Manyata and all those buddies had eaten ice-cream before his coming..

Wait a sec, manyata! Ice-cream was finished, thats why u sent me to buy..then how come you all eat the very same ice-cream? Uday asked glaring at Manyata

Wo, wo, wo!
Yeh wo wo kya hai manyata?

Woh Uday, actually ice-cream parri thi but me check karna bhool gyi..

Uday on the other hand understood all the situation... He said while removing ice-cream from her upper-lip area : ohh i see! Wese tumhari himmat ki daat deni parre gi Manyata! Now wait and watch!

All saying this he left an amazed trembling Manyata behind..
Jiji! Tension not, uday will do nothing.. jai comforted her.
Hope so! But filhal to mujhe bara maza araha hai..
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Uday! Uday! Mere paon!, manyata called patting her feet..

Manyata! Don't tell me k tum humse apne paon dabwana chahti ho..

Nhi! Chahti to me tumhara gala dabana hoon par afsos hai k yeh ho nhi sakta..

Very funny Manyata, bolo kya kaam hai?

Arreh! Dhakan! Dikhai kam dekha hai kya? Paon dabao mere! I mean apni wifey k..

Manyata very funny! Servants hain yeh sab kaam karne k liye..
Servants? Unko to mene chhuti de di..
Manyata? Are you crazy?
No! I'm awesome! And i know this! She flashed her all teethes..

Manyata, all day took opportunities to tease Uday, si that he never come back to Mahel..
All the day she was doing her fu*kin' antics..which were making uday go crazy..
Uday yeh karo, uday wo karo!
Uday yahan jao, uday wahan mat jao!
And finally it was her last call may be!

Uday! Uday! Uday! Uday come fast! Hurry! Anybody here? Manyata called..

Manyata! This time if u have call me for ur silly works then u will regret it.. Said uday while sitting on the couch and sipping his coffee..

Uday was very much sure that its again manyata's some new technic to play pranks with him.. And so he made a mind to now tease her..

Manyata' what happened ! I'm doing my work so u better do your's..
Uday! This work is more important than your's, come fast Uday! Come fast!, manyata said sobbingly..

This time Uday could sense manyata's voice weak and that she was might be sobbing..
Without wasting any minute he stood from the couch and ran as fast as he could. And finally when he reached downstairs, what he saw was beyond his expectations..
Priyam! What happened to her? Uday asked with a tensed voice..

I don't know she was with me and suddenly... ,manyata couldn't complete her sentence due to her continuously sobbing..

Manyata calm down! just calm down! nothing will happen to our Priyam..

Uday took Priyam in her arms, who was in Manyata's arms before.. Soon all family members came there and joined Manveer..
Uday and manyata rushed in one car with Priyam, and so on other in their respective cars..

Maa sahab, humari bachi! ,komal said while crying..

Humare hote hue Kuch nhi hoga humari Priyam ko.. DS enquired and comforted Komal..

Maa sahab, hum maharaj ko phone kardete hain..
Wo hum ne karlia hai Komal! Ap guards ko humare jaane ka jntazam karne k liye boliye..

Doctor sahab, dehaan rahe k koi media ya public ko iss baare me pata na chale.. Hum nhi chahte k fazool me wo koi bakhera shuru karen.. DS ordered.
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Love,
😃😃😃 SAFIA😃😃😃
Edited by safia25 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
when will uday know the truth
pls i want that part fast
regarding todays update it was fab pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww safia I just loved it...u made my day... U enhanced old memories of DEK...thanks for updating today yar...do continue soon...thanks for the p.m...love u.

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