very good start! its interesting i would like to read more update soon thnx for pm n plzz update ur previous stories!
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very good start! its interesting i would like to read more update soon thnx for pm n plzz update ur previous stories!
Originally posted by: Choco.Swiss
Comment edited on page 7:D
Originally posted by: rocker12
lol swini i have almost completed the chap2 and thinking of when to update it :Dkb karo update ???
Originally posted by: Choco.Swiss
Abhi kardo pliz:)
Originally posted by: Choco.Swiss
Chalega now update:D
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In devgarh palace mumbai
Ds: doctor sahab koi khabar manyata ki ?
Docter: nahi mahasahab lekin hum ne apni khabri india ke har kone me phela dye lekin kahi se bhi rajkumari ki koi khabar nhi
Br: mahasaab hamari samajh nahi araha ke ap kyu us larki ke peche pari hae ap j ka raj e abhishek kyu nhi kara dete
Komal: mahraj manyata Is ghar ki bari bete hae ye us ka haq or kia yeh raj e abhishek karana zarori hae?
Ds: komal ap kia bhool gae hae 32 saal se mahasbah pr jaigarh parivar ka raj rha hae aur agae bhi karta agar yuvraj udayveer hote to lekin jb ke who lapata hae aur giriraj bhi is dunya me nhi rhe to hume bhool nahi krne chaye hae hume jald as jald manayata ko yuvrani ghoshit krna chaye
Br: gustakhi maaf mahasaab lekin hume kia pata yuvraj udayveer singh kbhi bhi wapis asakte hae who insaan itni jaldi nhi marskta uski ragoon me jaigarh parivaar ka khoon daur rha agar wo wapis aya to hume he apne mata pita ka katil samjhega jb ke hamare to kafi ache sambund the jaigarh raj parivaar ke sath bht acha the halake hum to apne hotel projects bhi combine krne walay the
Ds: hotel project acha yaad dilaya apne brijraj jald us jald maloom kee jiye ke jaigarh parivaar ke sare hotels aur properties ka kya hua kyu ke agar 2 mahine ke under jaigarh ka waris samne nae aya to ye rajparivar mahasabah ke agle sarbarah ko de di jaige
Br: yanne ke j
Ds:nahi brijraj manyata
Br: mahasahab ap kyu us larki ko yuvrani bna rhi jis me himat tk nhi ke apni zemedari uthae riyasat ko kia sambhalegi or unke mahasabah ke sarbarah hone se hume srf nuksaan hi hoga
Ds: hamara faisla atal hae brijraj ye srf or srf manyata ka haq hae
Br: mahasaab agar wo yuvraj wapis agya to ap kia karenge apne apne hathon se giriraj ka dya hua contract sign kia tha ke devgarh or jagarh ka bhavishay ek hoga
Ds: who srf humne udayveer singh ki kabiliat or kamyabi dekh kr lia tha kyu ke humein unhe dekhte he samajh pr gya tha ke ye insaan devgarh raj gharane ko bhi un unchaion tk phcha dega jis tarah jaigarh ko phchaya hae
Br: mahasaab pr ab unka koi pta nhi to hume apne riyasat ke zimedari humare sb se honhaar or kabil bete ko dene chaye
Ds: humein is baray me age or koi bat nhi krni
In the club at night
J and vijay
Vj: j bhai congrats apki bari bhen ka to koi ata pta nhi ab to yuvrani ap hi bnegein
J:vijay bhai ab yuvrani koi bhi banay mjhe koi faraq nhi parta jis ke lie mene ye sb kia us manyata ko bhagaya yha se uska likha hua letter change kr dya sb kii nazroon me gira dya ab uday hi nhi to or koi yuvraj j ke type ka nahi
Vj: ranveer singh bhi nae
J: nahi vijay bhai nahi usme wo charm hae nahi wo class j ki achievements sb se best hone chaye
Vj: to kia ab shadi hi nahi karoge or yuvrani bhi nae bnoge
J:ab or koi choice nahi to to krna parega
Vj:you are such a meine weine
In raigarh
Two kids were covering the wounds of a guy with some herbs wrapped in a cloth.
Rakesh: Vishal this stranger's wounds are so deep I couldn't think he would be able to survive
Vishal: I have the same thaught but the energy coming from this body is forcing my soul to do my best not to give up as this man laying in front of me is not ready to give he isn't ready he need help and you know that what bapu told us "never think once before helping anybody even though u knew your help wouldn't be of any benefit to him but your intention of helping him might be admirable to god and with your clean intentionhe can do any miracle to please u"
R: alright bapu ke chamche but I am saying we arent able to heal his wounds perfectly we must tell bapu to help us and him
V: no we cant do that for this we have to make him travel so long and he is not in this position and if we left him alone like this it wont be better
R: so should I go and call the near by vaid??
V:that's perfect go go quick till then ill try to clean up all his wounds
R: hope he survives
V: he will definitely did u noticed what I did he is not losing to all his beatings he is challenging gods will his heart roaring like a lion isn't ready to give up
There was a party going on the raigarh place mumbai
Mharaj prithvi and his son kaushal singh were raising a toast to their victory
Kaushal: we have done it finally all of them are fininshed
Prithvi: that girl is still alive and we still didn't have the body of that bas***d
Kaushal:dad just chill and have some more drink the girl I didn't killed he ron purpose I just love her
Prithvi: what??
Kaushal: yes dad she is good for a night
Prithvi: u became a true rajwada now
Kaushal: dad I told him previously that I wont giveup never he defeated me, insulted me and furthermore he made scrutinized I cannot bare anybody who defeats me and that guy he defeated me in every field but look now he is no more to defeat and his baby sister who I was about to marry she loved but he just spoiled my game but now there's nobody to stop me
Prithvi: so what have u decided shoul I send the proposal for the marriage of the yuvraj of raigarh with the yuvrani of devgarh as jaigarhs sun has setten till life now the lion of jaigarh is beaten
Ahhh ahhh
Breath finally came out from his mouth with one more victory for the yuvraj he has always defeated everybody and has almost ready to win another battle of his life
Seeeing his body respond in a positive vishal doubled up his processes to keep him alive in the meantime rakesh arrived with the vaid and they took him to the near by ashram to prevent his body from getting cold and loose up his will as it started to rain heavily
Kaushal: dad look at this rain this is the signal that jaigarhs pride has given up and a new joy and beginning of the reign to our supremacy over mahasabah
Komal: mahsaab ye tufaan andesha hae ke kuch bura hone wala hae
Ds: ap faltu ki chinta kar rhi hae komal kuch bura nhi hoga
Unatti seeing the rain cries evenmore as she remmebered days when she got ill and her dada use to wake up all night for her to look after her
Unatti: where are u dada plz come back I cant live without u
Monya seeing the rain remembers her days with her family
M:mom dan I miss u a lot its been 3 years I have only seen u in news paper plz make j the yuvrani so I can be with u alll I don't want to snatch my sisters dream of becoming the ruler standing next to her love
The night of dark is finally going to end and the sun is goona rise and shine bright it will be a starting of a new relationship bw raigarh and devgarh
Defeat and deaths might have changed uday for meanwhile but the yuvraj inside who is never gives will be dead or ready to bounce back
Monya is found by her family and is being brought to devgarh will they be able to get her back to devgarh or in the way somebody would come to her rescue