thank you so much for liking it.Originally posted by: ...navina...
Very interesting start Andy. I love the concept.
Really eager to read more.
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thank you so much for liking it.Originally posted by: ...navina...
Very interesting start Andy. I love the concept.
Really eager to read more.
thank you dearWow!nice concept update soon plz pm me
thank you dear
thanks dear😊love it continueee soon
thank you dear😊Originally posted by: princessSonia
a different an intersting plot 👏👏
do Pm me andy !!!!!!!!!!!Mr. Shark😡😡
thanks dearvery intersting start! it was amazing someone is badly behind manyata wants to kill the poor soul! i hope uday saves her but i am having many doubts i think this friend of manyat might be mr.shark or BRIJRAJ and not to mention i don't want this but may be uday is mr.shark! oeeii its to much suspensy and i am a way to curious and and i love this kind of mystries please do continue it i really wnna read more looking forward to the coming chapters! update soon and do pm me i want it!
thanks dear😊Originally posted by: Manveerfan123
Amazing CS! ⭐️Loved the unknowsn nme of Mr. Shark, it makes me curious! 😉Loved the CS and the storyline, its really different and interesting!😛 Continue soon!😊
Chapter 1
It was a fine morning. As the rays of sun fell on a sleeping girl -manyata, she drew the blanket over her head and continued sleeping. Her face was like an angel,so white and a very desirable pink lips . her mobile didn't allow her to sleep as it beeped. Groaning she woke up and checked the message. The name of the sender brought a smile on her lips- uday .she remembered her date yesterday .it was the best night of her life
Manyata kumara, yuvarani of devgarh would be considered by all a girl born with a diamond spoon, she was the only daughter of maharaj giriraj of devgarh and komal,daughter of a rich business tycoon . when manyata was about 6 months giriraj was killed in a car accident . komal being young and lonely then married her childhood best friend and giriraj business partner brijrag .they have a daughter jainandini, who was 1 year younger than manyata. Only manyata being a royal in the family was to become the heir of the devgarh royal family as the others were not of royal blood. But she was very happy her stepdad was more loving than her own dad. Jai was like her own sister , no her own sister,who she could share any thing . Theirs was a loving family , a dream family headed by the present maharani mrinalini devi,
As she read her message she blushed😳. It read
Dear princess,
I loved the last night when we spend together . I never thought that I would enjoy the company of a girl. I never knew we had so many like interests I don't know but I never felt like this ,I just couldn't sleep yesterday I just could remember your eyes ,your nose, your angelic voice I want to see you today please meet me at 12'0 clock at your office please accept and do reply
Love,
Uday
Manyata got up and went for a shower. as she stood under the shower she recalled yesterdays evening. Uday had come to pick her from her office. There was an akward silence as they drove away. Manyata kept stealing glances of uday. Who wouldn't do so?after all he was the hottest guy she ever met.
.they had met at a business conference 2 weeks back. Rohan her best friend introduced them. Udayveer was a self made man .he single handedly made his empire.today it had many industries, refineries and shopping complexes . it was not his wealth but his humble nature that attracted her to him. At first the conversation was purely business, then both felt something going between then ,something that bound them together . he had called her today asking her to spend sometime together. She happily agreed.
The car stopped in front of a restaurant
Uday: this is my favorite restaurant . actually the food and the location is so good I keep coming over here.i am not sure whether you will like it or not
Manyata: my!! Even it is my favorite location. It's a strange coincidence no?
Uday: ya so come inside am starving
They enjoyed their dinner . even their favorite food was same. They had similar likes and dislikes .
The whole evening udays eyes never left her face drinking her features, hearing her angelic sound , totally engrossed in her. She did feel embarrassed but still enjoyed his company
As he left her home he just patted her cheeks and told her goodnight
Usually she always saw lust in all eyes of men who looked her. Her she saw genuine love and a promise of lifelong happiness. She saw sweet manveer dreams and drifted to sleep
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Manyata joined her family for break fast . ds , her dad ,mom her best friend rohan and her sweet sister jai waited for her to join them
M: good morning every one.
They chatted happily about jai's new bf and their new business venture rohan was discussing about a property deal
Then manyata checked her watch and
M: oh my! Its getting late . I need to go there is a meeting with Sharma group of companies at 9 o' clock. Bye guys
Brigraj\komal\ ds: bye beta, hope that you get the deal
Jai: di iam also coming with you
M: ok come fast
J: di chill you're the MD and not any ordinary employee
Rohan: that is a point jai
M: but jai punctuality is needed at work no matter whether you're the employer or the employee
J: oh di ok lets go . we'll continue todays class in the evening
Every one laughs hearing that comment
But some one was thinking "manyata laugh now you may not get much chances to laugh later.
Then all this would be mine, all wealth and all power will be mine. Your days are numbered.you are too innocent to find the wolf hiding under the sheep 's skin."
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The place was dark and stinking . never in that persons life did he visit a place like this. But it was his need and he needed to get the deal done
The person in front of him was masked . the masked man spoke" it can be done"
The eerie voice sent a shiver in the spine of the person
Here he was talking face to face to a cold blooded assassin whose record was perfect . he never missed a single killing and till now nobody could frame him or even reveal his identity .it was so clean. The person drew courage and spoke
"here is the advance 50 lakhs in cash, the remaining when the deal is done, the day she is pronounced dead. this is the photo. Make it look like an accident. How long will it take for the deal to happen?
"3 months"
"how will I contact you in these months.i have nt seen your face , your always masked "
"it doesn't matter if you didn't see me and don't worry ill contact you "
"atleast tell me your name . it's a huge sum iam giving you"
"what is in a name or a face as long as you get results ok you can call me the shark"
"ok ,it's a deal mr shark"
"one more thing I hate non believers. If you don't want to hire me you can pls leave
"no mr shark I do believe you "
As the person left mr sharkpinned the photo on the wall. The face was a known one. He had seen her name in the business section of the newspaper. She was cute but now she was his prey and he was her predator
To create an accident was a simple task . but he wanted to enjoy this killing. The sweet smile on the girl face was going to be wiped soon. He laughed like a maniac thinking this.
Operation manyata had began
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Then all this would be mine, all wealth and all power will be mine. Your days are numbered.you are too innocent to find the wolf hiding under the sheep 's skin."