'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new - Page 4

Originally posted by: ...navina...

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<font color="#0000ff" size="3">Yippee ... me first . Anyway , I think it's befitting that I'm the first 1 to comment ; since the chapter was JUST FOR ME😳.</font>

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<font color="#0000ff" size="3">Fantastic update Andy👍🏼. Truly amazing , utterly interesting & brilliantly written👏 ... BTW ; I'm not just saying that - I MEAN EVERY WORD OF IT!!!</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3">I love that u made Manyata's step-father & step-sister so loving towards her 😃. But then - u made her character so endearing that all adore her. Uday's text message was too romantic❤️ ... & I'm so glad that Manveer are already together. Manyata is a successful business woman and future occupier of the throne - there are bound to be enemies😡 ... but the thing that shocked me 😲was ; that the conspirator is part of her own family🤢. I'm saying this because of these lines : </font>

<font face="Calibri"><font color="#3300cc">Then all this would be mine, all wealth and all power will be mine. Your days are numbered.you are too innocent to find the wolf hiding under the sheep 's skin."</font></font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3">So the question is🤔 : "WHO IS THIS 2 FACED FAMILY MEMBER THAT IS BANING FOR MANYATA'S BLOOD😡???</font>

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<font color="#0000ff" size="3">Mr Shark is scary . More than evil - I think , he's creepy😕. I picture him as someone in their 30's , has a patch over 1 eye , has a long scar across his face and walks with a limp😆. ( & maybe impotent😉)!!!</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3">Andy , I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter;</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3">please don't take too long in updating the next part!</font>

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<font color="#0000ff" size="3">I love stories like this,</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3">... with mystery & suspense😈.</font>

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<font color="#0000ff" size="3">Thanx for the thoughtful gesture of dedicating this update to me ;</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3"> ... I really enjoyed this wonderful gift.</font>

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<font color="#0000ff" size="3">Thank you for the PM😊.</font>

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<font color="#0000ff" size="3">Love u Dear,</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3">MUAAH!!!! 🤗.</font>

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Originally posted by: Udaylovie

awesome update do continue soon ...

Originally posted by: livvy

Nice pm me the nxt pt

Originally posted by: khalilshahista

Awesome andy.

Love the mystery and intrigue.

Nicely written, continue soon.

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Andy this is a fresh concept..loved it...and the 1st chapter was also awesome..I loved ur wriitng skills...This would be a good thriller..👏..continue soon

CHAPTER 2

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Manyata was heading towards her car followed by jai and rohan . her PA soumya opened the door for her

M:soumya ,isn't everything ready for todays meeting with mr sharma I just wanted to get through with the deal . it will give our company 250 crore profits

R: (in a hurt tone) manu, iam your friend ,as you say your best friend then why do you want to do business with that b**terd .even my company can do this deal. He'll eat you live

M: rohan you're my best friend ,I agree but business is business only profit counts there . I just want to make a deal that will benefit my riyasat and my family, no hard feelings ok

R:ok(not in a happy tone)

Pa: mam , sorry to intrupt the conversation but mr Sharma is missing since last night , his secretary informed it in the morning

M: what happened?

R: maybe he went for a weekend with his present mistress that 20 year old girl who is now his pa

M: enough of this talk rohan . lets not interfere in others business

M: (to soumya)ok lets postpone the meeting

J: are we going to talk only business over here . man,what a bore di lets talk anything else. Or ill be fast asleep when I reach collage. Then I may not get to sleep during the lectures

M: (playfully holding jai's ears and acting to be angry) jai are you going to collage to sleep or to study

J: chill di chill iam not a bookworm and a front bencher like you . the lecturer is literally boring us to dath with his melodramatic voice and reading. The best thing left to do is to sleep

M: let me see your marks then I will decide wheter to cut your pocket money or not

J: sorry to disappoint you but iam still first in class , so you can't cut my pocket money

M: I know dear after all you're my sister😛

(the sisters share a hug )

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Mr shark checked his reflection in the mirror. It was perfect. Nobody will recognize him as his disguise was pefect.

It had taken him about half an hour to get ready. First he put on a foundation and on top of it his disguise of an old man of about 50 years .he then fitted a beard and a moustache (both grey in colour)even the most vigilant security personnel would not be able to tell that his face was not natural

He was the master of disguises nobody ever knew his real identity

"Manyata will itself tell me about her plans and routines . her whole cabin and phones are going to be tapped" he thought

Mr shark soon put on the uniform of a bsnl worker(a telephone company) and adjusted his badge. It read

"sunil kumar

Senior operator

bsnl"

it had taken him 20 minutes to create the badge. He had carefully taken his photo updated it into his laptop ,fed all necessary information including its logo, printed on the a4 size paper ,cut it carefully and laminated it . and the badge was ready. He checked his bag .every thing was in it . the two tapping devices – one each for the two phones in the office, a bugging device to record the conversations in the office .a transmitter would transmit it to his destination. he had used batteries with 3 month validity which would disintergrate after 3 months by itself and therefore wont be an evidence to this killing which was his own creation.

Satisfied with his wor khe whisted happily as he walked away from home ,heading towards manyatas office

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the security stopped the old man at the entrance

" who are you?why are you here .show me your identification"

(he showed the id card that he had made 20 minutes back , but it looked so natural the sides had been bent and the edge was soiled)

"the telephone company received a complaint that the phone in the md's room is not working and must be repaired before he comes. So here I am "

"Ok let me check your bag"

(the security checked it but didn't find anything extra ordinary

"your company seem so vigilant with security"

"yes not even a fly will enter this place without clearing the security. We will even give up our life to save our boss"

"oh, so is he so good to you all"

"not he, but she she is a gem . she looks her employees happiness before her own"

"ok let me finish my work"

He soon enters the md's cabin and fits all the bugs .no one would ever find them . they were so perfectly hid

As he left the office he sees manyata entering the office ,he thinks

she looks more breath taking than in the photo he had seen. Its gona be alovely time when we meet in person you will be mine before you leave this world oh it would be so exiting

soon manyata passes him. She doesn't notice him

he leaves the office and headed to the old steel factory where he had a big 'fish ' to fry. It name was mr Sharma- the owner of sharma group of companies

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Manyata was thinking about uday his talks, his expressions his eyes his desirable cheeks , his mannerisms and the way how he had touched her cheeks yesterday .she felt that place again and blushed. She was thinking

Why did he want to met me today

Maybe to tell about how he enjoyed the evening

Or maybe to tell me that I am like a good friend

Or maybe he may tell that he loves me

Or even he may propose me

We may go to Hawaii for our honey moon

There we will…………….😳

Stop it manyata, a guy took you for a date last evening that doesn't mean that he loves you or will marry you. maybe he may have a girlfriend or maybe even engaged . no it cant be so – the way he looked at me last night is the proof that he loves me

Does that mean that all guys that look at you that way loves you

Maybe he is behind my money

No he more rich than me

Maybe he will be a good friend or may be……….😳

Her thoughts wre disturbed by rahul who hadcome to give her a file

R: hallo manu iam standing here for the past five minutes and you didn't notice me eh, what!!!the great manyata kumari is daydreaming . let me call the guiness world of records manyata who doesn't waste a single second spend 5 min daydreaming

M: cut it off rohan why are you here😡?

R:cool manu cool😆. I was just joking this is that naidu's file you asked for

M: thanks buddy😊

There was a knock at the door .

M: come in

Uday entered with a smile . he wore a smart black suit . he looked soo irresistible .mayata's heart skipped a beat.

M:Rohan if you would excuse us please

R(in a hurt tone) ok manu😭

M: so?

U: so what ?

M: why did you want to meet me

Maanyata's pov

Oh god I didn't even haave time to check my make up. Oh I didn't even notice that it was 12 . oh that rohan….hope that I look presentable. Maybe he would ask me for a date

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U: hallo ,in which dream land are you😊?

M: sorry I was thinking about something.

U: ok I just came to meet you to talk about a business deal. It's a place 15 km from Mumbai. Today it is worthless , but tomorrow you would get enormous profit from it as geologists found a rich mine of iron over there . they haven't announced it yet. Maybe in a week or so they would announce and so if we buy it soon we would get enormous profit. Would you like to see the place?

Manyatas clould of happiness burst, all her dreams felt scattered😭. she soon retured to her business mode and said

M: ok lets go

So this is the end of chap 2😊

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