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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: annesha18

with the coming chappies i woul like the readers to decide if he is good or not nd yea i m kinna history pysc and actuaal my bro had been to paris so i knw jst a bit thgt of appplying ti here sorry if u found boring😃😃

Nope it was awesome and I loved it
It was awesome to know so much

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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira
hey annesha !!!! hw r u dear🤗
the update was awesum dear, really loved it alot.
but i m confuse, is agastya a negative or positive character.
i mean, on one hand he is saying dirty stuff to manyta nd thn on the other hand sort of threatening uday to take care of manyta as she is a nice girl ?????
nd y didnt uday feel jealous or doubted about manyta-agastya , whn agastya was showing so much concern fr her...
nd also y uday told tht he never had a girlfriend to manyta whn she herself saw him with some other girl 6 days earlier before their marriage,,,,
so many questons but answers none...😆
well waiting fr the next update though...
manveer union...☺️ ☺️
cant wait now,,,,, whn r u going to update next chap ???
JUST WANNA SAY ONE THING EVERYTIME WATEVER YOU READ IS NOT WHAT IS WRITTEN AND YEA DEAR I WILL UPDATE NEXT CHAPPY ASAP

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chitra_rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

OMG this update was really eventful, agastia showing up with his all fake goody goody act😡, M nearly killing herself, and finally blurting out the truth , and Uday's outburst . I kow Uday is right, but I somewhere want him to forgive M and see that it was not her fault, she was tricked into this 😕. I'm excited bout the precap, but I have a feeling after Uday is back into his senses, he will still stick to the fact of leaving her😭.Manveer are through this shit because of that asshole agastia 😡, he better be handled well 🤢

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pia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

augustia is such a creep!!!!!! manveer were soo happyy!!!!!!!!😊😊 bechari manyata!!!!! bt why is uday also lying,he was also wit othr grlss😳😳 waitng for nxt update!!!!!😊😊😊

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_Grey_

@_Grey_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

WOW!!! Aneesha it ws superb 👏
This Augustia is sch a bas***d 😡
Precap is intresting😳
Update ASAP😊
Thanx fr d pm🤗

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@.maleficent.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

anesha i read your whole ff in one go and i loved it aits intresting and i hate agustia kuch nahi kiya hoga usne manyta ke sath aviya gape hakh raha hai m ko blackmail kar raho haoga assa hi
kamina kahi ka
aur uday bhi mere koi bhi gf nahi hai jhoota
and updtae was beautifull plz pm me nest time u update update soon as i cant wait to read ahead

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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

CHAPTER 8
it was mid night now and manyata grew tired of waiting so she decided to search for him ,she got down of the bed but her legs started to shake and her head felt dizzy this all was because she was still so weak and for nearly 3 hours she was crying but with the support of the wall she made it till the stair case but her luck did not favor her anyone she slipped and rolled down the stair case ,blood started to ooze out and she was semi concious .
IN THE BAR
uday was still drinking to put his heart at ease but the alcohol was of no help to his situation , he was angry at manyata ,angry at that augustia and mostly angry at himself even he had been a casanova and slept with
many girls but all were nothing but a buisness deal to stabalise his stock he made this deal with his most clients ,he do agree that sometime it was out of a hangover but never he intended to keep a relationship with those girl more than lust or buisness ,he did play all dirty office politics but he was committed to manyata but he scattered his heart ,how could he sleep with his brother .he was still looking at his drink just when he saw reflection of charlie on the bar counter ,he looked up charlie was the girl who was like a good friend to him ,out of one of his hangover he did sleep with her ,but after that things were back to normal ,and the last time he meet her was before six days of his marriage after getting the news of his marriage charlie was really disheartened and that was the last night they had spend together .after uday had sweared not to betray manyata and stop this even if it was needed for a buiseness deal ,for a second she found it so difficult to realize it was uday and when she finally did her behavior was so cold she just passed a fave smile to him
CHARLIE:hey uday
UDAY:hey charlie you are here such a suprise
CHARLIE:yea i am getting married tomorrow
UDAY;that is a great news congrats
CHARLIE;thanks buddy so hows life
UDAY;just fine but charlie is there something wrong you do not seem to be happy
CHARLIE;even if i try my hardest i can never try to hide anything from you well markus isn't happy about our marriage
UDAY; whose markus?
CHARLIE;my boyfriend i have been dating him from a week now and tomorrow i am getting married to him you do no me i am not shult and i do not randomly sleep and it was only you and i mean still now it is only you and markus i mean i really love him i did not intend to keep him in dark so i confessed about US to him today in the rehersal dinner but his behavior was totally shocking he did not even try to understand me i did not intend to do that for first time it was just a mistake
tears rolled down her checks as uday seeing her condition remembered manyata and a feeling of guilt arouse in him
CHARLIE;i mean i was truth full to him than how could he i mean that is so mean
UDAY:if according to him he cannot trust you ,that means he never loved you because he should be grateful that atleast you was truthfull to him and did not hide anything its not you who do not deserve him its he who do not deserve you
CHARLIE;thank uday you are such a good friend of mine
uday took his jacket and got up to leave
CHARLIE: where are you going?
UDAY;to my wife she is waiting for me
CHARLIE:happy maried life and yea do bring that angle tomorrow to my marriage
UDAY; sure bye
uday almost raced out it had started to snow now a feeling of joy creeped in his heart he was proud of manyata that she had been atleast truthfull to him but he had been unfaithful to her and did not tell about his relationship but now he would confess it to her and seek her forgiveness .he raced back to the home but found her lying infront of the stairs his eyes were all teary ,he went and took her arm instantly and proceeded towards the bedroom and screamed
UDAY:what the hell manyata why did you move from your bed?
MANYATA: believe me uday that night augustia drugged me
UDAY:we will talk about that later
MANYATA; you do not trust me any longer do you?
UDAY: I DO TRUST YOU OK
she wrapped herself more close to his chest and a smile crept in her face she loved when he grew possesive about her ,he placed her on the bed and cleared her wound ,patted her head to make her sleep
MANYATA:uday did you forgive me?
UDAY; princess one should forgive only when the other do mistake but you did none but princess i did there is something i have to confess you
MANYATA:but uday
UDAY:princess please let me complete
he took her hands in his
UDAY;princess before marriage i had been into several physical realation ship some just for buiseness and others for lust i am sorry to be so unfaithfull to you and after hearing this if you want to divorce me you can princess
MANYATA:but i already knew about all these
UDAY:: but how did you know i mean?
then manyata narrated him the whole thing uday was furious at augustia but for now he had to take car of manyata
UDAY:manyata let us forgive our past and start a new life no divorce
MANYATA:ofcourse i will not divorce because there is one uday in the crowd of millions
UDAY;ok princess now sleep tomorrow i need to a marriage
MANYATA:marriage but whose?
UDAY:the girl with whom i slept before six days of our marriage
MANYATA;you mean your friend na
manveer shared a beautiful eyelock followed by a smile then uday patted her to sleep
THE NEXT DAY
Manyata got dressed in a beauitful white grown while uday was in a black tuxedo they drove to the marriage it was taking place in a beautiful park covered with all greenary and the sight was beautiful ,they seated themselves as the ceremony started the flower girl brought charlie and her father walked her down the aisle ,they stood as the pope started to read the rituals finally he moment came as the pope asked whether markus wanted charlie as his wife to which he agreed but when the pope asked to charlie
CHARLIE:no father i will never accept this man as my husband because in love understanding is very important but markus does not undrstand anyone except for himself you was right markus i do not really deserve you
MARKUS:charlie is this some kind of joke
CHARLIE:no its truth the wedding is called off and so markus get out of this place and of my life the faster the better
MARKUS: charlie
CHARLIE:get out
she screamed and he along all the guest except for manveer went stormed off but a smile played on her face she walked towards manveer and sat next to manveer
UDAY:charlie that was awesome
CHARLIE:she is your wife
UDAY:Yes
CHARLIE;when did you both get married?
UDAY:after six days you left
CHARLIE:why did nt you call me i do not want to hear any excuse now come on get married now
manveer looked at each other while charlie winked at manyata ,uday got down to his knees
UDAY: princess would you like to spend your entire life with me
she stood up and caught his hands
MANYATA:the pleasure will be all mine my prince
he went and stood near the pope as the pope started to read the rituals charlie walked manyata down the aisle
MANYATA:thank you so much charlie
CHARLIE:the pleasure is all mine angle
then the rituals were completed as the pope announced that now the husband could kiss his wife uday leaned towards her there hands were tangled with each other as manyata 's heart started to skip beats they had an eyelock as for the first time uday 's lips meet her ,his tongue battled inside hers and she breathed in him ,the kiss was passionate and so full of love finally when they ran out of breath they pulled apart but indeed very slowly and gently ,manveer bide every one bye and went back to there home ,manyata was feelignt erribly shy after the kiss so on reaching home so on reaching home she rushed to the bedroom and locked herself while suddenly uday 's eyes caught her report of last night ,according to the report she was weak and needed a bit of care but what caught his attention was the report clearly mentioned that she was a VIRGIN .The plot was cleared augustia did all these to scare her and black mail her but uday had better idea

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Nimrit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

awesum chapter aneesha.

so manveer misunderstanding is over. loved their marriage scene esp their kiss. hate this augustia.

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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

iTHE UPDATE BELOW HAS AN AGE LIMIT AND PLEASE PEOPLE BELOW the age limit ignore itIGNORE It was evening by now and the sky looked darker due to the heavy snow fall outside manyata had now changed into a knee length white transparent night grown ,they sat on the dinner table as uday started to work according to his idea
UDAY:princess we are married today so technically it means that its our suhaag raat and moreover i even need to find out
MANYATA:what you need to find out
UDAY:that whether you are a virgin or not?
MANYATA:uday don't taunt at me you know na i and augustia
UDAY:yea princess but this hospital reports says something else
he handed her the report she staired at it for sometime and then finally came out of the shock
MANYATA:So uday what shall we do now?
UDAY:i have to find out and i cannot do anything untill i am proved in a right manner
he concluded with a naughty smirk ,he knew that she was pure but he just wanted to play around with her ,but her face had turned pale
MANYATA:does that mean i need to seduce you
UDAY:YES PRINCESS
he empashised in each of his words she got up as he looked at her
UDAY:where are you going
MANYATA:do not come untill i call you
she went to her room and sat on the bed thinking of ways to seduce him but the only way she could think of was of those girls in the po*n movies she bit her lower lips and gave it a second thought but she had to do it ,she had to
uday was sitting in the living room waiting for her and watching the snowfall outside suddenly his phone beeped it was a sms from her
COME TO THE BEDROOM NOW
a smile payed on his face as he raced to the bedroom he opened it and found it was beauitfuly decorated with candles and flowers the room was smelling so good but there was no sight of manyata ,he locked the door and came inside looking for her when suddenly he felt a pair of nail playing and he smirked to himself ,he caught the hand pulled it front with such a force that she was pinned to the wall ,he smirked at her while she continue to plays her nails on his chest
UDAY:tumharie eradei kya hai princess
MANYATA:kuch buraa bohoot bura
she whispered in his ears as he pulled her by her waist they ahrdly had an inch space between them ,her breath fell on his face and that made him want her more ,she locked his mouth into hers and soon there tongues started to battle each other ,while kissing uday 's hands slipped under her nightie unhooking her bra ,it slid off her shoulder and fell on the ground ,running out of breath they finally tore their mouth apart ,within a fraction of second manyata found herself in his arm ,he took her and placed her on the bed then got on top of her ,they got indulge in another kiss and this time manyata opened his shirt ,looking at her eagerness uday undressed him and then undressed her it was the most beautiful sight she was so beauitful ,she was so pure ,her body was anglelic ,uday had now turned into a wild animal and all he wanted was to hunt his prey ,he laid wet kisses on her neck and then on her collar bone ,soon it was turn for his favourite part her breast ,he placed hard love bites which made her moan in pain but he did not stopped her moans were like a sweet song to his ears he continued it untill both her breast turned red he placed wet kiss on her stomach and then planned to enter her but her legs were together and he saw a tear on her eyes
UDAY:what is the matter princess did i hurt you too much?
MANYATA:no uday i was thinking if i ma not a virgin will you still accept me
UDAY:you are a virgin but won't be for long
he placed wet kisses on her legs to which she gave up and seperated her legs ,he entered her with a strong jerk to which she moaned but he was not done yet he kept on bouncing into her this gave her so much of pain
MANYATA: uday bash karo please ahh maa
He jerked inside her for the 7th time and finaly they had done it a lone pair of tear escaped from her eye she had broken her virginity and she was glad it was uday who did that ,she soon fell uncouncious and uday sucked her tears and fell asleep on top of her .

END OF CHAPTER 8