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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Awsomee...update annesha
and 2nd part was too hot
hawww...i knew it thata kamina agtsya is only scare manyata...halkat huhhh...
Update soon thanx for PM.

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

awww... it was a lovely update !!!!!

finally manveer became one.☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

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757315

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Awesome update
Very super awesome
Loved it
Thanks for pm
Evil augustia
Beautiful manveer
Update soon
Thanks for pm

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Hey anesha 🤗, read teh whole 8th chapter in one go 😆, and it was just fabulous 👏👏, and Manveer married again Awww 😳, that was so ooosome, I though that everything would turn more worse, but this was like a blockbuster twist where Manveer married again with all their heart, knowing each others past completely and accepting it 😳😳, I mean shouldn't marriages be like this where u know everything about ur partner and accept them with their faults and imperfections😳😳. So manveer had a dream marriage in Paris😉. And yes thanks to Charlie for knowing some sense into Uday 😆

The second part was even more amazing 😳😳, Manveer became one, and finally completed their marriage,☺️. I so wish to see Manyata slap that bas**** agustia 😡, but then Uday is handking him with his brains 😉, I so wanna know how he reacts when instead of manveer to be on the verge of divorce, he sees them returning from paris all lovey-dovey and so much in love 😳😆

Thanks fro the PM anesha I really appreciate that, I know I'm not getting much time to follow ur other works, but hopefully by this weekend, I will read all the chapters and comment to 😊

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Nimrit

@arna753

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

manveer scenes were hot.

overall the update was nice.

cont.soon

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

thankfully misundrstnding is overr,ab to uday ko pata bhi chal gaya dat she is virgin!!!!!! manveer moemnt wass soo romnticc and passi0onatee andd superawesommeee!!!!!!!!!!

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huma

@huma12.

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: chitra_rao
Hey anesha 🤗, read teh whole 8th chapter in one go 😆, and it was just fabulous 👏👏, and Manveer married again Awww 😳, that was so ooosome, I though that everything would turn more worse, but this was like a blockbuster twist where Manveer married again with all their heart, knowing each others past completely and accepting it 😳😳, I mean shouldn't marriages be like this where u know everything about ur partner and accept them with their faults and imperfections😳😳. So manveer had a dream marriage in Paris😉. And yes thanks to Charlie for knowing some sense into Uday 😆

The second part was even more amazing 😳😳, Manveer became one, and finally completed their marriage,☺️. I so wish to see Manyata slap that bas**** agustia 😡, but then Uday is handking him with his brains 😉, I so wanna know how he reacts when instead of manveer to be on the verge of divorce, he sees them returning from paris all lovey-dovey and so much in love 😳😆

Thanks fro the PM anesha I really appreciate that, I know I'm not getting much time to follow ur other works, but hopefully by this weekend, I will read all the chapters and comment to 😊

chitra agastia ku manveer kay union kay baray main pata chala tu woh mential asylum hi puhnchay ga 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

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Priya

@Priya46

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

agustaya needs to be taught a lesson and that too one of his life

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

CHAPTER 9
a brightray of sunlight had already filled the room ,the clock read the time was quarter to ten but manveer were still on there cozy bed in each in each others the last night for both of them was the most beautiful night although for manyata it was a bit painful but uday enjoyed it to the fullest finally the spoilt prince being disturbed by the bright rays rubbed his eyes and got up ,the first thing his brown eyes viewed was his beautiful princess ,his wife ,his manyata she was still baneath him and he was still in her ,she was looking like a beautiful angle curdle in his arms ,with one of his hands he smoothly caressed her forehead ,then checks and at last the lips ,she was so beautiful and tempting to him he could not wait but place his lips on her but maybe that is not manyata 's plan she removed her face and mummered to him in a irritate voice
MANYATA:uday please i am really tried and please do not start so early in the morning
UDAY:ok sleeping beauty i think you need rest but princess neither in india nor in paris ten o clock is considered early
manyata opened her eyes and widdened it at him
MANYATA:what it is already ten why did 'nt you wake me up
she intended to get up but failed miserably she short glances at uday and he with his usual killer smirk
UDAY:what happened princess
MANYATA:uday veer singh get out of me fast
UDAY:no first you have to agree to my one condition
MANYATA:what condition
UDAY:that you will let me do whenever i want
MANYATA:no ways or else you will treat me like a toy and it won't be long mr singh you will find me with 10 to 20 kids
UDAY:hmm not bad idea but come on i love you i will never let you go through so much of pain 10 are enough for me
MANYATA:if you think like that then shall i get back to my divorce plan
UDAY:OK sorry 5 chalega
MANYATA:no just two kids
UDAY:yea twins
MANYATA:boy twins
UDAY:no girl twins
MANYATA:fine we will discuss later about it now get out of me
UDAY:what about my decision
MANYATA:i ahve given my veridct
UDAY:uff princess you are too stubborn but it is ok you will agree to all my conditions
uday got out of her and she gave another cry of pain then she finally got out of the bed and went inside the bathroom and after having a bath when she went outside she found him still sleeping ,she shook him but he did not respond ,she even called his name but he did not respond ,she continued to wake him up but he did not respond now her eyes where all teary and she cried
MANYATA:uday please get up please do not leave me please uday i will do as you say i will always listen to you i will even agree to that silly condition of yours please na get up
suddenly uday jerked up and caught her waist pulling her close to him he saw her weeping his plan had finally worked
UDAY;so princess you agree to my condition
without another word she broke into a hug and weeped even more badly uday was shocked he did not know that this would effect her so badly he hugged her and patted her head
UDAY:princess please do not cry see i am here fine please do not cry
MANYATA:promise me uday you will never leave me
UDAY;I promise
for a long time manveer hugged eachother suddenly manyata pulled herself apart and started to hit him hard on his arm
UDAY:ouuchh
MANYATA:yyou think it is very funny na playing around with me like this you do not know how much it hurts me
there was pain in her eyes as she marched off to the balcony while uday hugged her from back and placed a soft tender kiss on her neck ,she strugged his face off and her phone started to buzz
MANYATA:yea hello jai kya baath hai
JAI:jiji humari sadhi hai esh week
MANYATA:kya kaaab i mean i am sooo happy
JAI;ds nei apkoh aur jijusa koh abhi india wapash bulaya hai
MANYATA:theek hai mei i mean hum dono arahei hai ok bye
she turned towards uday and said about the marriage but very coldly eh knew his princess was angry with him the journey back to devgarh was quite as no matter how many try uday tried to make but manyata was still angry with him her mood was spoilt but as she reahce dshe saw her and all her anger vanished it was non other than one of her best friend natasha
PRECAP:
manveer ready to teach augustia a lesson