FF DEK- journey of a princess.chap 4 updated page7

HI Girls.
I used to watch DEK and liked it very much because of its fresh and unique story . during those days i used to visit this from, mostly as a silent member. But i have posted a few topics as well

After DEK ended also i do visit this forum on and off as a silent member. I like the dedication and the craziness you girls had and still have for DEK. and the number of FF s and SS s and OS s in this forum is amazing... and some are really good and i enjoy reading them.. to name a few, Udayveer chronicles, Married for Riyasat, Lost heritage, PKTNIK, and the latest one i read checkmate, which i read in one night as it was so engrossing.
I have always had a passion for writing novels but never dared to attempt. And after reading the stories here, i wanted to try my hand at writing a story based on DEK and present it to you girls to see if i have it in me to become a writer of a novel someday which is a dream.
so hope you girls (im assuming there s only girls here on this forum) will like it and give constructive criticisms as well.

This is a small peak at the story..

The car sped through the high ways at its maximum speed limit. Manyata sat on the back seat of the car gazing through the window. On the other side of her, her mother Komal sat, holding her hand tightly. On komal's left side sat her grandmother. Manyata sat staring blankly outside the window, not really aware of anything that was happening around her. She did not feel the tight grip of her mother's fingers whenever the car turns on a bend or when its tires screeches on the road because of the sudden brakes the driver had to apply in order to avoid the occasional reckless drivers who were trying to overtake and zoom past their vehicle. Neither does she hear the intermittent murmur of something her DS was telling her mother and her mother's polite reply to that.

Only one thing was going through her mind. Round and round one word went on reverberating through her mind. Why? Why Uday? Why? But she had no answer to that. And she had no answer as to why she was even asking that question. Does it matter why he did it? The truth is that he had killed Akash isn't it?

The characters of this FF are exactly the same ones as in DEK and the story starts from the time of Manyata 's coronation and when she sent Uday to jail. because this i feel was a very big turning point in the story of DEK and from then onwards, the story should have gone in a different direction than what was shown on the show. so i will start the story from there and continue it on a plot of my own, but somewhat based on the events that happened in the serial.
PLS let me know if you all are interested in reading this and whether i should continue it this way or write a fresh story about Manveer.


CHapter1- page 3
Chapter 2- page 4
chapter 3 - page6
chapter 4 - page 7

GREAT!!


it was a great prolouge...!!👏
awesome dear!!
pm me if possible update soon...😳

AWsomeee...update soon and do PM me if possible.

Awesome prologue, looking forward for ur next updates
Plz pm me if possible and plz update soon

plzzz do add me to your pm list...am a big manveer fan..and would love to read your ff..

dude seriuosly plzz continue ... i loved ur story ur plot ... believe me plz plzz plzz continue .. :);):)

Loving it all ready! Do pm me when u update

Thank you all. lovely of you all to give such a positive response..

will post the first chapter soon. will try to pm everyone who requested it but as i m very busy most of the time, may not be able to do it at times.. still hope you will look forward to the forthcoming chapters and read it.
Thanks again.😃