**The Unknown Truth**ManVeer SS chapter 9 pg 91 - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arna753

lovely update. update is nicely written.

continue soon. thanks for the pm.


thanks alot dear😳 will try to update soon!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pia.raha

oh my godd,wooww wooww!!!!!!!!!!! it was suprbb!!!!!! r8 frm the part where uday is daydreaming abt her and taling to karan!!!!!!!!!!!! then manyata ke swear wrdss!!!!!!!!!!! uday aur piya kaa wo special moment was jstt awesomee!!!!!!!!!!! plz plzz cntinue soon!!!!!!!!!!!😊



thanku soo much pia...😳
i too love it
will update soon!😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

omg it was to good...
loved it awesumm...
thnks for pm...
and do pm me wen u update nxt...👏



thanks alot mahi...
will try my best to update soon...!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Read both chapters now zainab and trust me i loved them alot.

your story is indeed very different and great. I love how uday ix falling for his pa
But i think manyata ix back ix pia coz she wants to take some kind of revenge from udau or something.
But the best part was when manyata was doing pittai of that poor guy who touched her.
GreT work love keep it up!


thankyou very much sarah for liking it!😳
yes i had to think alot for the road scene!😉
once again thanks alot...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Vasishtha

😆 You forgot to comment on it Sisi.😆

Edited.😊
Fantastic, superb, amazing, wonderful updates. First time I read this SS.😳 Wow a different kind of Manveer story.😉
First part was kinda saddy types Manyata is dead, cos of UV.😭 Please reveal the secret of Manyata's death in upcoming updates cos it's really important to show Uday feels guilty for Manyata's death. I know it's a suicide.😳
Second update was hillarious specially first part n traffic jam scene.🤣 Wow all Moniya type gaalis.😆
OMG When Uday was talking with his friend Karan on the phone.🤣 That scene was also great.😆 Last scene of Piya n Uday was so beautiful n sweet too.😳
Thanks for the beautiful n different kind of Manveer story.😊
Do update ASAP.😉 Waiting for the next chappy.😊
Great work.👍🏼
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thanks alot sonam for such a beautifull comment it means a lot to me more than i can say!
love ya sisi!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Futbol_queen

Amazing! Loved Udays thoughts when she first came in :P


thanks alot!!😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks dear!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum update zenu baby👏 👏 👏 loved it 😳 uday ko dekh kay

lagta ha us ki niyaat abhi say bigar gaye ha 🤣hailaaa kaisay

khyaal sochta ha woh😆piya nay ki pitai ki ha admi ki sirf usay

touch krnay pr uday kia haal karay ge🤣piya or uday ka romance

shru ho gaya hayyee kia mast or best scene tha ☺️ uday nay

piya ki kia solid insult ki ha 👍🏼maza a gaya 👍🏼lakin piya ki bi twini

a gaye SS may jis ki waja say sab hoa😆 hailaaa kiss bi ho

gaya☺️ 🤣 superb update zenu baby👍🏼great work⭐️ cont

soon thnxxx for the PM 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: killerashish

awesum update zenu baby👏 👏 👏 loved it 😳 uday ko dekh kay


lagta ha us ki niyaat abhi say bigar gaye ha 🤣hailaaa kaisay

khyaal sochta ha woh😆piya nay ki pitai ki ha admi ki sirf usay

touch krnay pr uday kia haal karay ge🤣piya or uday ka romance

shru ho gaya hayyee kia mast or best scene tha ☺️ uday nay

piya ki kia solid insult ki ha 👍🏼maza a gaya 👍🏼lakin piya ki bi twini

a gaye SS may jis ki waja say sab hoa😆 hailaaa kiss bi ho

gaya☺️ 🤣 superb update zenu baby👍🏼great work⭐️ cont

soon thnxxx for the PM 🤗 🤗 🤗


thanks roze baby!🤗
tumhe bara maza a raha hai piya ki insult ka ku khairiyat hai na kahi jealous to nai ho rahi na?🤣
romance to must hai nahi to maza kaisa!😉 samjhi😆 pta hai ye kiss wala scene likhne k liye mje kitne papar belnay paray😭...uff mje khud itni sharam a rahi thi☺️ pta nahi baki sub itni intimate update likh kaise letay hai unke jazbay ko mera solute 👏its soo difficult !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum update

Beautifully written...😊

Udayveer

thank u for D PM

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