**The Unknown Truth**ManVeer SS chapter 9 pg 91

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pia

@pia.raha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

oh my godd,wooww wooww!!!!!!!!!!! it was suprbb!!!!!! r8 frm the part where uday is daydreaming abt her and taling to karan!!!!!!!!!!!! then manyata ke swear wrdss!!!!!!!!!!! uday aur piya kaa wo special moment was jstt awesomee!!!!!!!!!!! plz plzz cntinue soon!!!!!!!!!!!😊

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

omg it was to good...
loved it awesumm...
thnks for pm...
and do pm me wen u update nxt...👏

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Read both chapters now zainab and trust me i loved them alot.
your story is indeed very different and great. I love how uday ix falling for his pa
But i think manyata ix back ix pia coz she wants to take some kind of revenge from udau or something.
But the best part was when manyata was doing pittai of that poor guy who touched her.
GreT work love keep it up!

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Sonam

@-RK_Ki_Biwi-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: mrs_kapoor
me 1st
will comment soon 😳

😆 You forgot to comment on it Sisi.😆

Edited.😊

Fantastic, superb, amazing, wonderful updates. First time I read this SS.😳 Wow a different kind of Manveer story.😉

First part was kinda saddy types Manyata is dead, cos of UV.😭 Please reveal the secret of Manyata's death in upcoming updates cos it's really important to show Uday feels guilty for Manyata's death. I know it's a suicide.😳

Second update was hillarious specially first part n traffic jam scene.🤣 Wow all Moniya type gaalis.😆

OMG When Uday was talking with his friend Karan on the phone.🤣 That scene was also great.😆 Last scene of Piya n Uday was so beautiful n sweet too.😳

Thanks for the beautiful n different kind of Manveer story.😊

Do update ASAP.😉 Waiting for the next chappy.😊

Great work.👍🏼

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Edited by Vasishtha - 13 years ago

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Futbol_queen

@Futbol_queen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

Amazing! Loved Udays thoughts when she first came in :P

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: a.anu
oh ! i love this .i read chappy 1 n 2 2day.its beautiful.thanx 4 pm

thanks aloy dear!😳😳

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: san.gar
Lovely Update
Whole update is guddd
I hope u update sun...😊

thanks alot sanya will update soom😃

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: swetsurati
OMG OMg OMG...zenu dear that was awsomeee...love it hyae..love this scene...

Caller=hello uday kahan ho yar don't u remember we have a meeting at 2 and its already 1:30 we r getting late!

Uday=looking at piya tumhari smile kitni jaan lewa hai'

Caller=what?😲

Uday=haye ye ankhien dar lagta hai kahi ma in ma doob na jao'

Caller=uday tum pagal ho gye ho'udaaayy yar ye kia behki behki batien kr rahe ho yar!!😲

Uday=came out of his thoughts and mentally slapped himself for saying all that'he looked at the screen of his cell and gave a sigh of relief it was karan his best friend and business partner'ohh karan I will reach to u just in 10 mins'
hayeee...last scene me marjavan...uday baby tumhe kuch nahi hua sirf love naam ki bimari lag gayi hai...plzzz...jaldi se mystry clear karo agar piya manyata hai toh kaise?????????akhir kaise chalo maan liya gar manyata accident hua hota toh ekta kaporor style me woh piya se manyata ban sakti thi...par manyata ne toh apni wrist cut karke suicide kiya tha toh woh manyata kaise hai????????ohhh...god mera dimag kharab ho raha hai...sorry for the late reply...updae soon and thanx for PM.

thanks alot baby!! 😳i too like that scene i really had to think alot for it😃...hahaha surati baby itna stress mat lo ekta kapoor say bhi bara hath marnay wali hu ma...😆

i will update soon after eid...!!😊