sarah you again give us double delighted treat...😳thank you sooo much ...yar i dont have words now to tell how enriching both chapters were...👏 👏 👏...while reading i was thinking that i am eating ur birthday cake...hahahahahhahaha😆 well happy birthday again...😃
well about chapter 17 : i feel bad about manyata .. uday ignored her...😭 she was really angry... but the conversation b/w manyata and giriraj was really touchy... in this fan fic giri is really very sweet...😆...love the way he say ( uday cant be a brother to u...)🤣 lol...i liked the way manyata teased uday by not answering his questions on breakfast table... and when he grabs her unnati misunderstood...👏...hahahaha..nicely written...
about chapter 18 : manyata did really great job by trying to take her revenge... she hides the file and went 4 shopping...GOD she is really stuburn... loved the way uday enters in the restaurent with guards while manyata was saying that she hates these type of peoples...and how can i forgot their cat n mouse chasing fi8 and the garden scene just awww...i was thinking that this will happen... and in the end uday win the bet... cant wait further to see what will uday do 4 taking her 24 hours...and the scene when uday reach home at 4 boooshhh he couldnt control n kiss her but that ayaan always be kabab may hadi... and and and their breakfast they feed each other ... she makes an omlete by herself trying to irritate him but uday is uday he ate it leaving back shok manyata...but the last thing that crushes my heart into pieces when she bought honey 4him...lo0o0o0ovVveEelLlyyY...they both care 4 each other but didnt realise it yet...just fantastic and nicely written... totally thrilling..👏
sarah u really done an amazing n awsum job... keep it up ...thanks 4 the p.m... and love u...😊 and plz plz plz continue sooon..
Edited by mimi.maik - 12 years ago