OS:I Killed Us(dont worry,its a manveer os) - Page 3

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

AWESOME THE WHOLE THING WAS LOVELY

YOUR OS ALWAYS ARE SUPRISES HAVE HAVE SAD ENDINGS

BUT BUT THEY ARE AWESOME TO READ

I LOVED THE WHOLE THING

I WISH MANVEER WERETOGETHER BUT AGAIN IT WAS WRITTEN BY THE SWINIPRIYA😆

PLEASE WRITE MORE SWINI

REALLY I LOVED YOUR WRITING

Originally posted by: Choco.Swiss

Kamini har time mujhe dhamki keun deti hai?Abhi jada kiya toh next update mei manveer ko mei bhai behen banakar rahungi..🤣Sad ending kaha huya...ha..Dimaag naam ki koi heez nahi hai tujh mei...

Originally posted by: Jarin04

Mujhe tujhper koi varosa nahi hai pata nahi tune keya kia hai. Kahi uday ko serial killer toh nahi bana diya

Originally posted by: swetsurati

hawww...kamini bhai behan...mar dalungi..aur sad end toh hua mera bichara uday akel
Chal chal shadi nahi karwayi mayne.Wo sirf uska dost hai.Tu last line theek seh par waha Uv neh kaha ki wo phir bhi confess karega.Toh abhi tu soch wo confess kar raha hai n Manyta rotey rotey ha kehdiya..Abh mei itni saare cheeze likhungi apne os mei toh mera hath dard karega na..Toh baki ki story tum logo ko guess karney keh liye chor diya.Well yeh toh last part thi but itne jootey chappals dekh key lagta hai iska book2 banana parega.🤣

Originally posted by: Manveerfan123

It was amazing and completely new concept!!!!! 👏 Continue soon!!! 😃

Originally posted by: princess_T

Ohh teri.. It was amazing...

Originally posted by: adorable_rana

awesome ans really Nice Swini deary...👍🏼

and thanx for telling in advance😆 but manveer os bana kar unko juda kar diya...nahi yeh hum nahi dekh saktay...😲

ab mujhet nahi pata...dooossra os likho our patch up karwao😳

and pm do kar deti...paya hi nahi chala meri swini ka naya creative piece aya hai...😛

muaahhh🤗

Originally posted by: Choco.Swiss

kamini dekh agey cont. kar maar dalungi tujhe mera bichra uday akela hai...ek kam kar ush ki nahi GF mujhe baan de..log mujhe badi gali denge

Originally posted by: Choco.Swiss

Surati:Hahaha agar hum hai toh kya gum hai..But abhi iska book2 ka kuch pata nahi..Merey toh bohout sarey abhi bhi ont karna baki hai na...
1.Tu...tu hai wahi.
2.Compliated friends.
3.Wo uss kaamwali keh ss ka name bhool gayi🤣
4.I killes us..
Abh tu bol kounsa dscont karu.Complicated lover ko chor kar...I m confused.