OS:I Killed Us(dont worry,its a manveer os)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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**I Killed Us**
How does someone wake up and suddenly say,I
dont love you?
I still could come up with a logical reason,and that
bothered me the most.
How unemotional can someone become overnight?
How long does it take to realize you are happy? This question bothered me everyday.After i spoke
those unforgiving words to the love of my life.
~FLASHBACK~
Writter's Pov
She traced the strong outline of his cheekbone with
her finger as she gazed his chocolate brown eyes.The perfectly clear pools in the deep centers of
his eyes picked up and collected her gaze,as if
drowing her inside of his mind.I love his eye she
thought silently to herself as she pushed a blonde
strand of hair back from his forhead.She loved him
with all her heart and cared for him deeply. He reached up and touched her cheek
gently,wiping away a lonely teardrop that had
befun its journey from her wide black eyes.
"Uday"She began,her voice cracking faintly as
another tear made its way down her left cheek.
"Uday,pliz dont do this."A bolt of lightening flashed across the mid-night sky.Her heart pounded in her
chest as she waited nervously for his reply.
"Awww Manyta honey truth is hurts right?He said
smirking.
"And its true that i dont love you.I just use you
dear.He continued. Manyta's heart felt as though it bleeding inside her
chest.Never before in her life she had felt so hurt
and unloved.She dont knew that,this day come
when she was not prepared.Her heart ontinued to
break with every word that was spoken.
Another flash lightening and a roll of thunder helped to drown out the sound of her heart,which
she was almost positive he could hear,breaking.She
turned her back on him,biting her lip slightly to
keep herself togather long enough to end the
tension that had been building between them since
he said that he dont love her. He placed a hand on her shoulder.Still a smirk
placed on his lips.She shivered at his
touch,stepping away from him slightly so that his
hands was removed from her shoulder.Her eyes
flashed like lightening as she once again turned to
look at him.He could sense her anger with him without even looking into her face.Her lips
quivered as though she was trying to hold back
her tears at the same time.
She made a move as though to walk away again
and he cought her firmly by the wrist,pulling her
back and causing her to stumble slightly.Her anger and frustration finaly got to her as he did this,and
she hittinf hum square in the jest.Being that he was
much stronger then she was,the blow didn't effect
him.But gave him enough time to catch her other
wrist and shake her back to her senses while
maintaining a firm grip. "Where are you going jaan?Dont you want to spent
a night with YUVRAAJ UDAYVEER SINGH?"said
roughly but a bit sarcasticly.
"No yuvraaj Udayveer singh no,I dont want to
spent a night with a muderer"Manyta said angrily.
Uday was confused.Which was very well noticed by Manyata.
"What happened?confused ha?Awww u shouldn't
(sarcastily)
After all you YUVRAAJ UDAYVEER SINGH.The yuvraaj Udayveer singh who killed my Uday.Who killed me.Who killed us.Dont you?Manyta continued.
"Get lost n pliz never for god sake never come back"Uday said angrily.
"Will never Udayveer.I will never come bak to you"Manyta said.
Suddenly,a gigantic clap of thunder aused her to jump,the anger disappeared from her face.Uday's heart began to melt as her anger soften into tears in the blink of an eye.He silently let go of her wrist as he stepped away from her.
TIC TOC TIC TOC
12:00 AM
Manyta then looked at Uday and said
"Happy birthday Udayveer singh.May god bless you."With that she turned around and walked away.
...
Uv's Pov
Today after 5years when i saw you in that party I was just want to told you that i need you..I need you back in my life..I love you more then my life..I want to told you that how much i miss you.But i guess i was late.Now you are already belong to someone.It hurts me alot when you are in the arm of some other guy but not in the arm of mine.U are right i killed ur Uday.I killed you.I killed us...But...but i just hope you will forgive me..Today after 5 years long gap i will tell you that how much i love you..I will...I know for you i m a murderer.But for me we are still alive...
THE END

OK guys hope u like it.I know its not good enough.Actually its not my best.Humara sir dard jo kar raha hai...hehe:pbut still if you like it then
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Pliz dont throw anything on me..Aj hum mood mei nahi hai yaar..N one more thing the person is just Manyta's friend nothing else..so just chill🤣

Swinipriya
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chitra_rao thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice loved it so far, continue please 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it Continue Soon Dear!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tera koi barosa nhn ha melt butter sach sach bata yeh manveer OS ha ya giri or brij ki dostana OS ha jis ka manay kaha tha kay likho hahhahahah
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RESERVED.😈 REVENGE TIME.🤣 Lazy queen humari Update pe RESERVE lagana band karo warna hum tuhare naam ki Ghoshna karenge.😆
HUM DRAMAQUEEN HAIN LAZYQUEEN NAHI.😆
EDITED.:
NICE OS RESERVERS KI RANI.THANK GOD IT'S A MANVEER OS BUT NOT WITH A HAPPY ENDING.😉
GOOD JOB LAZYQUEEN AB HUM PAR BHI MEHARBAANI KAR DO RES KA BOARD HATAKAR.😆
GREAT WORK.👍🏼
THANKS FOR THE MANVEER OS.😉
🤗 🤗

Edited by Vasishtha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kamini tune isse sad end diya...chal jaa ab toh tere update pe comment hi nahi karungi...mujhe naa tujpe bilkul bharosa nahi hai kab kya karde kya pata.
Edited by swetsurati - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME THE WHOLE THING WAS LOVELY
YOUR OS ALWAYS ARE SUPRISES HAVE HAVE SAD ENDINGS
BUT BUT THEY ARE AWESOME TO READ
I LOVED THE WHOLE THING
I WISH MANVEER WERE TOGETHER BUT AGAIN IT WAS WRITTEN BY THE SWINIPRIYA😆
PLEASE WRITE MORE SWINI
REALLY I LOVED YOUR WRITING
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mujhe tujhper koi varosa nahi hai pata nahi tune keya kia hai. Kahi uday ko serial killer toh nahi bana diya
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jarin04

Mujhe tujhper koi varosa nahi hai pata nahi tune keya kia hai. Kahi uday ko serial killer toh nahi bana diya

jarin baby padhle...aur padh ke iss swini kamini ko khub galiya dena...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: swetsurati

jarin baby padhle...aur padh ke iss swini kamini ko khub galiya dena...

agar tu kehti hai then i'll read it but read karney ke bad swini ke sath tujhe vi galiya dene wali hu bc maine tere kehne pe read kiya. Soch le

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